arshi ff: without you... #3, chapters 28 - epilogue **completed**

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Posted: 10 years ago

#781

Originally posted by: shiv456
Amazing update

thank you, shiv... glad you enjoyed.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#782

Originally posted by: mpuhan
it was so emotional to read the first meet of Arnav and Roshni. But I believe it will give arnav a closure as he saw his maa smiling in the eyes of his niece. And finally some real happiness for anjali.

hi mpuhan,

i am glad you liked the chapter. the emotions in this are so deep, thick and full of nuance, connecting back to way back when in the lives of asr and anjali, it was very interesting to write about... exhausting too. see you soon.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Archu61
What a journey we go through all his and his sister expectations ,their grief and how he transmits his rage and despair to khushie who can sense that something is on its way but out of all that tunnel of darkness their comes a ray of light ,bringing with it hope ,in the name of Roshini ,

so glad you felt the journey, archu... hope it was satisfying and a sense of destination there in it. without you has been quite a trip for me too... thank you for coming along. see you.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: dumas
Awesome update finally Arnav meets Roshni hope it will give him some sort of closure so cute Khushi not knowing how to answer mami about the dress and Anajli getting better awesome update thanks for the pm.

thank you so much, dumas... and that picture, from one of the best episodes... ipk, something else, na. so glad you liked the chapter.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: cinthiann1758
There is a movie that John worked on called, For Love of the Game, (www.imdb.com/title/tt0126916/)... with Kelly Preston and one of my favorites Kevin Costner. In this movie there is a scene where Jane (KP) knocks on the door of pitcher Billy Chapel's(KC) spring training house in Miami as a surprise...He is in a precarious situation but when he opens the door he says to Jane..."Jane no matter what happens in the next few minutes, I want you to know that when I opened this door my heart leapt..."
Why I am saying this...because as I was reading the joyous reuiniting of Roshni to her Chachi or Mamaji, Arnav, not sure which it is...MY HEART LEAPT!!!! and I took a breath...I had too! I could see her drool filled hand resting on his cheek as he swooped her up. My G-d, I don't think the butterflies have left me even as I write this. Beautifully done.👏
Oh how I feel for Khushi...it is hard when you have telepathy...have I ever told you about John and mine? It is crazy, uncanny, unsettling at times but in the same breath it can be full of peace and a connection that fills you with warmth of their presence...their essence... as if they are standing right beside you when things are fine or with a random thought.
I know what she must be feeling ...the worry...and what it takes for her to send out her vibrational love energy to him...Mein hoon na...I am here.
Love how you write Mamiji!
I look forward to the reunite.
Thank you my dear friend for writing...you give me great pleasure...I may need to visit...is there a place nearby...a cottage...somewhere we can go and write together? ...sigh...dreaming...on paper..

wow. did you really feel it like that? okay. won't fudge. i felt that roshni scene in my toes, in my inner gut, in my throat... and hoped i had chosen the right words. and the right amount of words. she was standing there in the doorway... i should tell you, she also had thick black kohl in her eyes as many indian kids do... supposed to be good for the eyes, this home made kohl.

i will see that scene you speak of, of course, and grin thinking my dear cyn felt this intensely while reading my fan fiction. vain am i, sir.

so you have this telepathy with john? i feel when you really connect with someone, it sort of becomes part of that relationship. sometime when jacob travelled and i was worried sick because i couldn't get through i'd really do an all systems shut down and ask myself calmly, what i thought... was all well? the answer always came... i do sometimes have this telepathy with him... i of course always know when the phone rings if it is him or not... but i think you have a stronger vibe maybe? interesting, isn't it... how much the spirit side of us perceives and acts.

see ya soon... yes, let's run away and write.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: bluesky10
Amazing update
Don't have w to say
It was mindblowing
Thanks for your pm
Happy New year

hi bluesky,

thank you so much. aww... i am so so glad you were touched by this chapter. see you soon.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#787

Originally posted by: ranogill
loved it ...awesome story

thank you, ranogill, i am so happy you enjoyed the story. you've read without you from the beginning, i appreciate your staying on and all the patience, i am not the world's most regular updater. thank you.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: 1chilly
That was such an awww moment!
Arnav and Roshni!
He saw a glimpse of his mother in her.
Mama and bhanji will have a special relationship, thats for sure.
Now I can't wait for Anjali's reaction to the little girl.
The daughter she thought dead, has resurrected like a phoenix.
She'll be delighted.
And what about the nurse?
Hope she finds a place with the Raizadas, so that she canbe close to Roshni.

Both your stories are nearing their end.
I do hope you'll start a new one soon.
Waiting here!

hi 1chilly... so glad roshni and asr was good for you... i have been thinking of this child for awhile. then she presented herself and just was roshni... i am always surprised at what comes out of the mind... thank you so much for reading both my stories. i hope to see them to their end safely and then take a break... should another story come along... i will ha ha be back... kaun rokega mujhe. wonderful to know, you'll be waiting...

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: eishe10
fantastic😉

thank you so much, eishe... see you.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: hajr
Anjali is going to be so happy her child is alive
Awesome

hi hajr, yes, anjali will have her baby wit h her soon... i feel happy. thanks so much for reading and being here all through the past months... see you soon.