~JJKN POETRY CONTEST 2006~ - Page 6

oh thats nice, md, we have got great writers on our forum 😃

thanks Jass di 🤗 ..lowed all the other entries 😃 👏

Moni di! Yours is just awesome! 👏 And each and every word is really true!Thanks for such a brilliant poetry! 😳

Hi!

I don't exactly belong to the JJKN forum, but i thought i'd try my hand at the competition just the same...

Here's my entry!

Singapore - Koi tumsa nahi

It's based on the singapore incident, (coz i thought it was supposed to be about an incident... 😳 )

She walked around with Nandu by her side,
And all her sorrow she tried to hide,
Because, however much she tried,
Armaan had not come along, she cried, she cried...

They were in a city like Singapore putting them in a trance,
But without Armaan, there wasn't love, no romance!
He was somewhere else, and she was alone
Without him, she was lost, her heart was torn

But then, she struck upon a great brainwave,
A makeover, of which she could return and rave,
Into the beaty salon she walked with fear,
And asked them to give her, a nice make-over

She was done, long time later
Ready for the world to see her
Ready to see the beauty and award her fame
But, alas! She looked exactly the same 😆

Originally posted by: Naughty_n_nice

Hi!

I don't exactly belong to the JJKN forum, but i thought i'd try my hand at the competition just the same...

Here's my entry!

Singapore - Koi tumsa nahi

It's based on the singapore incident, (coz i thought it was supposed to be about an incident... 😳 )

She walked around with Nandu by her side,
And all her sorrow she tried to hide,
Because, however much she tried,
Armaan had not come along, she cried, she cried...

They were in a city like Singapore putting them in a trance,
But without Armaan, there wasn't love, no romance!
He was somewhere else, and she was alone
Without him, she was lost, her heart was torn

But then, she struck upon a great brainwave,
A makeover, of which she could return and rave,
Into the beaty salon she walked with fear,
And asked them to give her, a nice make-over

She was done, long time later
Ready for the world to see her
Ready to see the beauty and award her fame
But, alas! She looked exactly the same 😆

Thats really great! But I hate your siggy!😆

Hehe 😆 My sig is a part of the Harry Potter Forum Member v/s Member... All of it, are separate dares.... 😆

-Sam 😊

Originally posted by: jassisuri

here goes, on lines of baa baa black sheep ,

black hater, black hater, are u a fool 😡
no js,no js i have 3 reasons to be cool 😕
one i had a white boyfriend 😉
two i married a white husband 😛
three i always wear white pants 😉

it is only for fun, no offense to anyone

i wanted to write more,but it would have made ss lovers sore

👏👏👏, Jassisuri, aap to SS to dudh se duli hai, charo taraf, white hee white nazar aata hai.

can we have more poetry please, come on members, each one write one 😳

Armaan Suri & Jasmeet Suri
They got married after loads of trouble
And over coming sabka fury
Now they have a lovely family
Ashish the son & Ashiana the daughter
Still their love is pure though jassi is ugly
She wears those specks & full slevees
Is it their mamma the poor kids find it hard to believe
Slowly they go and ask to dad
Why are you so hot and mom is bad?
Armaan is shocked and narrows his eyes
Explains your momz the best, she never fights
Children go crazy and run to uncle Raj
Asking for a makeover for their mom
As quick as possible before her specks go even large
Uncle Raj says looks doesnt matter
Jassi mamma cares for all and cooks even better
Children is teary and trashes all curry
Suddenly they remember Uncle Nandu
Who is known as sabka bandhu
Baffled kids ask Uncle nandu
We want mummy's makeover
You have to help us, as you are sabka bandhu
Nandu takes his glasses while beauty mami blushes
He tells the weepy kids
Your mom is the best, as she never beats
At last the kids pray to GOD
That their mummy turn beautiful and enemies go bald
God tells kids to close their eyes
Speak the truth and wipe all lies
Kids nod heads and sighs
God raises his magic wand
Ugly Jassi turned pretty and the kids thank God
The new Jassi couldn't cook and faught everyday
Ashish and Ashiana cried all day

the relation we share is so strange
there is a strong bond amongst us
no matter what the age 😛

we belong to different religions and places
we know we may never see each others faces
yet we dont hesitate to send heartfelt wishes 😳

we have views and opinions so different
at times we unknowingly even offend
but we have also become more tolerant 😉

we so often say 'i love you'
without even batting our eyelids
to person so elder and even bratty kids 😉

i remain grateful to this place
which gave me friends for life
and made me a bit more wise 😳