Irresistible Forces - Closure - Page 1 - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71
Wow, this story is so addicting, and definitely irresistible in the truest sense!! Very apt title, by the way. 😊
I've been a silent reader on the forum, but I just can't get enough of Rikara these days and the stories on IF are helping to feed my obsession. 😆

You're writing is amazing, and this story is such a unique take on Rikara. At first, I wasn't sure if I wanted to read a different version of them than the one shown in the show, but you've written this story with such grace and expertise, it completely won me over and now I can't wait for the rest of the chapters! Truly, this story is incredible!

I absolutely love the chemistry between Rikara and the way they can't stop thinking about one another. I honestly haven't smiled to myself this much reading a story in the past few weeks as much as I did with this one. That chemistry is rocking!! 😃 The friendship between Anika and Gauri and Bhavya is sweet and strong, and I'm so glad Gauri's got them as support, especially with such an awful step mom. Her insult to Gauri was so terrible, she deserves to be treated the rude way that Gauri treats her, and Mr. Sharma.

I'm really looking forward to reading the rest! Please update soon!!

~~Aali :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72
Its superb. To read the masti was endless...realy need this part in onair..!ur writing was amazing
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: zeherili

I am in love with this Gauri, please continue soon!

Originally posted by: loveangel94

Wow great update. Please update soon and pm ❤️

Originally posted by: ..dtd...

Its superb. To read the masti was endless...realy need this part in onair..!ur writing was amazing


Thank you so very much , peeps 😳 I'm glad you'll are liking the characters and the story. Please stay tuned for the next chapter that is coming up in a few minutes 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: sara1990

Om was just a gentlemen, he cleaned Gauri and her puke. He didnt even take any advantage of the situation. Poor Gauri, her relationship with her father is not so good. It looks just like Om and Tej's relationship. How Dadi gonna bring Gauri into Om's life. Looking forward for next update.


Thank you so much Sara 😳 Yes, Om is sugar, spice and everything nice... and also an explosion when it comes to Gauri. They sizzle, crackle and burn.
Thanks a lot for the comment 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
Hey
This story is too hot n too sensual n too lovely
Savinaa thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: indigal07

Wow, this story is so addicting, and definitely irresistible in the truest sense!! Very apt title, by the way. 😊

I've been a silent reader on the forum, but I just can't get enough of Rikara these days and the stories on IF are helping to feed my obsession. 😆

You're writing is amazing, and this story is such a unique take on Rikara. At first, I wasn't sure if I wanted to read a different version of them than the one shown in the show, but you've written this story with such grace and expertise, it completely won me over and now I can't wait for the rest of the chapters! Truly, this story is incredible!

I absolutely love the chemistry between Rikara and the way they can't stop thinking about one another. I honestly haven't smiled to myself this much reading a story in the past few weeks as much as I did with this one. That chemistry is rocking!! 😃 The friendship between Anika and Gauri and Bhavya is sweet and strong, and I'm so glad Gauri's got them as support, especially with such an awful step mom. Her insult to Gauri was so terrible, she deserves to be treated the rude way that Gauri treats her, and Mr. Sharma.

I'm really looking forward to reading the rest! Please update soon!!

~~Aali :)


Aali, you have such a sweet name 😃 Im so glad you decided to break your silence and comment on this story; I'm even more glad that you decided to give this different version of RiKara a shot. I shall try my level best to not disappoint 😳
The chemistry between them has just begun. There's a lot more to go. They're balancing on the edge of lust; and lust is what they'll choose. however, only time will tell if that is enough to sustain their connection.
Please do keep commenting. It makes me so happy to read such wonderful feedback 😳
Thank you so so much 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Rati0992

Hey
This story is too hot n too sensual n too lovely

Thank you so much Rati 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
Hey that was beautiful crazy love update ...
Now even i m in love with that cafe u described ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79
Oh my god! Oh my god! It was so hot! That kiss! ❤️
And your writing style, its a bliss sweetheart 😃
I didnt want the chap to end >_<
Plz plz update soon! Or else ill die! Your story is so wonderful! I cant wait to find out what must be going on in Omkara's head after that kiss.. ;)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80
So that's how they met again
Omkara came to meet his dad
I see Tej can see through Gauri
She is just like her father
Only professionally though
Tej noticed the dysfunctional family
How lonely gauri is yet portrays to be strong

Omkara ne Mauke pe chauka marra
asked her out for coffee
They got to know each other better
A lot better that it got to Gauri
They both know they are not in love
Yet this strong connection
They can't understand what it is

Omkara doesn't want to leave a chance to be with her
Be it even for some more seconds
Hope their kiss causes trouble
Thats what I really want
I know thats bad of me
But what can I say
When it comes to Rikara I become a devil

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon

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