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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Anjum.
Ok so this is just... ugh I don't even know how to describe it it's too beautiful! So natural and real and human and perfect. I loved it and I'm gonna go read it again but seriously please write a novel and publish it because you really could become the next bestselling author! This OS made me love Shivaay. Not because he was the caring brother that we see on screen, but because he finally accepted that he has lost the "game" and in doing so has finally let go of his pride.
Thank you for writing, and thanks for the pm! 🤗

Thanks a lot. Haha... Did you know i had started writing a novel but then i lost track of the story and stopped it😆

I just get distracted too easily.

I am so happy that my portrayal of Shivay was so good.

You are welcome for the PM😃

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: jarir2010
What will i say its brilliant.plz plz plz do write more in this concept.im so love with this os,its just natural and superb. 👏 👏

Thanks a lot.😃

I am glad it seems real. I wanted it to be human. Not a dramatic realisation where ine is going to die and the other suddenly gets enlightened on how much she means to him😆

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: twerping
Oh my god! The feels... Perfect path to Shivay's realization! This story is such a brilliant start to my day! Going to be in Ishqbaaz land now for the rest of the day! 😳
Thanks ever so much for the pm!

Haha...happy ishqbaaz day to you😆

Thanks a lot and welcome😃

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Travelocity
beautiful! i want to read anika's realization too

hehe...wait fir it...she'll realise it too😆

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: cuteariya
Mind blowing OS
Full on emotion realization of love
Oberois were hell worried for rudra as his flight went missing
But thank good he was saved
That incident made shivay to understand his love for Anika
On the hand Anika was so shocked seeing shivay at her home
More over he was devastated & even had fever
Anika took care of shivay whole night
That's gave shivay happiness
Just 1 thing made him worried if Anika reject him then he will be destroy emotionally

Thanks a lot dear...you just explained my OS in such a perfect way😃

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Nichuss
Lovrd it yaar... hope to read anu realising her love afte dis
Nyt

Thanks

She'll understand her feeling aoon too😆😉

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: sweetie_angel
Good one

😃

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Sparklle801
Yayy, finally the one of them realised that they are in love and made for each other. It took this much big incident to make shivaay realise his feelings, I wonder what it will take for anika 😃 ( don't wanna think about it as this job is yours 😉 ).
Thanks for the pm. Update was awesome.

Haha...thanks and yeah i have already thiught about it. Just penning it down.

Yiur welcome😊