arshi ff: without you... #3, chapters 28 - epilogue **completed**

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ranogill

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Posted: 10 years ago

#771

loved it ...awesome story

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1chilly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#772

That was such an awww moment!

Arnav and Roshni!

He saw a glimpse of his mother in her.

Mama and bhanji will have a special relationship, thats for sure.

Now I can't wait for Anjali's reaction to the little girl.

The daughter she thought dead, has resurrected like a phoenix.

She'll be delighted.

And what about the nurse?

Hope she finds a place with the Raizadas, so that she canbe close to Roshni.

Both your stories are nearing their end.

I do hope you'll start a new one soon.

Waiting here!

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256748

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Posted: 10 years ago

#773

Anjali is going to be so happy her child is alive

Awesome

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archmink

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Posted: 10 years ago

#774

that is very uniquely you have described how they both can feel each other being miles away... now that is what I call a true love a true soul mate... and you have described them both to the T...
and awwweee he holding his 'di's ' child first time in his hand ... his miniature di... part of him... ma...
that was very emotional... I wander what that nurse will do... after all she saved that child's life even though she took money to kill the baby... would he hire her as a child's nanny... I hope not that would be like playing with fire,,,,
I really liked the part
looking forward to see how he is going to introduce the baby to the family member specially to Anjali...
mother and child's reunion...

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mayurisb80

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Posted: 10 years ago

#775

He meets roshini...his dis princess. ..his neice ...who

was lost to them...but now he has her in his hands. .what will he do...take her away or let the mother who saved that tiny life keep her. ...oh what a tangled web life weaves...and kushi they feel each other even when far...love...

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#776

Absolutely beautiful ending indi di. my world just lit up imagining ASR holding his di's drool covered baby girl high up. very very sweet and uplifting.

So there was telepathy this chapter. And he reads the art of war while sleeping. if I wasn't busy drooling over him then I would be highly maternal towards him. angtsy broody angry loving dashing perfect hero of ours..

most beautiful dadi of the world and her hand flapping was wonderfully described, but if she ends up giving away that red dress to any girl, Arnavji and I will be having isserious words with her.

Oh and when you said Krishna poster I immediately conjured a bal gopal for some reason. now am going to read why he is depicted blue. I vaguely recollect a story behind that.

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javeria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#777

Res,

Will unres soon

P.S. The banner is beautiful

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nisha_mehta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#778

Khushi is very worried about arnav.

Arnav has finally found little roshni.

Continue soon

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supervin76

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Posted: 10 years ago

#779

Roshini! How apt! Such a lovely choice of name for a little wonder who will light up the lives of her mother Anjali, mama Arnav and Mami Khushi. All the names in this story are so apt and descriptive of the people who carry them. I don't know of the serial writers meant for them To be that way, but Indi, you have provided them that extra dimension which makes these characters much more interesting and so so attractive. I simply can't thank you enough for writing two wonderful stories and keeping the magical world of Arnav and Khushi alive.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#780

Originally posted by: ammavedu80
Nice one
Finally he got anjali child
Anjali world be very happy knowing about the child
She deserve happinesss

hi ammavedu, yes, anjali does deserve a break... it's been tough for her all her life... i am glad the story allowed me to get here with a certain grace. thank you so much.