The Realisation. Anshi OS - Page 7

Originally posted by: zajedno

the beautiful story👏👏👏

Originally posted by: lucky_princess

Awesome...u just nailed it...👏

What a realization...the feelings in him were penned down beautifully...i was imagining the whole scene nd was smiling to myself...

Loved it!!

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

The love that Shivaay holds for Rudr was so beautifull portrayed in this piece, Soumya. The pain of his absence, the restlessness on not finding him, very real. Could feel those emotions.

Shivay Singh Oberoi would die of heart failure if this was not his brother's plane. He just knew it.

The whole ShivIka scene was so heartwarming, it was beautiful! Loved the realisation and now, can't wait to see what Shivaay does to find out Anika's feelings and make her reciprocate his.

Also looking forward to Anika's realisation!

Originally posted by: NandiniRaizadaa

Awesome OS

Loved it!!

Originally posted by: srividhya68

wow...wow
awesome os
poor shivaay...everyone scares him now
loved it
write more

Originally posted by: Live-life

Ah Soumya! 😃

You are LIT AF! But I ain't complaining because I love me some Anshi! 😳

Now coming to the OS...

What can I say? I love the simplicity of your writing. It such simple words you portray something so beautiful. The concern Shivaay harbors for his brothers, his feelings, his realisation that he has fallen in love...It's all simply so beautiful.

I like the fact that you focused on Rudra's attack though. It showed how much Rudra means to Shivaay especially the little flashback on hide and seek. I was a little teary eyed in that section. So many feels. Honestly you would think only couples would give you #majorgoals but in this show, everyone gives you #majorgoals. Be it the three Obros! or Dadi, Om and Rudra, even TejVi, Ishakara, Rumya, Anika and Sahil, Anshi! ❤️ Hayee...! I think your OS portrayed the ObRos bond beautifullly as well as Anshi's!

Ah and then comes Shivaay's inner turmoil. Again you portray it with such simplicity the reader doesn't need to decode anything! 😆

He could have lost Rudra so easily and he doesn't know how to cope with that and I think that is what brings him to Anika's house! Because be it indirectly but thr though of losing a loved one also reminds him of Anika!

And Gawd...the way she cares for him.Poor Shivaay he has fever. 😭

She can read him so easily... Like I said #majorgoals

They way he rest his shoulder on her shoulder, that moment was so...intimate in a way yet I felt like they were comfortable with each other too!

His realisation in the morning though is priceless. 😳 The first time he actually realizes that what he feels for her is love...he has fallen in love with her! What can be more beautiful than that!

And now the thought of losing her destroys him! So I guess he has lost in the end...lost his heart to love! ❤️ But this loss is probably the best victory he will ever achieve in his whole life. 😳

Now I cannot wait to read how Anika realizes what she feels. OH but before that I think you should write an OS where Anika is called to the Oberoi mansion by Dadi and Anika and Shivaay romance in his room kind like what happened in yesterday's episode! That would be such a treat to read especially since the hug wasn't that long...hehe 😳 I can never get enough of them!

Great OS Soumya! Loved it to every word!

Thanks for the pm btw and keep writing these I love these OS series! 😃

Love you! 🤗

Nabi

Originally posted by: Ayuzawa

Nabi darling my god such a nice comment you have given...it perfectly tells everything i wanted to convey.

My Rudra is extremely special to Shivay hence only the fear of his loss could trigger the gears in SSO's brain😆

Thanks a lot for this.

Haha...felt like i was reading my OS again.

Love you and i am still eagerly waiting for your work. Please write it soon and PM me as soon as you do.

Originally posted by: -Panda-

This was absolutely beautiful, for two reasons.

First, the bonding of the ObBros, and how Omkara pushed Shivaay to help him realise that he loves Anika because he knows that his older brother is to thick in the head sometimes😆

Also, the sense of protectiveness that these two hold for Rudra, never gets old. It's so beautiful, how they're both brothers and parents to Rudra.

But, it was also lovely to see Tej and Jhanvi worried, because we've never gotten that on the show🥱

Second, is simply the way they realised their love. You've put it so beautifully. It's always a little moment, a tiny inkling of a moment, when you realise you love someone and have been loving them for so long.

I loved how you showcased Shivaay simply needing Anika by his side when he was at his lowest, not knowing what to call that feeling, until he did.

Thanks for the PM, darling

Originally posted by: Live-life

Lol...I am sorry...when I start writing comment mein emotion mein beh jaati hoon!

😆😆

I will surely write it soon!! and will PM you too!

😳

Originally posted by: -Panda-

This was absolutely beautiful, for two reasons.

First, the bonding of the ObBros, and how Omkara pushed Shivaay to help him realise that he loves Anika because he knows that his older brother is to thick in the head sometimes😆

Also, the sense of protectiveness that these two hold for Rudra, never gets old. It's so beautiful, how they're both brothers and parents to Rudra.

But, it was also lovely to see Tej and Jhanvi worried, because we've never gotten that on the show🥱

Second, is simply the way they realised their love. You've put it so beautifully. It's always a little moment, a tiny inkling of a moment, when you realise you love someone and have been loving them for so long.

I loved how you showcased Shivaay simply needing Anika by his side when he was at his lowest, not knowing what to call that feeling, until he did.

Thanks for the PM, darling