O RE PIYA #Akshan FF--Part 18 Updated on Page 26 - Page 15

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Awsome

Suspense jaldi khatm kro

Continue soon

Sukriya ji

Bs raaz se parda uthne hi wala hai

Originally posted by: Swati_20

Sukriya ji

Bs raaz se parda uthne hi wala hai

hamse wait nhi ho rha

Originally posted by: Viditian1

Awesome update..❤️sry for late comment..

That was a twist now..bhushan isnt her father..🤓

Plz next update mei suspense khatam kr dena plzzz😃

Cont soonish😃

No its ok dear I know its your exam time but glad you come and read my ff nikaloing time from your busy schedule🤗

And about next part toh uske liye apko jayada intezaar ni krwayenge ab, will update today

Originally posted by: Kammy02

hamse wait nhi ho rha

Ab thoda toh wait krna hi padega...

Originally posted by: Swati_20

😆

Kahaani mai twist bhi toh zaroori hai na😉

Aaj milega update😆

Originally posted by: Swati_20

No its ok dear I know its your exam time but glad you come and read my ff nikaloing time from your busy schedule🤗

And about next part toh uske liye apko jayada intezaar ni krwayenge ab, will update today

Will be waiting for thw update😃

Originally posted by: Swati_20

😆

Kahaani mai twist bhi toh zaroori hai na😉

Part 16

Akshat comes back to the venue and found that the same man says something to poonam and went so he comes to her asked her about that man and why guddan stop him to say anything to that man

Poonam didn't uttered a word which make akshat loose his control and finally he hit the chair with his leg

Poonam stop him and says- he was guddan's fatherwhich shocked him

Akshat- what but jaha tak mujhe pata hai guddan ke papa Bhushan Gupta hai na aur vo unke saath hi rahti hai maine dekha hai unhe phir yeh

Poonam- guddan ke papa Bhushan uncle ni Ramesh uncle hai...

Akshat- pr pr yeh kese ho sakta hai aur agar yeh sach hai ki vo guddan ke papa hai toh phir vo usse iss tarah se kyun baat kr rahe the aur bhushan uncle vo kaun hai

Poonam (takes a deep breathe)- bhushan uncle guddn ke chacha hai, guddan ke asli mummy papa Ramesh Gupta aur Mamta Gupta hai , khushalya aunty guddan ki maasi bhi hai aur chachi bhi. Guddan ki family kafi Orthodox thi...thi kya aj bhi hai, Ramesh uncle ki family ko hamesha se ek ladka chahiye the jo unka vansh badaye, unke kandaan ko age le jaye isliye unh logo ko guddan kabhi pasand hi ni thi vo hamesha iss baat ke liye usse aur mamta aunty ko tanne marte the bina kisi baat ke guddan ko saja milti thi, isliye unhone usse apne behan khaushal aunty ke pass bengluru bhej diya jab vo 5 saal ki thi kyuki agar guddan umke saath rahti toh unhe hamesha apne hi dono bacho ke beech mai na chate huwe bhi fark krna padta tha isliye unhone guddan ko kahushalya aunty ko de diya, bengluru mai guddan ke chacha yani bhushan uncle bhi rahte the vo guddan se bhaut pyaar krte the iss pure pariwar mai sab se jayada agar koi tha jo guddan aur mamta aunty ke saath tha toh vo yehi the. Phir ek din pata chala ki unhone aur khaushaya aunty se shaadi kr li hai yeh baat jab ghar pr pata chala toh vaha sb mamta aunty ko iska zimedaar mane lage

Dheere dheere unhone bhopal ana bhi band kr diya kyuki vo ni chate the ki unki vajah se unki gudiya ko ya unki bhabhi ko kuch sunne ko mile. Gudiya...bhushan uncle usse issi naam se bulate the aur vansh bhi with tears in her eyes

Akshat- vansh...

Poonam- haan vansh guddan ka chota bhai bhaut pyaara tha vo apne papa ki tarah yah baki ghar wali ki tarah ni tha jo usse nafrat kre vo toh apni gudiya di se bhaut pyaar krta tha bhaut jayada uske liye uski gudiya yahi guddan di world best sister thi jo apne padai ke liye apne ghar se door thi usse yahi bataya gaya tha, aur pata hai rakhi pr behane apne bhai ko rakhi bandhti hai na pr yaha humara vansh apni gudiya di ko rakhi bandhta tha kyuki usse lagta tha ki uski gudiya di hamesha uski raksha krti hai uske liye uski gudiya uski wonder women thi, phir ek din achanak vo...vo

Akshat- vo kya poonam kya huwa tha

Main batata hoon a voice comes from behind so he truns back

Akshat- jiju...

Sanjay- haan main batata hoon tumhe, kyuki main guddan aur poonam ka super senior tha toh humare board exam ek hi year mai the inn dono ke high school ke exam aur mere higher secondary ke exam ek saath hi khatm huwe the aur humre age guddan ko apne bhaiyu apne vansh se milna tha issi beech pata chala ki poonam ke papa ka transfer yaha bhopal mai ho gaya hai aur bhushan uncle ka delhi toh kyuki ab poonam ki family bhopal shift ho rahi thi toh guddan bhi unke saath bhopal ane ki jid krne lagi, na chate huwe bhi unhe uski baat manni padi aur vo sab bhopal aapne ghar aa gaye aur main bhi anpe parents ke saath yaha ghumne aa gaya pr hume kya pata tha ki hum jaha maze krne ja rahe hai vaha hume humari zindagi ki sabse badi saza milne wali thi

Uss din main,poonam,guddan,vansh aur vardhan hum sab jid krke kedwa dam picnic ke liye aa gaye aur humare saath humare parents bhi khelte khelte kb hum khai ki taraf aa gaye hume pata hi ni chala guddan ne hume kitna mana kiya ki undhar mat jao udher khatra hai warning board bhi lagi hai pr hum charo ne uski ni suni aur hum aur age jane ki jid krne lage tabhi achanak khelte huwe vansh aur vardhaan fisal gaye aur khai ki taraf gine lage guddan ne vardhaan ko bacha liya aur vo vansh ko bhi bachane ke liye gayi pr kyuki vaha fislan itni thi ki ap jayada dher tak khud ko hold ni kr poge aur guddan bhi vansh ke saath khai mai ghir gayi pr usne kisi tarah se ek haat se ped ke tane ko dusre haat se vansh ko pakda...

Hum sab ki cheeckh sune ke humare parents bhi vaha aa gaye khushaya aunty ne phele hum sbko peeche kiya aur mamta aunty apne bacho ko bachane chali gayi guddan ne kitna kaha ki vo phele vansh ka haat pakad kr usse uper kheeche pr mamta aunty janti thi ki agar vo vansh ka haat pakadne ki khosis krengi ko unke wieght ki vajah se sayad dono hi khai mai gir jayen isliye unhone phele guddan ko upper kiya phir jab vo vansh ko uper kheech rahi thi tabhi unke pao ke neeche pathat ane ki vajagh sr vo aur vansh dono hi khai mai gir gaye guddan ne vansh ka haath pakadne ki bhaut khosis ki pr... andehra hone ki vajah se Bhaut der ho chuki thi vo dono hi kahi mai gir gaye aur phir...

Poonam- phir tabhi Ramesh uncle vaha aye aur unhe laga ki le sab guddan ki vajah se huwa hai unhone usse na jane kitna kuch bol diya yaha tak ki apni hi beti ko manhoos bol diya unhone aur usse apni beti khelane ka hak bhi cheen liya unhone, aur zindagi mai kabhi apni sakal na dikhane ka bol kr usse apni zindagi se hi nikal diya

Uss bechari ko toh uski maa aur bhai ko akhri baar dekhne ka hak bhi cheen liya gaya tha...

End of Part

Toh aj ke liye itna hi I know chotu sa update hai maine puri khosis ki hai ap sab ki umeed ke khare utrne ki ab baki sab ap logo ke upper hai pls do comment and let me know how you guys like it.

Thank you

Originally posted by: Akshananju

aaj nahi milega update 😒😒

Updated pls check

Originally posted by: Viditian1

W8ing

Your wait is over now pls check and let me know how is it