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Part 14

Next day early morning guddan was sitting in the lawn, reading some novel but there also she was thinking about him,thinking about the last night...

Guddan to herself- yeh kya ho gaya hi tujhe guddan, agar yahi sochti rahi Na toh pagal ho jaogi ek din, ho kya jaogi ho hi gayi ho tabhi toh puri raat karwathen badalne mai nikal di dhang se soo bhi in payi acha huwa panda ghode bech ke so rahi hai ni toh...

There in the room akshat was also restless and thinking about her all the night but now it was difficult for him to be on bed so he get up and moves towards the lawn and there he see her sitting on chair and lost in her own thoughts

Akshat- neendh jaldi khol gayi, ya raat bhar soyi hi ni ayi, umm

Guddan (in her mind)- inhe kaise pata chala ki hume raat bhar neendh ni ayi

Akshat- oh hello, kaha kho gayi

Guddan- ni vo hum toh bus yaha vo novel padh rahe the bus, vase agar yahi sawal hum ap se puche toh???

Akshat- toh mera jawab hoga tum, tumne hi toh mujhe sone ni diya and winks

Guddan looks at him in embarrassment

Akshat (looking towards the chair)- may I

Guddan- please

Akshat- thank you, vase kaun si book read kr rahi thi iss waqt

Guddan- The Silent Patient

Akshat- Alex Michaelides' Mystery Thriller

Guddan- haan apne bhi padhi hai

Akshat- haan kuch chapters padhe hai

Guddan- toh apko bhi padhna pasand hai

Akshat- bhaut tumhe pata hai maine toh hostel mai rahte huwe apni ek choti si library bhi bana li hai, remember vo do cartoons jo kal tum pouch rahi thi ki isme kya hai

Guddan- toh usme apkacollection hai

Akshat- collection ni pr hai kuch novels vagarh hai

Guddan-chaliye phir next time jab bhi hume koi nayi novel chahiye hogi toh hum library na ja kr apke pass hi aa jaya krenge

Akshat- tum aogi (murmuring to himself)

Guddan- kuch kaha apne

Akshat- ni...haan kyun ni tum jab chaho aa sakti

Guddan- thank you

Akshat- thank you ke liye tumhe mere saath coffee pini padegi

Guddan- ok and she was about to go but akshat stop her

Akshat- maine kaha tumhe mere saath coffee pini padegi jane ko ni

Guddan- arey agar hum jayenge ni toh coffee kese banayenge

Akshat- toh kisne kaha ki coffee tum banaogi

Guddan- matlab hum kuvh samuhe ni

Akshat- aj coffee main banaunga and he went to the kitchen, guddan looked him. He was in kitchen and searvhing something. She also went to the kitchen

Guddan- coffee dundh rahe hai

He nodded in yes

Guddan- yaha hai and give him coffee container, main bana deti hoon

Akshat- no its ok, aj tum Akshat Jindal ke haath ki coffee pikar dekho, he said happily

Akshat was making coffee and his back was towards her, he was busied himself in making coffee. There guddan was looking towards him like an idiot and thinks he had a muscular body looks like he spend alot of time in gym,he was quite attractive.

Akshat- busy in checking me out, i can feel your gaze on me you know...Listening this her face become red

Guddan (in her mind)- inhe kese pata chala ki hum inhe hi dekh rahe hai...

Akshat turned and looked at her and her face was still red

Akshat- here's your coffee

He said and guddan grabbed a coffee mug from his hand and her finger touched his hand and a shiver ran in her body. Thank you guddan said and he smiled and both went to the lawn and sat on the chair. Guddan take the sip from the coffee and thinks it was really good

Akshat- so hows the coffee

Guddan- ummmm thik thak hi hai and chuckled under her breath and akshat makes a puppy face to which she starts laughing on his facial expressions

Akshat (looking into her eyes)- you looks more beautiful when you laugh

Guddan- coffee bhaut achi bani hai and quickly change the topic

Akshat- I know it was because main coffee mai namak ni dalta hoon na amd smirked

Guddan knows she was done and embarrassment clearly shown on her face but then she think it was not all her fault

Guddan- hume pata hai ki humne apki coffee mai namak milaya that but that's all because of you

Akshat (with confused face)- because of me... How

Guddan- who told you to mocked me up

Akshat- really Dr. Gupta its my fault aur vo kaun tha jo mujhe tane maar raha tha

Guddan- pata hai ap ladko ki yahi toh problem hai ki ap log kabhi apni galti ni mante aur sari ki sari galti hum pr dal dete... Suddenly guddan stop in mid and remember someone with whom she was fighting in same ways

Guddan ( witj teary eyes)- I'm sorry Dr. Akshat

Akshat noticed her wet eyes- hey are u ok?? Ni matlab abhi toh tum argue kr rahi thi jansi ki raani ban kr aur ab achanak se sorry, kabhi kabhi toh tum mujhe kisi surgery se bhi jayada complicated lagti ho

Only she knows she was listening him or not but she is definitely lost in her own thoughts and she came back to the reality when akshat shakes her

Akshat- kaha kho gayi tumhara phone baj raha hai kab se

Guddan- hello, haan veeru bolo

Vardhan- di ap ghar kab tak aogi

Guddan- kya huwa sab thik toh hai na vaha

V- haan di sab thik hai arey ap bhool gayi apne vaada kiya tha ki ap mujhe song selection mai help krengi competition ke liye

Guddan- haan hume yaad hai bus ek baar yeh road clear hi jaye phir hum aate hai

V- ok di , aur ek baat ap chalengi namere saath

Guddan- ni veere hum vaha ni aa sakte

V- lekin kyun di, meri life ka itna imp day hai aur ap hi ni aogi toh main kya krunga

Guddan- tum ache se jate ho ki hum vaha kyun ni ana chahte hai toh please hume force maat kro please and she cut the call. Some flashback of her past comes to her mind and a lone tear escaped from her eyes

Akshat who was listening all her talk could only understand that there's definitely something that was bothering her may be her past but what???

And guddan thinks tum kyun ni samjhte vardhaan agar hum vaha gaye toh hume vaha phirse vo sab yaad dilaya jaega jo hum yaad ni krna chate bhoolna chate hai hum uss din ko un logo ko pr...

End of Part

So this is part 14 what do you think whats her past is??? Who are those peoplea about whom she was talking... Well so many questions na but you guys get all your answers in next two parts

Plz ignore typos and grammatical mistakes and pls tell me how you like this part...

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Akshananju

🥳🥳 hum khush hue 😆

Thanks

Next part updated please check

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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Amazing👍🏼

Continue asap😛

Next part updated please tell me how was it, waiting for your views😊

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Posted: 6 years ago

What's her past that she get very sad even remembering it😒😭please jaldi update karo yaar next part😳

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Posted: 6 years ago

Ye kaun sa past hai

Continue asap

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Posted: 6 years ago

Amazing update❤️

Plz guddan ka past jldi se btao..hope akshat use apne past se bahar nikale😃

Plz update soon😃chlo ab mai chli pdai krne ab mera mann ache se lgega😆

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Posted: 6 years ago

Superb update

Love it

Cont soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Akshananju

What's her past that she get very sad even remembering it😒😭please jaldi update karo yaar next part😳

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Ye kaun sa past hai

Continue asap

I will try to update next part tonight once I get free from my household chores

And her past regarding mystery will solve in next 2 parts

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Viditian1

Amazing update❤️

Plz guddan ka past jldi se btao..hope akshat use apne past se bahar nikale😃

Plz update soon😃chlo ab mai chli pdai krne ab mera mann ache se lgega😆

Yeh jawan apni puri tayari kr rahi hai next part likhne ki khosis krenge ki apko jayada itnezaar na krayen😊...

And all the best for your exam 👍🏼

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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Superb update

Love it

Cont soon

Thanks for liking it

Will try to update tonight😊

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