~JJKN POETRY CONTEST 2006~ - Page 9

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Posted: 19 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: doomed4eva

As darkness took over, I heard a light footstep at the door,
A flash of light came in along with which you appeared.
You smiled briefly as you came towards me,
And my heart skipped a beat as it got flooded with all the love that I had for thee.
You took me in your arms and cradled me with such tenderness,
I looked at those grey eyes of yours and soon, the tempest began.
Your skin tasted of wild honey,
And your lips triggered off a passion inside me.
I moved my fingers through the tousled hair of yours,
As you caressed my cheeks like a lion does to his little cubs.
When the wind blew in through the window fiercely,
I wrapped myself closer to you for that masculine security.
You looked into my eyes and nodded with reassurance,
As you locked your strong hands around me and loved me with all that gentleness.
I moaned out in joy as I knew you would never make me feel any pain,
But when you pronounced your love for me through a sweet whine,
I knew nothing in this world could ever stop you being mine.
As I rested my fingers upon your fine structured shoulders,
Dizziness took me over.
My head spun like a marble,
And I closed my eyes as I heard the thunder.
But within a split second I forced my eye lids open,
You were gone, and there was no storm outside.
I sat there on the carpet, all alone,
Thinking of your touch which still lingered.
I mumbled to myself that all these could have been true,
However, it was not your fault,
For a mere imagination cannot really make you into a real form.
You are a fictitious character in my mind,
Who is there to entertain my fantasies in the leisure that I find.


S@R@H

Thats brilliant Sarah! Its really good!😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: fan no 1 jjkn

Here is my poem dear friendz. I AM READY FOR TOMATO AND CHAPPAL.

Eating pizza sitting at dinning table

Mummy switch on TV to see the Cable

Suddenly listen Jassi Jaise Koi Nahi

Me went to watch the TV

Oh it was promotional advertisement

I thought again family drama oh its a punishment

Then first the day came and JJKN on air

I said wasting time by watching this wouldn't be fair

One day my family went for an invitation

I was alone feeling bore so switch on television

While scanning sony it was jjkn going on

I stopped, started watching having fun

First when I saw Jassi I became confused

Who knows one day she will make us proud

Slowly Slowly I became the regular viewer

Enjoying everything also when Jassi gets fire

Days went on and watching JJKN become my habit

if guests drop in home that time I am upset a bit

and keep on waiting when they will quit

Couldn't realize when JandA captured heart

Realized when I felt JandA should be apart

One day I missed the show

I was sad how could I let it go

Idea came why not search through internet

then I saw India forum so my idea was perfect

That time I was not a member

I was just a viewer before December

Than I opened my id fan no 1 jjkn

Started login everyday to enjoy the threads rain

It gave me so many friends & so much love

I felt lucky so much nice people together to have

Being part of the forum feeling a great

Through out my life which I will never forget

Rest all of you know

So please now let me go.

Love - Fan no. 1 JJKN

this is a great poem. well done such.👏

feeling like showering flowers on u.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#83
👏 wonderful,such, we want more 😃 aur liko, accha likthe ho 👏


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Posted: 19 years ago
#84
As the night dominated I looked at the sky
Waiting for someone, who told me would come when the moon is high
My heart loped fast when a car passed by
I ran towards the door and looked outside
None was there and my tears were unable to hide
Why didn't he come, did he tell all lies?
My Armaan never lied who would explain my teary eyes.

I took out the bracelet that he gifted me ones
Started recalling the moments which would never return
The thought of loosing him pinched my heart
And I sat quiescent as if lost my priceless part
I took his photo and hugged it tight
Prayed and hoped for a glimpse of his sight.

My breathing stopped when I felt him around
As I turned to look for him
He drew my hand and embraced me as if a beautiful dream
I surrendered my self in his mild cozy arms
Seemed like bliss when he whispered
"Do not fear my love, please smile as it never harms
I will be with you till there is the stars, moon and sun
World would know that JASSI IS ONLY MADE FOR ARMAAN"


~**Ananya**~
Edited by Apurva - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Apurva

As the night dominated I looked at the sky
Waiting for someone, who told me would come when the moon is high
My heart loped fast when a car passed by
I ran towards the door and looked outside
None was there and my tears were unable to hide
Why didn€™t he come, did he tell all lies?
My Armaan never lied who would explain my teary eyes.

I took out the bracelet that he gifted me ones
Started recalling the moments which would never return
The thought of loosing him pinched my heart
And I sat quiescent as if lost my priceless part
I took his photo and hugged it tight
Prayed and hoped for a glimpse of his sight.

My breathing stopped when I felt him around
As I turned to look for him
He drew my hand and embraced me as if a beautiful dream
I surrendered my self in his mild cozy arms
Seemed like bliss when he whispered
€œDo not fear my love, please smile as it never harms
I will be with you till there is the stars, moon and sun
World would know that JASSI IS ONLY MADE FOR ARMAAN€


~**Ananya**~

Anu - my appreciation for this poem will be so small reward for but I can say appreciation of life itself, becoming suddenly aware of the miracle of being alive on this planet when I read your poem, I was thinking how can turn what we call ordinary life into a miracle that's what I have seen in YOU. I come awake to such a realization when we recognize our connection to a spiritual dimension when I read your poem. Tumi satti Ananya. 👏👏👏

love u

Such


Edited by fan no 1 jjkn - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Apurva

As the night dominated I looked at the sky
Waiting for someone, who told me would come when the moon is high
My heart loped fast when a car passed by
I ran towards the door and looked outside
None was there and my tears were unable to hide
Why didn€™t he come, did he tell all lies?
My Armaan never lied who would explain my teary eyes.

I took out the bracelet that he gifted me ones
Started recalling the moments which would never return
The thought of loosing him pinched my heart
And I sat quiescent as if lost my priceless part
I took his photo and hugged it tight
Prayed and hoped for a glimpse of his sight.

My breathing stopped when I felt him around
As I turned to look for him
He drew my hand and embraced me as if a beautiful dream
I surrendered my self in his mild cozy arms
Seemed like bliss when he whispered
€œDo not fear my love, please smile as it never harms
I will be with you till there is the stars, moon and sun
World would know that JASSI IS ONLY MADE FOR ARMAAN€


~**Ananya**~

wow anu 👏

that was so wonderful

and i cant write a single line of poem😭

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Posted: 19 years ago
#87
Hey Friends this is my next poem but not the last

"...........
After getting Promotion
Jassi could not control her emotion
Her love for Armaan was eternal
With a Finance background like ledger & Journal
When Armaan told her to make false Balance sheet
Yes it was a punishment for Jassi indeed
She has no right to ask when a sorrow comes
But she made it for her dreams to be in Armaan's arms
Bashing of Maddy, Mallika and Aryan
She tolerated everything just for Armaan
Also she could have answered in return
But she knew one day her turn will come
Billo taught her Life is full of beauty
Only she has to deal with honesty
Jassi become the CEO of Gulmohar
Won everyone's heart with her behaviour
Given Gulmohar a business profit
Jassi as a CEO was really fit
And the day come in Armaan's life
He realised Jassi would be a perfect wife
He has changed his route of life
Started Notice the bumble bee, the small child
His dealing with Jassi became mild and mild
Poor Armaan could not disclose this to any one
In between Raj given him a plan
Unfortunately the written plan Jassi received
She was shuttered and feels being terribly deceived
Jassi left Gulmohar and Armaan
Went to Mauritius with Nandini mam
There She met Purab once who broken her heart
Who made commitment for marriage but had depart
Purab was never a bad man
He knows that Jassi loves only Armaan
There she learned how to love her herself
So many people helped her to forget the grief
She got new look even with braces and spec
Jassi looked beautiful with a saree that Purab gave
Here Armaan without Jassi almost become mad
Life become full of dark, he was always sad
Mallika said Jassi ditched Gulmohar and rumor spread
Billo been insulted & his feeling for Jassi became hatred
Same day night Jassi came back with new face
Seeing her father's reaction she went back in silence
Then the long awaited Day has come
Thrown away braces, spec new Jessica Bedi Born
Now Friends wait for my next Poem
B,coz that will be on Jassi and Armaan's Ahem Ahem

............."
Love you all - Such 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#88
Awwww its awesome Such. 👏 U write beautiful poems. I will be waiting for the ahem ahem one 😉 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#89
wow such the whole story of jjkn in a poem
wow wow wow

and it seems u me and anu r only ones online
ahhaa
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Posted: 19 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: chatterbox

wow such the whole story of jjkn in a poem
wow wow wow

and it seems u me and anu r only ones online
ahhaa

Di just wait for my next poem

that will be based on JandA Ahem Ahem😉

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