Ashlok FF - You've Won My Heart! (Chapter 10 updated on page 138) - Page 82

Originally posted by: Sam_15

Btw Aisha have u read chapter 9 yet?

Originally posted by: Sam_15

Well in this case it's not the matter of habit. She had been occupying his thoughts lately...whether those were pleasant or unpleasant thoughts, that's arguable. Besides, lately her attitude and behaviour with him has been puzzling him as he is unable to understand the reason behind it. Wouldn't u expect the same reaction even if they are not yet habitual of it? 😊

i understand that😆smtimes i start searching for ff updates in my sleep🤣

Thanks...phew it's nice to know someone else is understanding ur thought process because in stories u sometimes can't convey the message directly 😃 Yes he is confused regarding all the matters related to Astha because of the drastic change in her attitude. So he can't help being bothered with it 😉

Thanks 😳

You are a fab writer⭐️

Nuthead finally saw light😆

@underlined 🤣 I said that becuase if he cant see that while she is always infront of him,hez got to be blind😆

Like I said she occupies his mind pretty much all the time 😉😃

Well bringing romance at this point will be too early and look unnatural. But rest assured I have started to build up towards it 😃

Oh u think it's a diary? How can u be sure? 😈

Because I cant think of anything else that she wants to hide frm him! Perhaps a collage of their childhood photos?

Could be.. 😉

Aww thanks 😃 That was my favourite part of this chapter 😆

mine too😳

It was. I made it extra long to compensate for updating after a long time

😃

It's ok. U compensated for it with ur long comment 😃 I am smart enough😉

It was starting to feel like too long a fiction to be SS. So I changed it to FF.

Yeah Meerab made the banner 😃 She surprised me with it. Got few more. Will use them for my next chapter.

Will try to update next chapter by next weekend 😊

I had told you ealier itself! what a great sixth sense I have👏😆

Wow that's long comment 😲 Didn't expect this much from u...looks like u r competing with Suri 😆😆 But honestly speaking initially, before reading ur comment, I was taken aback by ur comment coz I thought they were all ur words but later I realised that u copy and pasted some of the bits from my update 😆😆

But loved reading ur thoughts. Thanks Aishu 🤗

Originally posted by: Zehra.

*unreserved*
Let me first do my victory dance
yeah done 😆 now coming back to the update 😳😳
Loveddd the update sam 👏👏
Shlok and astha trying to act normal in front of others !! Pretty hard for both of them 😆😆
aww poor shlok making excuses to avoid the after marriage parties ...
the cutesttt part where he actually tries to justify his action of letting astha sleep on the bed !!! 😳
the washroom scene 😆 Shlok as usual leaves no chance to annoy wifey but caught in his own plans :P
astha blushing !! 😳
and then the hilarious part where she continuously pokes needle while sewing the button !! i so knew she would do that but didnot expect shlok to get annoyed !! astha rocked 👏
so swati makes her re -entry shlok was so mean here ... turning the speaker on just so that astha feels jealous while listening to their so called conversation 😡
and what is swati's surprise ??? 😕 reveal it naa yaaar ... aur kitna suspense 😉
This time Shlok clearly saw the pain reflecting on her face. For some reason, this didn't make Shlok feel as satisfied as he thought it would. In fact he felt restless. Some part of his conscious was feeling guilty.
So has she started winning his heart or he is just feeling bad for his friend ?? 😛
Precap : Sooperr excitedd ... can't wait to read the next one 😉

P.S, Update soon or me and suri are ready 😈

Originally posted by: Aishaa3

tonight suar😃

btw aint I smart?😉 w.r.t the cment😎

Originally posted by: Aishaa3

Originally posted by: Sam_15

Wow another long wala comment 😃 Aaj kal log kitna meherban ho rahe hain mujh pe 😆

Thank you so much Zehra 🤗 Now let me do the victory dance because u loved the update so much

Hehe...to be honest I didn't think people wud like this update much compared to last one. But happy to see they did 😃 I guess like Aisha I too have a tendency to doubt my abilities 😳😳

The needle part was my favourite part too. It may sound sad and weird I was laughing while actually writing it as I was imagining the whole thing in my head 😆😆

I agree Shlok was being mean in the last part and I wouldn't justify his actions at all because his characterization is such. But all I wud say is that he just doesn't realise how much he hurts her by his actions. As Aisha put it very aptly, he is a nuthead 😆 Very ignorant at times! That's why sometimes he comes across as mean and selfish. Besides, right now they are at a phase where Shlok would do whatever it takes to make her angry and jealous.

Abt Swati's surprise, I am saving it for when he will return to mumbai. Sorry but u will have to wait 😳 Enjoy Ashlok till then...who knows they might not live together for long 😉

Whether she is winning his heart or he is feeling bad for a friend, u will have to wait for it to unfold and then decide for urself 😉

Haha...precap!! Knew u guys wuld be excited after reading the precap 😆 But let me know what are u hoping for.

Thanks once again 😃 Loved reading ur thorough review 😆 Keep such comments coming!! 😆 I know I am being greedy, right? 😆😳

Abt the next update, well as usual I will update it on the weekend 😊

Originally posted by: Sam_15

OMG Zehra, just realised my reply to ur comment is at least as long as ur reply 🤣