Ashlok FF - You've Won My Heart! (Chapter 10 updated on page 138)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Everyone🤗

I am here with my first ever fiction😳😆I have never in my entire life wrote a story unless it was for academic purpose. This is the first time I am trying my hands at writing a fiction. And it is all because of my friends who inspired me esp. Ayesha😉

So here I am with the prologue of my SS that I am going to start😊It won't have many parts but it really depends on how the story will shape up😃


It took a moment for her brain to process what he was saying. She could not believe her ears...how could this be possible? Could it be a horrible joke? Or perhaps she simply misunderstood? But something in his voice told her that it wasn't...that every word of his was true. As soon as she reached this conclusion she felt as if splinter was pierced in her heart. Her world came crashing down. All her hopes, dreams and wishes were shattered in a matter of few seconds. The immense shock was quickly numbing her senses. She was standing motionless, unaware of her surroundings. She could feel her hands shaking which were tightly holding on to the phone. He was still speaking on the other end, perhaps calling her but she could not get herself to respond.


So guys let me know how you find it. I will be waiting for your comments and your feedback😊

I would like to thanks all my friends here, esp. those who encouraged me to start writing🤗as well as all the writers here who inspired me with their wonderful stories😳😃


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TomNJerry... thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congratulations sam🥳 and best of luck for ur first work👍🏼...

And about the prologue...

Beautifully written👏👏👏👏...
Please update next part soon...eagerly waiting for ur story😳😳😳...

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Woah! Your first ever SS...and it's already sounding great!👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: meerab...

Congratulations sam🥳 and best of luck for ur first work👍🏼...

And about the prologue...

Beautifully written👏...
Please update next part soon...eagerly waiting for ur story...

Thank you so much Meerab 🤗 Hope I can interest you with my story because you yourself is such an amazing writer 😳😳 Will try to update soon 😊
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Originally posted by: .Farah.

Woah! Your first ever SS...and it's already sounding great!👏

Thank you so much Farah 🤗 I am glad you liked it 😃
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Originally posted by: Sam_15

Thank you so much Meerab 🤗 Hope I can interest you with my story because you yourself is such an amazing writer 😳😳 Will try to update soon 😊

Thanks dear but honestly u r already a gr8 writer and i know ur story will be just awesome👍🏼
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Great start
Loved it
Please pm me 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: meerab...

Thanks dear but honestly u r already a gr8 writer and i know ur story will be just awesome👍🏼

Aw thank you...means a lot coming from you 😳
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Originally posted by: ruhakhan

nice start

do continue soon

Thanks 😳 Yup will update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Efinah36

Great start
Loved it
Please pm me 😉

Thanks 😳 Sure I will 😊

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