arshi ff: without you... #3, chapters 28 - epilogue **completed**

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Posted: 10 years ago

#791

Originally posted by: archmink
that is very uniquely you have described how they both can feel each other being miles away... now that is what I call a true love a true soul mate... and you have described them both to the T...
and awwweee he holding his 'di's ' child first time in his hand ... his miniature di... part of him... ma...
that was very emotional... I wander what that nurse will do... after all she saved that child's life even though she took money to kill the baby... would he hire her as a child's nanny... I hope not that would be like playing with fire,,,,
I really liked the part
looking forward to see how he is going to introduce the baby to the family member specially to Anjali...
mother and child's reunion...

hi archmink,
thank you so much. i am so happy you enjoyed the chapter so much. i am thinking of urmila jana too... wondering where she goes from here. it si tricky... though she is the one to have saved roshni, in a sense given her life... let's see. yes, roshni will meet her mother soon... i hope it all comes out well...
see you soon.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: mayurisb80
He meets roshini...his dis princess. ..his neice ...who
was lost to them...but now he has her in his hands. .what will he do...take her away or let the mother who saved that tiny life keep her. ...oh what a tangled web life weaves...and kushi they feel each other even when far...love...

hi mayuri, thanks for reading. yes he stands at a strange juncture... it has joy and wonder in it but many other nuances too... the sharpest, keenest feeling will guide him i guess.. let's see. they do feel each other... more and more with every passing day... see you soon.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: avchowdhury
Very nice

thank you, avchowdhury... i am glad you enjoyed, i appreciate your reading without you and leaving your comments here.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: aarwen
Absolutely beautiful ending indi di. my world just lit up imagining ASR holding his di's drool covered baby girl high up. very very sweet and uplifting.
So there was telepathy this chapter. And he reads the art of war while sleeping. if I wasn't busy drooling over him then I would be highly maternal towards him. angtsy broody angry loving dashing perfect hero of ours..

most beautiful dadi of the world and her hand flapping was wonderfully described, but if she ends up giving away that red dress to any girl, Arnavji and I will be having isserious words with her.

Oh and when you said Krishna poster I immediately conjured a bal gopal for some reason. now am going to read why he is depicted blue. I vaguely recollect a story behind that.

hi rhea,
thank you so much for that lovely comment. i am thrilled you enjoyed teh ending.

but ee ka hui gawa... you feeling maternal toward hero ji? mata rhea... he is hot angsty never lets up always wears gorgeous suits cracks problems is wealthy handsome funny nasty angry... still feeling amma like?😆

yeah bootiphool is dadi dear... nahiin, not touching red dress..

i steer clear of religious stuff unless it has significance and a story that started with hai re nand kissore, where the chief villain was named after the flute player, where even the dhobi was banwari and the imaginary boyfriend was bankeylal, where the hero was arjun like focussed on his duty his dharma, for which he acted and even erred, and who at times showed shades of the ultimate lover, where there was ankh micholi played between hero and heroine, and games of all sorts transpired, and where the story of janmashtami was told so beautifully, in that story, when a child who should have died, doesn't... somehow krishna has to be there... don't you think?

i am getting ready for anjali meeting roshni. wish e=me luck, sir. and no, you do not have a single maternal instinct, samjhi tum.

thanks for noticing the details.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#795

Originally posted by: asha_mehta
Khushi is very worried about arnav.
Arnav has finally found little roshni.
Continue soon

hi asha_mehta... thank you for reading... yes, important part of story... will update this weekend, see you.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#796

Originally posted by: supervin76
Roshini! How apt! Such a lovely choice of name for a little wonder who will light up the lives of her mother Anjali, mama Arnav and Mami Khushi. All the names in this story are so apt and descriptive of the people who carry them. I don't know of the serial writers meant for them To be that way, but Indi, you have provided them that extra dimension which makes these characters much more interesting and so so attractive. I simply can't thank you enough for writing two wonderful stories and keeping the magical world of Arnav and Khushi alive.

supervin, thank you and i am so touched by what you say. she is light, the name just came... simple but with significance... yes, all the names in ipk have a brearing on the characters... i think this is by design... from that pov... manorama... 😆... deadly.

i fell in love with a tv serial and its lead pair without ever really meaning to... i guess the stories come from that emotion i have in me. thank you for liking my stories. i hope i have always kept khushi and asr intact and in their essence. they mean much. and what you say, i am shaking my head and going all emotional. hello hi bye bye. thank you.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#797

So beautiful ! Arnav has finally found peace with Roshni. I hope anjali is able to take it well.

It feels so nice to read how Khushi connects with Arnav on a mental level. Always there when he needs her !

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Posted: 10 years ago

#798

Originally posted by: ..ASR.lover..
Interesting update...

hi asr.lover,

thanks for reading.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: rati123
So beautiful ! Arnav has finally found peace with Roshni. I hope anjali is able to take it well.

It feels so nice to read how Khushi connects with Arnav on a mental level. Always there when he needs her !

hi rati,

so glad you connected with the chapter... i enjoyed trying to find the moments and the feelings.