O RE PIYA #Akshan FF--Part 18 Updated on Page 26 - Page 16

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Posted: 6 years ago

Emotional tha ye sach mein bahut bura hua guddan ke sath bt this is the reality of our society.

Continue asap wait krna bahut mushkil hai

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome update

Love it

Cont soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Omgitna dukhad past😭😭bechari guddan..i hate her father to the core..it was really an emotional and awesome update❤️

Plz cont soon...i wanna see hiw akshat recovers her from her past😳

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Posted: 6 years ago

Glad to know you guys liked my work otherwise hume toh laga tha ki iss part ke baad paka hume jhute khane ko milega😆

But jokes apart thank you guys, thank you so much for your appreciations

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Swati_20

Glad to know you guys liked my work otherwise hume toh laga tha ki iss part ke baad paka hume jhute khane ko milega😆

Are zyada wait karwaya toh pakka jhute milega 😆🤣

But jokes apart thank you guys, thank you so much for your appreciations

🤗🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago

Please jo bhi jhute ho vo jodi me hi marna, ek akele ka hum kya krenge😆

Vase hum khosis krenge kal raat ko uodate krne ki

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Please jo bhi jhute ho vo jodi me hi marna, ek akele ka hum kya krenge😆

Kuch bhi yaar🤣

Vase hum khosis krenge kal raat ko uodate krne ki

Intezaar rehega 😁

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Posted: 6 years ago

Update kb milega??

Plz update soon...w8ing

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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 17

First of all sorry for being late pls forgive me for that

Poonam- uss...uss 13/14 saal ki bachi jissne apni ankhon ke samne apni zindagi 2 ke sabke pyaare logo ko khud se dur jate dekha jo yeh tak ni samjh payi thi ki akhir usski maa aur uska bhaiyu uska vansh jo abhi kuch minute phele usse chida raha tha uske saath khel raha tha vo achanak se shant kese ho gaya, hamesha usse pareshan krne wala uske baal kichana, usse hamesha sawal puch kr pareshan krne wala uska chota bhai achanak se itna khamosh kese ho gaya... Vo kuch samjh pati isse phele hi Ramesh uncle ne apni hi beti ko manhoos bol diya aur usse apni beti khelane ka hak bhi cheen liya unhone, apni hi aulat ko apni zindagi ki sabse badi bhiol bata kr chod diya unhone, aur zindagi mai kabhi apni sakal na dikhane ka bol kr usse apni zindagi se hi nikal diya

Are unka maan toh isse bhi ni bhara toh unhone uss bechari ko toh uski maa aur bhai ko akhri baar dekhne ka hak bhi cheen liya...

With this poonam take a deep breath and both akshat and poonam was emotinal poonam remembering that day incident and while akshat was thinking how painful her childhood was just then angad come there running

Angad- Poonam vo...vo guddan

Poonam- guddan kya kya huwa guddan ko

Angad- vo guddan...guddan vo vaha

Akshat- kya huwa angad guddan ko aage bhi kuch bolo

Angad-maine abhi abhi guddan ko vo talab ke pass jate huwe dekha hai... Maine usse kitni awaz di pr usne meri jese mujhe sun ke bhi ni suna

Poonam- talab ki taraf ni kahi vo khud ko...ni ni guddan

Akshat- kuch ni hoga guddan ko yeh main pure yakeen ke saath bol sakta hoon jitna maine usse samjha hai na vo itni bhi kamzor ni hai hai thodi si pareshan hai pr dekhna jald hi theek ho jayegai aur tum toh usse bachoan se janti ho na poonam phir tum esa kese soch sakti ho ki vo khud ko kuch...

Poonam- main janti hoon Dr. Akshat meri guddan bhaut hi strong hai pr jab aj itne saalon baad unka iss tarah se guddan ke samne aa jana usse itni taleef huwi hogi yeh na ap samjh sakte hai na main... Pr ap pr bharosa krti hoon ki ap meri guji ko sahi salamat le kr ayenge

Akshat- I promise guddan ko kuch ni hoga...main usse uss dard se, uss talif se bhi bahar le kr aunga, yeh Akshat Jindal ka waada hai tumse

Poonam- thank you

And akshat went near the lake in search of guddan there he hear some voice like someone was sobbing he went in the direction of voice and see her and silently went near her

Akshat forwaded her his handkerchief, guddan look towards him

Akshat - take this

Guddan silently take it but without looking towards him

Akshat- app isse use bhi kr sakti hai Dr. Gupta

Guddan didn't give him any answer so he thought to leave her alone for some time because he know she want some time in alone so he was about to gi but suddenly guddan holds his hand and

Guddan- kya ap humare saath thodi yaha ruk sakte hai Dr. Akshat please and she looks direct in his eyes akshat was so lost at her request so without any word he silently sit at his place

Guddan- thank you...kya hum ap se kuch aur mang sakte hai...

Akshat looks towards her clueless

Guddan- kya huwa ese mat dekhiye Dr. Akshat jayada kuch ni pr kya ap kuch time ke liye humare iss dard mai humre humdard ban sakte hai, bus kuch hi der ke liye humare saath chalenge???

Akshat (in his mind)- kuch der kya main toh puri zindagi tumhara humdard ban kr tumhare saath chalna chahta hoon Guddan because I..

Guddan-sorry vo hum kuch jayada hi bol gaye ese tension mai na hum kuch bhi bol dete hai... Acha chaliye hum chalte hai

Akshat- mere bina hi jana chati ho

Guddan truned and looks towards him

Akshat- abhi toh humdard ban kr saath chalne ka bol rahi thi aur ab dosti bhi bhul gayi...kya ese kya dekh rahi ho dost toh hai na hum

Guddan just nodded in positive

Akshat- toh kya ek dost apne dusre dost ko ese itni raat mai akela chod sakta hai kya, ab tumhara toh pata ni lekin Miss. Guddan Gupta I'm never leave hands of my friends in theirs though time, so bataiye kaha chalna chahti hai ap and moves towards his car and open the gate for her and signals her to sit inside but guddan stop him and asked for the keys

Guddan- if you don't mind kya hum drive kr sakte hai

Akshat- tumhe driving ati hai

Guddan(in very cute way)- haan bilkul hume bhaut ache se driving ati hai licence bhi hai humare pass

Akshat- ab agar itna cute sa face banogi toh main kya koi bhi mana ni kr payega

Guddan- toh layiye dijiye phir

And akshat gave her his car keys she start driving and went some isolated place which was someway far from the main city looks like some jungle so akshat finally asked her

Akshat- guddan yeh hum kaha ja rahe hai??

Guddan- dariye mat apko kidnap ni kr rahe hai hum, bus aa hi gaye hai thodi door aur

Akshat- okkk

Guddan- lijiye aa gaye

Akshat- guddan yeh hum kaha aye hai

Guddan- chaliye toh sahi pata chal jayega

Akshat- abhi aur kahi jana hai kya

Guddan- haan ab iske age apki gadi toh ja ni sakti toh hume chal kr hi jana hoga

And the she start moving inside the jungle but ut was difficult for her to walk on that uneven surface in heels so she remove her heels and carried thme in her hand, akshat was only following her silently and after few second finally she stop and said

Guddan- aa gayi humari manzil

And then Akshat eyes landed on the glorious sight, an idle river carried the reflection of the moonlight that fell in from above slowly downstream. The gushing water has mellow of harmony.

Akshat was lost in the beauty of nature then he looks towards her and found she already made herself comfortable on its bank, her legs drawn up, arms thrown around them and propping her chin over her knees. Guddan patted the place near her and asked him to come. He took spot beside her

Akshat- this place is just so beautiful

Guddan- it's the best during night specially during full moon day.

Akshat-so you discovered it all by yourself??? He implored, staring into the surging water

Guddan- no not actually yeh jagah humari maa ne hume dikhayi thi and yes this is my favourite spot. Apko pata hai Dr. Akshat iss jagah ke bare mai kisi ko bhi ni pata hai poonam ko bhi ni.

Akshat- toh phir tum mujhe yaha kyu layi ho

Guddan- sach kaho toh hume bhi ni pata hume yaha bachpan mai maa ke saath aya krte the jab bhi hume akele rahne ka maan hota tha na hum dono yaha aa jaya krte the...phir maa ke jane ke baad toh yeh sehar yeh adate sab bhul gaye the hum...ya yeh kahe ki maa ke bina yaha ane ka maan hi ni krta tha, maa hamesha kaha krti thi ki guddan kal ko agar main na rahoon na toh yaha kabhi akele mat ana jab bhi aao toh apne saath ek ese insaan ko lana jis pr tumhe bharosha ho , jiska saath tumhe khusi de, jiske saath t yaha ese hi kahi ghate bita sako phir dekhna tumhe meri kami kabhi mehsoosh hogi...

Bhopal ane ke baad hum kayi baar yaha akele aa chuke hai pr kabhi vo sukion vo shanti hume ni mili jo maa ke saath yaha milti thi... aur hume har din ek ese insaan ki talash thi jike saath hume vahi sukoon vahi apnapan mile pr pata ni kyu aj humare dil ne hume apke saath yaha ane ke liye kaha aur hum apko yaha ...

Akshat- toh acha hi kiya na ki tum mujhe yaha le ayi vase yeh jagah sach mai bhaut hi achi hai ab toh mujhe tumhare iss secret ke bare mai pata chal gaya hai agar maine kisi ko yeh secret bata diya toh...

Guddan- ap esa kr hi ni skate

Akshat- itna bharosha krti hai mujhe pe

Guddan- haan ap pr bhi aur apne dil pr bhi,

Like this chit chat for some time in b/w their talk guddan also shares him some of her sweet and bitter memory from her childhood and she felt asleep on his shoulder akshat notice that she's so tired so he didn't disturbed her and took her to the car went to his house setlle her on the bed just then his phone ring its was poonam who calls him to know about guddan well beings

Poonam- hello Dr. Akshat kya apko guddan mili aur kaha hai vo thik toh hai na

Akshat- haan guddan mil gayi hai aur bilkul thik hai bus thodi si udas thi roo bui rahi thi toh mai usse mere ghar le aya hoon vo so rahi hai abhi

Poonam- ok ap uska khayal rakhiyega main guddan ke ghar pr phone kr ke bol detu hoon ki guddan mere saath hai aur aj hum dono yahi sanjay ke ghar hi rukenge agar Bhushan uncle ko pata chala toh vo bhi pareshan ho jayenge

Akshat- ok jesa tumhe thik lage and he cut the call

Akshat to himself- I promise guddan bhaut jald tumhare iss dard ko mai hamesha ke liye khatm kr dunga aur tumhre dil ne jo tumhse kaha hai na usse bhi sach sabit kr ke dikhaunga tumhara humdard ban kr dikhaunga main guddan Because I love you Dr. Guddan Gupta bhaut jald tumhe apne dil ki baat bhi bataunga or usse phele mujhe tumhe iss dard se bhar nikalna hoga...

End of Part

So this is the end hope you like it and pls don't get angry for late update once again sorry for that...

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Viditian1

Update kb milega??

Plz update soon...w8ing

Update dear

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