arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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cheesemad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#561

Originally posted by: indi52
^^^ hi komal,

you are here and happy... that's lovely., thanks, sir. dream? now stop giving me ideas,, you guys 😆 i finally have him speaking in husky tones, brown eyes glittering, think i'm gonna let that go?

hey, so glad you enjoyed. hoping to update midweek, do come back and see whether it was for real or not... 😳

hawww we gave u the idea!?

sorry sorry lakho sorry...now forget this idea and give our ASR back...

lots of kisses n hugs in advance😉

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Devilways

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Posted: 12 years ago

#562

Woohooo.. He's up!

Finally. The story is amazing. The quotes to your memories to t reality is perfect!

Thanks for the pm. Update soon

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#563

Originally posted by: asha_mehta
Simply superb...jusr finished reading all the parts
Continue soon

hi asha (may i call you that?)

thank you so much and welcome to without you. lovely to see a new reader enjoying herself. will update soon and pm you.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#564

Originally posted by: cheesemad

hawww we gave u the idea!?
sorry sorry lakho sorry...now forget this idea and give our ASR back...
lots of kisses n hugs in advance😉

hyuk, yes, komal, one numbers very alive and kicking asr coming up. mwaa mwaahs back.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#565

Originally posted by: Devilways
Woohooo.. He's up!
Finally. The story is amazing. The quotes to your memories to t reality is perfect!
Thanks for the pm. Update soon

thanks, devilways,

yes, he's up... i am so relieved, it was terrible without him... 😳. will update and pm. see you.

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Preety_woman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#566

🥳Indi Di

Love you ,you made my day... Yes my love is back ...🤗🤗

I felt Khushi's pain...but she brought him back👍🏼

Thnx Di ❤️

Di I was thinking what you last time said and thought may be you want him to go closer to his mother as before reaching to his Khushi his head was on the car steering and he said maa...that was the moment I felt he wanted his maa and this accident can take him closer to her...I was discussing with Arshi Di a long time ago and she has her POV .I want yours.Plz

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Arnav_Khushifan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#567

indrani not fair. I am reading this last update and just crying. I have not finished reading it because what you wrote is so emotional and beautiful that I am totally overwhelmed. I hope that at the end of the chapter he is going to wake up. You have simply imortalized their love and I just love the way you have remembered their conversation about what is love between them. How even when they are apart and what they feel etc. God I am rambling. I want to kiss your hands Indrani you have written one of the most beautiful heart wrenching love story of Arnav and Khushi. I am going to read the rest now. Just wanted to share with you what I felt as I was reading this last update. Thank you for sharing with us.

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Arnav_Khushifan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#568

indrani thank you. You totally rock as my teenager would say !!! I went back and continued reading chapter 8 and I am at loss for words. The whole story so far has been amazing and the last chapter totally totally amazing. Yeh I know I am repeating myself like a parrot. I luv the fact that Arnav saw his mother and once again she came to his rescue and gentally guided him back to his real KHUSHI , his HAMESHA. So beautifully written. Your description of ASR and how Khushi was talking to him just superb. And the last part where he held her back like the first kiss by the pool, at their wedding when he came back, when she was leaving him for AArav and now so like him. So glad you listened to your husband and daughter and to a lot of us. Aab ja ke dil ko toda chen mila hai. thanks for sharing your story. looking forward to the next part.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Arnav_Khushifan
indrani not fair. I am reading this last update and just crying. I have not finished reading it because what you wrote is so emotional and beautiful that I am totally overwhelmed. I hope that at the end of the chapter he is going to wake up. You have simply imortalized their love and I just love the way you have remembered their conversation about what is love between them. How even when they are apart and what they feel etc. God I am rambling. I want to kiss your hands Indrani you have written one of the most beautiful heart wrenching love story of Arnav and Khushi. I am going to read the rest now. Just wanted to share with you what I felt as I was reading this last update. Thank you for sharing with us.

rashmi,

i am touched and thrilled and all embarrassed to read this... you really liked it so much? awww. thanks so much, dear one, it's always scary to write fiction, then yo get a comment like this and you feel what the... must write more. i have this thing for asr khushi... they do bring to all of us in a popular daily soap something that is getting increasingly lost in this world where material wealth has become the thing to chase and define yourself by, experience life through... i am talking of love, of course. the idea of love being central in our search for a meaningful life. a love that feels gives takes goes through everything raves rants laughs cries makes our heart beats stronger makes our ordinary lives special and worth it.

asr khushi... they are so damn special and needed. thanks and thanks so much for your every word. and please don't cry... bothers me... har baar 😃.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Arnav_Khushifan
indrani thank you. You totally rock as my teenager would say !!! I went back and continued reading chapter 8 and I am at loss for words. The whole story so far has been amazing and the last chapter totally totally amazing. Yeh I know I am repeating myself like a parrot. I luv the fact that Arnav saw his mother and once again she came to his rescue and gentally guided him back to his real KHUSHI , his HAMESHA. So beautifully written. Your description of ASR and how Khushi was talking to him just superb. And the last part where he held her back like the first kiss by the pool, at their wedding when he came back, when she was leaving him for AArav and now so like him. So glad you listened to your husband and daughter and to a lot of us. Aab ja ke dil ko toda chen mila hai. thanks for sharing your story. looking forward to the next part.

ha, rashmi, rockstar, blush blush. thanks again for this comment... i am also relieved that his eyes have opened. i wanted to see if i could bring myself to kill him off... really couldn't. bas. no idea how anyone could have come up with that thought so early in asr khushi's life. see you soon🤗.