Ashlok FF - You've Won My Heart! (Chapter 10 updated on page 138) - Page 83

Originally posted by: Zehra.

and my reply to your reply is also long 😆😆 sorry for annoying u

Originally posted by: Zehra.

ab aisaa lush likhogii toh comment karne waala bhi likhta hii jaayega 😉
you're under estimating yourself sweetie coz u write beyond amazing 👏
the besttt part while reading any update is if u could connect to it and an imaginary scene is created in your mind and thants when a story clicks me 😊 yours is one of them which i can actually imagine
nuthead ?? perfect description 😆 his character is supposed to be like that after all he is SHLOK 😳
u now know that i am very impatient any waiting is not my type but will wait 😉
is it heading towards separation ?? 😲 let me just live in the present and we'll think about the future later 😆
these comments are surely coming 😉 thank u for loving such a crap review 😆
weekend seems so far right now 😕

Originally posted by: Aishaa3

unresd on 87...well most of my comments lack seriousness plz bear😛

Originally posted by: Sam_15

W.r.t? 😕

Originally posted by: Sam_15

Oh good. Look forward to reading it 😃 But it will have to be later. Now I need to rush somewhere. Will reply to ur comment later 😊

Originally posted by: Sam_15

Haha...u don't annoy me with ur comments Zehra...in fact I love reading them 😳

😃 See this big smile...it says tons 😆 U need any more proof? 😛

Originally posted by: Aishaa3

unresd on 87...well most of my comments lack seriousness plz bear😛

Originally posted by: Sam_15

Originally posted by: Aishaa3

somewhere deep down Shlok still cared for Astha. He didn't like the idea of putting himself at ease at the cost of her discomfort. We were once friends after all.

For some reason i found this veryy romantic😃 He atleast remembered their childhood frndship...while on the sR I had felt the opposite! Whatever we are enjoying this tom jerry chase😉

Well, it's been a few days since their SR...may be her constant presence is reviving old memories of their childhood 😃

she couldn't even leave the room as she was still wearing her sleeping dress.

She could have taken a salwar from the wardrobe and left if she wanted...was the wardrobe in the bathroom too😆I am quite surreee she realised Shlok went ina hurry widout a towel and waited for the sneak-peak😉

🤣 yeah for her, her wardrobe was as good as in the bathroom 😆 Trust me when I say, she couldn't leave the room...she just HAD to be there for when Shlok would come out 🤣☺️

He was rubbing his wet hair with the towel with his well-toned arms.

I was sooo right...very clever tigress Astha😃

Haha.. 😳😳

Shlok was left wondering about her yet again peculiar behaviour.

Seriously Shlok you dont know when a girl is blushing? and You thought you loved Swati..a girl!😆I understand he isnt used to her getting shy but didnt any of the girls look at him that way in college? Thats nearly impo😛

That just cracked me up 🤣 But in Shlok's defense, he didn't notice her blushing. Only Astha thought he did 😉 He just saw her rushing towards the washroom awkwardly. After all he is a nuthead...too self-absorbed to understand these obvious things about girls 😆 Swati is a different kind of girl altogether, quite bold and vivacious unlike Astha.

Here take the shirt.

Astha getting all excited for the second glance of the hairy landscape😉😆 Poking the needle was just and excuse wrapped up in a teasing package to get him to remove that shirt😈😆😆

You are starting to understand this Astha better than me it seems 🤣

You never forget my birthday."

"Besides, remember...I still need to reveal my surprise."

Poor Swati...lost her best friend...yeah thats what I feel Shlok means for swati! Aha now Shlok will require Asthas shoulders to cry once she reveals her surprise😳⭐️

Wow you are getting really good at guessing or is it me who is leaving clear trails for you to follow? 😕

For some reason, this didn't make Shlok feel as satisfied as he thought it would. In fact he felt restless. Some part of his conscious was feeling guilty.

here i felt he should have been guilty about telling Swati he was married abruptly...i know they werent even comitted but atleast best frnds! But he concentrating on Astha...anyway I am sure Swati has found her mate...time for reality check Shlok🤓

I think you misunderstood this part. He didn't tell Swati about their marriage yet.

This chap was long tooo😃😳 precap ah you know my thoughts already...but I dint say I want full fleged romance...accidental ones you know😉

Haha...will consider. I just hope I don't annoy Yasna with it 😆

Cant wait for the next chp😛