Ashlok FF - You've Won My Heart! (Chapter 10 updated on page 138) - Page 80

Originally posted by: Aishaa3

He darted his eyes across the room, searching for her but she was nowhere in the room

Wow usually after waking up ppl look around for things they are habitual to...Shlok is already seraching for Astha?😉

He was unable to comprehend the cause behind his annoyance

He is as confused as I am!😆kidding...I loved how you are potraying the uneasiness of Shlok in matters related to Astha...when he shoudnt have bothered actualy!

She was clad in a maroon chiffon saree with white crystal and beads work all over it, and off-white roses embroidered on its border which added glitter to its beauty. The saree was enhancing her slim figure, highlighting the curves of her body. It was the first time he was seeing her in a saree and a realisation was dawning on him that just how mistaken he was about Astha.

this part I was lost in the saree!😳How awwwsmly detailed!⭐️

She wasn't just attractive, she was strikingly beautiful and at the moment in the saree she was looking every bit graceful and elegant that anyone can appear

Nuthead finally saw light😆

Shlok couldn't help throwing her a glance every once in a while😲

I doubt after they got married Shlok atleast once thought abt Swati😆

He was just a few feet away from the book when he heard a tiny click and saw the door of the washroom open. Astha came out wiping her face with a towel

You drowned my hopes here!😆I was hoping for some accidental romance😉But anyway u are really hatke...will give u some time to get there😛 The diary ahaan Asthas love nest confession😃 C'mon Shlok steal it asap n feel damn guilty...well but he couldnt🥱

Besides, I can always find out later, he thought, his mind already scheming.

Yeah looks like instead of goin to work now Shlok is going to visit his Sasumas place😉

"You might not be a sore loser but I am sure there is going to be something else sore tonight.🤣

wooow loved this😆Tit-for-tat Shlok you sooo deserve it! the kavya Astha part was sooo cute sweet wonderful and everything😳😳 I can totaly feel it happening!

Was it just I or the update was longgg?😃

Sorry for the SUPER late unres...😊

Woahh Its an FF now😃🥳Superb banner i guess Meerab😳 Updte part 10 sooon😛

you are writing biographies too?

ashlok moments were cute.loved it

Superb update 😊
Tfd pm 😳

sam nice update..did i made u remember swati? Dont tell me swati gonna say iam preg or something like that..or she gonna confess her love..?shlok making astha jealous..he deserves all the poking while stiching..that was a cute scene..ur updates r neat n clear.,able to imagine the scenes while reading..love to read more of ur writing..thanks for the pm..

Hi..sam...finally u updated and am late to read😆

Originally posted by: Zehra.

btw sam even i didn't recieve a PM 😆

Originally posted by: AshesToDustPM

Suri dint get one too...a PM.

Originally posted by: ...Ayesha...

neither did i

there was some problem i guess 😕

Originally posted by: AshesToDustPM

Suri dint get one too...a PM.

awesome update Sam
loved it
the needle poking is superb
nice precap
continue soon
thanks for the pm