O RE PIYA #Akshan FF--Part 18 Updated on Page 26

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Posted: 6 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: Swati_20
Yeh jawan apni puri tayari kr rahi hai next part likhne ki khosis krenge ki apko jayada itnezaar na krayen😊...
And all the best for your exam 👍🏼

hume intezaar rhega😳

@bold- Thanks a lot dear..😃

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Posted: 6 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: Swati_20
I will try to update next part tonight once I get free from my household chores
Okk will be waiting🤗
And her past regarding mystery will solve in next 2 parts
Really in next part mystery about her past will be revealed

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Part 15

After one week

Poonam- vase guddan tera yeh shopping ka idea na bada kamal ka tha, lekin mujhe samjh ni aa raha ki achanak se tumhe yeh shopping ka idea aya kaha se na toh mera b'day hai na tumhara na hi koi festival hai toh phir yeh shopping kis khusi mai...

Guddan- kyu shopping krne ke liye insaan ko koi vajah chahiye kya bs humara man huwa toh hum aa gaye aur tumhe pata hai na ki hume akele shopping krna bilkul pasand ni, vo toh chutki aur vardhaan dono hi busy the toh humne tumhe bula liya

Poonam- how mean guji??😤

Guddan- acha baba sorry mazak kr rahi thi

Poonam- haan toh main kb serious thi, acha yeh bata agar mai bhi ane mana kr deti toh tu unhe bolati na vase tumhara maan toh kr hi raha hoga na😉

Guddan- kisse??

Poonam- ab itni bholi b mat bano tumhe sab pata hai mai Dr. Akshat ki baat kr rahi hoon

Guddan- aj kal kuch jayada hi dimag chalne laga hai tumhara kuch bhi bolti rahti ho uss din bhi Mrs. Bhatnagar ke samne pata ni kya kya bol diya

Poonam- haan toh galat kya kaha tha maine ab jo jitna jayada jaghadte hai pyaar bhi toh utna hi krte hai na ek dusre se

Guddan- acha beta tujhe bada pata hai pyaar ke bare mai

Poonam- ab hum dono ko hi dekh lo kitna ladte hai hum bachpan se hi pr agar kabhi galti se bhi mera kisi se jagda ho jaye toh kase tum jhansi ki raani ban ke aa jati thi mujhe bachane

Guddan- haan aur yaad hai tumhe ek baar bachpan kese tumari ladayi uss "Sanjay the senior" se ho gayi thi

Poonam- haan aur tumne toh usse uski nani yaad dila diya tha maar maar kr laal pila kr diya tha bechare senior ko and both friend starts laughing while remembering there cute childhood memories then they saw a person standing in front of them and said them

Person- kisine abhi abhi mera naam liya lagta hai

Poonam & Guddan (in union)- Sanjay the senior

Sanjay- yes you are right beautiful ladies its me sanjay

Poonam and guddan- the senior completing him and trio start laughing

Sanjay-kya baat hai tum dono ko aaj bhi main yaad hoon, vase yeh banda hai hi kuch khass ki ladkiya usse bhula hi ni pati

Poonam- oh pls

Guddan- don't give so much importance to yourself... Tum hume yaad ho kyuki school mai tum hi the jisne hum dono ki sabse jayada maar khai thi, yaad hai ki...

Sanjay- arey arey dhere bolo yaar agar kisine sun liya toh kya sochenge ki ladiyon se maar khata tha...

Guddan and poonam laughs at him

Sanjay- shopping kr rahi thi lagta hai

Poonam- haan bs ho hi gayi , ab peth pooja krne ja rahe the ki tum mil gaye chalo cafeteria chalte hai vahi baith kr baat krenge

Sanjay- thodi extra shopping kr lena

Guddan- kyu tumhri shaadi hai kya

Sanjay- correct, bhai ki shaadi hai 2 hafte baad aur tum dono ko ana hai samjhi

Poonam- screams what.... Sachi mai hum toh zaroor ayenge

Guddan- hum ni ayenge

Poonam- kyu kya huwa guji

Guddan- aur ni toh kya agar aj hum doni ise ni milte toh janab toh hume bina bataye hi shaadi kr lete aur hume pata bhi ni chalta

Poonam- haan yeh baat toh tumne sahi kahi phir toh main bhi ni aoungi

Sanjay- guji tu bilkul ni badli aur na hi yeh p for panda

Poonam- oye

Sanjay- oyeeeee....

Guddan- stop it guys ghar ni hai humara thodi dhere pls

Poonam & Sanajy- sorry

Sanjay- and pls maine kitne mai kiye the poonam ko pr yeh madam hai ki ek ka bhi reply ni krti aur tumhara koi contact number hai ni mere pass toh

Guddan- its ok I'm just kidding

Sanjay- toh tum dono aoge

Guddan- definitely ayenge arey bhai apne bhai ki shaadi hai

Sanjay- thanks

Poonam- tum rakho tumhra thank you tumhare pass hume toh aj treat chahiye achi wali vo bhi

Guddan- kyu pareshan kr rahi bechare ko vase bhi bechare ki zindagi se vo azadi naam ka shabd gayab hone wala hai aur tujhe treat ki padi hai, hume toh 2 min ka maun rakhna chahiye iske liye and chuckles

Poonam- baat toh tumne thik ki vase kayn hai vo bechari

Sanjay- tum dono usse ache se jante ho guess kro

Poonam- Tanya m i right

Sanjay- absolutely right

Guddan- congratulations yaar,

Sanjay- thank you , toh guddan tum apne ghar kab bula rahi ho main uncle...

Before he speak further poonam cuts him in mid and looks towards guddan she get relief whe she saw her taking on phone that means she didn't listen anything and ask her to bring her some dessert she has finished to her food

Guddan- yeh toh tum khud bhi la sakti thi na sanjay mujhe kuch bol raha tha na

Poonam- acha beta yeh aa gaya toh tu apni panda ko bhul gayi ab mere liye itna bhi ni kr sakti

Guddan- acha ja rahi hoon ab bacho ki tarah rona band kr de

As she goes to bring her dessert

Poonam- pagal ho gaye ho kya yeh puch rahe the tuk usse tumhe achi tarah pata hai uss din kya huwa tha tum bhi the na vaha sb jante huwe bhi

Sanjay- isliye toh main uncle se milna chata tha kyuki iss accident ke baad toh main daar kr ghar chaka gaya tha guddan se bhi thik se baat ni kr paya tha ab tum hi bata do uncle aunty kese hai

Poonam tell him what had happened after he left the place

Sanjay- oh god itna kuch ho gaya uske saath aur mujhe kuch pata bhi ni kese dost hoon main ki jab meri dost ko meri zaroorat thi toh main uske saath ni tha main abhi usse baat karunga

Poonam- ni sanjay tum usse kuch mat kahna badi miluskil se vo usse baat ko bhulane ki khosish main kuch hadh tak kamyab huwi agar tum usse baat kroge toh usse phir se vo sab yaad aa jayega aur vi phir ek baar thooth jayegi.I hope u understand

Sanjay only nodded his head in positive

After 2 week at sanjay and Tanya's mehndi cum sangeet ceremony

Guddan collides with a men

Guddan- sorry uncle vi galti se... And looks towards him

Man- galti krna toh tumhari purani adat hai ap bhi waqt hai isse badal do varna tumhari galti na jane aur kitni zindagi barbad krengi

Guddan on seeing that man and his taunts make her remind that day which she never want to... She ran from there with teary eyes, all this was watched by akshat he can't tolerate this and comes forward before he could say someting to him guddan stop him and ran from there

Akshat tries hard to stop her he was also running behind her to stoo her but of no use, Akshat comes back to the venue and found that the same man says something to poonam and went so he comes to her asked her about that man and why guddan stop him to say anything to that man

Poonam didn't uttered a word which make akshat loose his control and finally he hit the chair with his leg

Poonam stop him and says- he was guddan's fatherwhich shocked him

Akshat- what but jaha tak mujhe pata hai guddan ke papa Bhushan Gupta hai na aur vo unke saath hi rahti hai maine dekha hai unhe phir yeh

Poonam- guddan ke papa Bhushan uncle ni Ramesh uncle hai...

End of Part

So this is the end of part next part will update on 2nd Oct till then enjoy it and don't forget to tell me how you guye like it

Good Night all

Edited by Swati_20 - 6 years ago