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Posted: 8 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

So that's how they met again

Omkara came to meet his dad
I see Tej can see through Gauri
She is just like her father
Only professionally though
Tej noticed the dysfunctional family
How lonely gauri is yet portrays to be strong

Omkara ne Mauke pe chauka marra
asked her out for coffee
They got to know each other better
A lot better that it got to Gauri
They both know they are not in love
Yet this strong connection
They can't understand what it is

Omkara doesn't want to leave a chance to be with her
Be it even for some more seconds
Hope their kiss causes trouble
Thats what I really want
I know thats bad of me
But what can I say
When it comes to Rikara I become a devil

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon


Their kiss causes trouble, and the trouble is a good one 😆
Thank you so much Vrinda 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

lovely update, so hot and sensual!

Originally posted by: maivelli

Love this so far

M craving for more

Originally posted by: MITHMA99

Nyc update😊

Thnx for the pm


Thank you so much everyone! I'm so glad that you liked the update 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

loving the story so far !

you have real talent and I love the way you describe their emotions, the passion the unsaid understanding and growing attraction.
Pls keep me updated :D


Thank you so much dear 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: perfictionist

im sure he would require another cold shower 😆😉

the chemistry is crackling with all its glory confusing the daylights out of their raging hormones!😆
Tej oberoi's perspective and understanding of Gauri was so apt and honest! im struggling to come to terms with a nice, mature tej oberoi who happens to share an actual emotional bond with omkara! (refer omkara's fantastic performance after jhanvi tried to immolate herself)

@red: Trust me, I had a tough time portraying Tej as a positive guy. You'll see how he supports his son when the time comes. This Tej is a sane character; a small attempt to redeem the character and for Omkara to have a normal father-son relationship with his Dad 😃

Gauri ~ sincere, independent, hardworking, charming, smart and supremely sexy! hmmm... cold showers are justified. very justified😳 your detailing on corporate formal wear is very immaculate!
her insecurities and discomfort at having a real connection with a male counterpart came to the fore with all horns blaring.. poor omkara taken by surprise but the smartkara figured it out! how his warmth is thawing the ice princess!👏
omkara~ okay then! you have made me run out of words at exactly how perfectly you have crafted him! name any quality you are looking for in a man and that goddamn greek god has it! kj's face added on top of that scores the home run!😳 no wonder the ice princess is running to take cover into her very own personal freezer! i doubt she can outrun him though😆
last but not the least the smoldering kiss! oh maaan what was that! 😳👏 i dont know what was more alluring... omkara's perfect bad boy charms, his gentleman's kiss, the almost extinct display of chivalry, their peaking hotness quotient, Gauri's reluctant battle, her last 'omkaraa' and their promising goodbye! phew... yeah thats right! i fail miserably at expressing exactly how perfect that ending was.


Miss Perfictionist! How i love your comments!
Yea, Gauri is very outspoken, smart and bold when it comes to everything but feelings. The woman has been damaged psychologically, and as you apt;y put it, she takes cover into her ice cave. It now remains to be seen how our Greek God helps her come out of her shell. He's NOT going to have any problems when bedding her for she isn't the woman who shies away from her physical needs; it's the emotions that will cause the chaos.
Omkara! Sigh! I myself am in love with the man, and i promise to make the women go even crazier about him as the story progresses 😳
Thank you so much dearest 🤗 Your comments have made me a happier person 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: indigal07

Fantastic update!! 👏👏 I'm so hooked, I wish I could binge read the entire FF in one shot! 😳

There is so much I loved about this chapter! For one, I loved all of it! Lol But I especially loved the minute details, like the way it was thundering when they kissed. Talk about a strong force of attraction! I loved how Gauri tried to restrain herself throughout the whole coffee shop date and calling him an acquaintance, but at the end, she just couldn't deny the attraction and pulled him in to kiss her. I love how strong and independent and "go getter" type you've made her. She's awesome! ❤️👍🏼

I also love Omkara. My fav thing is when you wrote "He knew he was not in love with her; at least not yet. But yet, every time he thought of her, he could sense an urge. It wasn't a physical urge, he was sure of it. This; what they shared, had a different essence, a different taste to it." I'm so glad that he realizes he's not in love with her right now, that he doesn't know her enough yet, but he realizes there's something about her that attracts him and he wants to know more about her. The way you described it with "taste" and "essence" feels so tangible and real, I love it! Omkara's so mature, deep, and understanding, and Gauri is the same. Just too good! I'm so excited to see where this story goes! Please do continue soon!!

Thank you so so much dear 😳 I'm so glad you liked the update 😃 Do keep the love coming in 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: arshifansiri

Awesome story.

Loved it.
Read all d parts.
Very well written.
Enjoyed reading this.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.


Thank you so much 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: dbo_savina



Thank you so much Rex😃Unfortunately I wont be updating the story tonight! I may do it in two to three days because i have my college tests coming up.
Anyway, you'll get a glimpse of the crazy Oberoi gang in the next update *wink wink*😆

Thanks a lot. Will read your story and comment soon-ish😳


Aww! Thank you so much! And don't worry I can wait for such an amazing story! 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98
Wow
Thats soo romantic ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: shamnuz

Wow

Thats soo romantic ❤️


Thank you dear 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ..LittleLiar..


Aww! Thank you so much! And don't worry I can wait for such an amazing story! 😉


Seems like fate didn't want you to wait for long! The next chapter coming in a few minutes time 😳😆

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