arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#581

I have never felt like touching ASR so much ever!

This is what your new chapter did to me Indi!

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Iqra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#582

he is back...promise me, don't get back from your words

he is finally here for his khushi. mesmerized chapter, the way she traced his face, to feel him, to make sure he is there, he is come back for her.

beautifully

red sarree, the fall and ASR catch ...kia yad dilya dia..ab dekna parega scene

wheneven they look into each other eyes, they always forget outside world they are in theor own world.

wonderful update

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#583

Originally posted by: wiwy
I have never felt like touching ASR so much ever!

This is what your new chapter did to me Indi!

ummm, wiwy... so happy you felt things on your digits... can ya imagine writing that... the chances of just vaporizing very high. 😆... thanks, sir. i presume you are happy with the chapter effect... 🤗

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#584

Originally posted by: MUNIRANI
its my humble request that in future you be aware of goraphy before copping your subject form european novels

sorry, munirani, i didn't get that. copy? this is entirely something written by me. however, if there are similarities with some other novel... that is purely by chance. do not please make such allegations, since they are unfounded.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#585

Originally posted by: MUNIRANI
may i know which country they arr residing in. Because in the 1st part u had written APRIL DIZZEL
Which i can not still now undersand that wether they are in India or some other country.

they live in india... april showers are common here in many parts. hope this helps... also i have mentioned delhi... which is in india.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#586

Originally posted by: ENLIGHTENED1
lovely

thanks so much, enlightened1. appreciate it.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#587

Originally posted by: -LiveCrazily-
he is back...promise me, don't get back from your words
he is finally here for his khushi. mesmerized chapter, the way she traced his face, to feel him, to make sure he is there, he is come back for her.
beautifully

red sarree, the fall and ASR catch ...kia yad dilya dia..ab dekna parega scene
wheneven they look into each other eyes, they always forget outside world they are in theor own world.

wonderful update

hi livecrazily,

thanks, sir. hope you saw the red saree scene 😳. i really enjoyed writing about the two of them and am so happy it was liked by all of you. see you soon...

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#588

Dips told me and I came running to see what you guys are talking about!

One thing Indi. I have read each of your chapters more than once and in multiple cases, have read half only and again gone back to read from the start. Such is the power of your words .. I agree 110% with Rashmi Di.

And that thing about love .. what else can I say. You have said it all.

Hugs to all three of you! 🤗

Edited by Omoraboti - 12 years ago

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DurgaS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#589

Originally posted by: indi52
durga, 🤗

thanks so so much. for that up there in pink bold, you made my day.

was he searching for his mum all along? what do you think? i don't know. i took cues from what i know of him. the nightmares don't go away... a lot of unresolved pain in him... the sudden death of both parents, especially his beloved maa... it's trapped in him. sometimes lying low, suddenly raging high... what if this strange space of coma allowed him to experience something which our too rational world never does. especially people like him... tethered to their rational selves... the people who instinctively trust their dimag more than dil... because dil has been badly bruised at a tender age. how difficult it was for him to even consider the "star" idea if khushi's. i wonder what all releases in him after that "meeting" with maa. when life challenges us in unthinkable ways we learn sometimes to see beyond and sense more than the here and now, the solid, unyielding almost unimaginative reality that holds us. we are willing to see. in such a state he senses something. i want to see where it takes him.

love your last line. the 14 year old in him is still wanting to trust, to love...little boy, yes.

Hi, I am back with my second edition of comments. Always feel that there is still something left that I wanted to say. The above bold, so true. When we feel we are right, believe in our stands, something happens to put the scenario in a new light and we are left to question our own beliefs.

Noticed that in my earlier comment I mentioned the third part as the second part, wondered how, wanted to correct, then let it be. Because, for me the flow of the pallu merged both parts of past and present. And the same pallu kept flowing in the last part which Arnav managed to catch on to and pull.

Reading the other responses to the chapter, everyone ecstatic that he has come back. I wasn't, because I always knew he would be back, it was the question of when and how. Was really happy to read the how, the tug of the pallu, the jaa rahi ho, so IPK, it couldn't have been any other way. 😃

So, ASR has been brought home for better security and the family has decided not to talk about the Shyam factor in front of him. Interesting to know where this will lead to.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#590

Originally posted by: Omoraboti
Dips told me and I came running to see what you guys are talking about!

One thing Indi. I have read each of your chapters more than once and in multiple cases, have read half only and again gone back to read from the start. Such is the power of your words .. I agree 110% with Rashmi Di.

And that thing about love .. what else can I say. You have said it all.

Hugs to all three of you! 🤗

thanks, farha,

ok, i am miserable at accepting praise... you know how it is... self doubt is my basic instinct and means of survival... but when you say it the way you do... i can't help but feel absolutely thrilled. i do hope you really enjoy... you know, i often wonder if in our busy lives if there's any time for this. but then the mad urge to write comes, and i forget everything... when someone reads and says they had fun or felt something... it's the greatest reward... i don't need to but that bottega anymore hyuk.

hugs back, dips is a cutie and rashmi left me feeling so damn good.

i am so glad i decided to take the plunge and write ishtory, for the happy lolling pleasure of these conversations. and now madam, d and d needs a six letter word with second letter p. loads of hugs.