The Realisation. Anshi OS

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

wow...wow
awesome os
poor shivaay...everyone scares him now
loved it
write more

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: noor j
its amazing I wish you would write a second part for it...You know just to have him know that she loves him too like maybe after six months or something...I love your work...You actually make your characters come alive.

Thanks dear.

It is part of a series so yes there will be another OS related to it.

Thanks a lot for saying that. As a writer it is amazing to know that i succeed in soing so😳

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Tharunisa
Nice one...
Waiting for ur nxt os...

Thank you😊

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: -Jamina
Beautiful!!
I was waiting for it. Update next ASAP

Thank you😃

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: --Nargis--
Perfect!! I love how you get into Shivay's skin so well...you dig and you dig, until there isn't a shred left to hide! Love it!👏

Haha...who wouldn't want to get into his skin😉

Thanks a lot for the compliment😃

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Aquamarine03
I loved it. Good job! 👍🏼

Thank you😊

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Live-life

@Live-life

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Ah Soumya! 😃

You are LIT AF! But I ain't complaining because I love me some Anshi! 😳

Now coming to the OS...

What can I say? I love the simplicity of your writing. It such simple words you portray something so beautiful. The concern Shivaay harbors for his brothers, his feelings, his realisation that he has fallen in love...It's all simply so beautiful.

I like the fact that you focused on Rudra's attack though. It showed how much Rudra means to Shivaay especially the little flashback on hide and seek. I was a little teary eyed in that section. So many feels. Honestly you would think only couples would give you #majorgoals but in this show, everyone gives you #majorgoals. Be it the three Obros! or Dadi, Om and Rudra, even TejVi, Ishakara, Rumya, Anika and Sahil, Anshi! ❤️ Hayee...! I think your OS portrayed the ObRos bond beautifullly as well as Anshi's!

Ah and then comes Shivaay's inner turmoil. Again you portray it with such simplicity the reader doesn't need to decode anything! 😆

He could have lost Rudra so easily and he doesn't know how to cope with that and I think that is what brings him to Anika's house! Because be it indirectly but thr though of losing a loved one also reminds him of Anika!

And Gawd...the way she cares for him.Poor Shivaay he has fever. 😭

She can read him so easily... Like I said #majorgoals

They way he rest his shoulder on her shoulder, that moment was so...intimate in a way yet I felt like they were comfortable with each other too!

His realisation in the morning though is priceless. 😳 The first time he actually realizes that what he feels for her is love...he has fallen in love with her! What can be more beautiful than that!

And now the thought of losing her destroys him! So I guess he has lost in the end...lost his heart to love! ❤️ But this loss is probably the best victory he will ever achieve in his whole life. 😳

Now I cannot wait to read how Anika realizes what she feels. OH but before that I think you should write an OS where Anika is called to the Oberoi mansion by Dadi and Anika and Shivaay romance in his room kind like what happened in yesterday's episode! That would be such a treat to read especially since the hug wasn't that long...hehe 😳 I can never get enough of them!

Great OS Soumya! Loved it to every word!

Thanks for the pm btw and keep writing these I love these OS series! 😃

Love you! 🤗

Nabi

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: realraul2307
Lovely as always!👏
Thank you very much for the PM!😳

Thanks a lot dear.

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Felicity1234
lol you are worth it, your stories are a joy to read
Now that you're done with the realisation, you have to work on two more OS: the confession and the consummation🤣

and why dont you create a new thread and put all these OS together, because if i'm not wrong they are a continuation from one another nah😊

Yes yes you are right...its part of a series and so i made an index and put it in the order of their occurance. The link is in my siggy box😃