The Realisation. Anshi OS - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: kamalapushpa

You make me fall in love with AnShi again and again with your Os.

I could literally feel the intensity of Shivaays feelings for Anika and the best part was " if she loved him back he wouldnt ask for anything more"❤️ i loved this line
Ofcourse Ruddy boy was the star and due to him and also Om Shivaay understood his feelings
Could you please write more emotional Os's and stories like these?😳
Beautiful os...

Thanks a lot dear...
Yes...when i write these i end up falling in love with Anshi too again. Can't help it. They have that charm.
I shall write more such things since there are so many ideas playing cricket in my head😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Lovely as always!👏
Thank you very much for the PM!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Ayuzawa

Thanks a lot...
That compliment means a lot to me😃

lol you are worth it, your stories are a joy to read
Now that you're done with the realisation, you have to work on two more OS: the confession and the consummation🤣
and why dont you create a new thread and put all these OS together, because if i'm not wrong they are a continuation from one another nah😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Just one word...
Miiindblowing...👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
the beautiful story👏👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Awesome...u just nailed it...👏
What a realization...the feelings in him were penned down beautifully...i was imagining the whole scene nd was smiling to myself...
Loved it!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: lourel24

You are on fire girl.Each of your work you come up with are just amazing each time. Awesome work.👏👏👏

Thanks a lot...haha...yes i am on fire these days😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
The love that Shivaay holds for Rudr was so beautifull portrayed in this piece, Soumya. The pain of his absence, the restlessness on not finding him, very real. Could feel those emotions.

Shivay Singh Oberoi would die of heart failure if this was not his brother's plane. He just knew it.

The whole ShivIka scene was so heartwarming, it was beautiful! Loved the realisation and now, can't wait to see what Shivaay does to find out Anika's feelings and make her reciprocate his.

Also looking forward to Anika's realisation!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: luvzindagi

OMG Soumya, you just made my heart flutter 😳😳

It was Awesome, Amazing, Mind blowing...
Ok lets start with Om, I loved the way he directed his brother's attention to the fact that he was in love... 😊 He is such a sweetheart 😳
And Rudra, I could feel how everyone woulf have felt about him going missing... 😭 and specially Shivaay and Om... I just love the three brothers bond... the love they share is so pure and divine.😊
Finally Shivaay, vaise to hum jaante hai ki use pyar ho hi gaya hai but this fact was crystal clear the moment Rudra answered "To Anika di"... I mean he had gone to none other than Anika when he felt the most vulnerable with the circumstances... Apart from his family the first person he thought of going may be to clear his head or to find some peace was Anika regardless of the state he was in and without caring about displaying his vulnerable side to her... He is clearly in love 😳
And his realization was instantaneous and real... I just loved it😊
I liked the way you described his feelings after realization and specially his fear of losing her... I would love to see how he expresses his love to her... I would like him to voice her importance in his life and this fear of losing her too
Oh my god... I think I ranted too much 😛
The point is I loved it... 😃
You are an awesome writer👏
Eagerly waiting for the next OS ... Please continue soon

Omg! You beautifully penned down everything i wanted to convey through this piece. And your rant is lovely to me😆
Thanks a lot seriously. This just encouraged me so much😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: maaneetfan

U write wonderful ones n even tho this was a tad serious than the earlier ones ... It was superb nonetheless...loved the way Shivaay realises his feelings for Anika and his suppressed emotions ... Also how Anika loves him but cant still realise n accept it ... Hope u will write abt her realization soon too!!

Thanks for the pm dear

Tas

Thanks a lot Tas. I was worried that maybe this was too serious but i am happy it turned out well.
Her realisation will come soon too. And it will also be hatke i guess😆

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