The Realisation. Anshi OS - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Ayuzawa



Haha...thanks and yeah i have already thiught about it. Just penning it down.
Yiur welcome😊


Yayy , it means anika's realisation os is on the way. Sooo excited for it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
This was perfect! 👏
The chords just struck at the best places where it should.
Rudra is definitely the darling of everyone.
He made everyone worried, me too for a second.
I am glad that Shivay didn't get a heart attack. His heart was needed for him to have this realization.
I love how you have portrayed Shivay's emotional turmoil.
For Shivay to actually let Anika see him so vulnerable and helpless means that she means a lot to him. Because not everyone is allowed to see him feeling this way.
And the fear of him loosing her? That just showed how much he loves her and how much she means to him. That power, name and money cannot be compared to these feelings.
The writing was so real that I could feel their emotions. The content has reached out flawlessly.
This was more than wonderful and better than marvelous!! 👍🏼
Keep writing. 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Fireflake

This was perfect! 👏
The chords just struck at the best places where it should.
Rudra is definitely the darling of everyone.
He made everyone worried, me too for a second.
I am glad that Shivay didn't get a heart attack. His heart was needed for him to have this realization.

I love how you have portrayed Shivay's emotional turmoil.
For Shivay to actually let Anika see him so vulnerable and helpless means that she means a lot to him. Because not everyone is allowed to see him feeling this way.
And the fear of him loosing her? That just showed how much he loves her and how much she means to him. That power, name and money cannot be compared to these feelings.
The writing was so real that I could feel their emotions. The content has reached out flawlessly.
This was more than wonderful and better than marvelous!! 👍🏼
Keep writing. 😳

Thanks a lot...i feel so happy just reading this😳
I am so glad that keeping it real worked out nicely. I wanted Shivay's realization not on the deatj bed or a hospital or something. I wanted it naturally like sexond nature to him and it worked.
Thanks for the encouragement. I shall keep writing more such stuff.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
wow beautiful os dear
loved it
it is just amazing
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Such an Amazing one
Shivay instead of Going Home went To Annika where he was with Someone who Cares for him, adores him
Lovedd it yaar ❤️
Keepp writing more 😃
Love Kriti :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: priyanvs

wow beautiful os dear
loved it
it is just amazing

thanks a lot 😃
Edited by Ayuzawa - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: KRITII

Such an Amazing one

Shivay instead of Going Home went To Annika where he was with Someone who Cares for him, adores him
Lovedd it yaar ❤️
Keepp writing more 😃
Love Kriti :)

Thanks a lot kriti.
😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Thank you😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was amazing and it was so in sync with both the characters. I could actually imagine this happening!! Really loved reading it ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: muskaan2298

This was amazing and it was so in sync with both the characters. I could actually imagine this happening!! Really loved reading it ❤️

Thanks a lot😃
Glad you enjoyed it😊

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