Did i love you not? FF

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys. Soumya here. I made a post here last time which inspired me to write this ff. for now i have just a basic idea of my story for which i made a teaser.

Prior stories.

Aftermath: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ishqbaaaz/4670848/aftermath-obbros-os-an-on-page-3












Teaser

"I really do love you Om" Ishana said softly, looking up towards his window, drenched in rain.
'lies' Omkara thought quietly as he looked down at her from behind the glass.
"but you won't believe me." and a tear escaped her eye only to be mixed with the rain.
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"Believe me Shiv. Please let me explain." Anika pleaded, tears flowing from her eyes.
"Get out" Shivay said through gritted teeth. There were unshed tears of pain and rage in his eyes.
"Shivay, please." Anika hopelessly tried for the last time.
"I said OUT!!"
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"Please don't say a word today." Soumya said as she looked up.
"Thank you. Thank you Rudra for letting me love you, for letting me try everything in my power to make you fall in love with me too. Thanks to you now i can let go of my first love without any regrets."
"What do you mean?" Rudra asked with a sinking feeling.
"Goodbye Rudra." Saying this Soumya started walking down the stairs leaving a stunned Rudra at the top, alone.
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Okay. So this is the teaser to my story. tell me if it's worth writing.
also you can tell me what you understood from this story in the comments section below.
go easy on me since i have returned to writing after a long time. Last time was another Gul show QH.

so give me your response and till then bye.


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INDEX:

Chapter 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/135339885


Chapter 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/135430559

Chapter 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/135472230

Chapter 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/135796416

Chapter 7: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/136350508



Drunken Shots: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4683445&PID=135947376&#p135947376


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Teaser sounds interesting yaar..
Do continue soonish
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That sounds really good! Continue soon!! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The teaser sounds interesting yaar...pls continue soon
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Very interesting!! Do continue😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting dear eagerly waiting for the updates ...and want to know y all left their respective partners
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
Hmm, sounds interesting. Do continue!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sounds really interesting..
looking forward for this story.
continue sooonish.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very interesting teaser 👏
Looks like love stories of obros is going to be difficult.
Do continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This sounds so interesting
Please PM when you update

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