O RE PIYA #Akshan FF--Part 18 Updated on Page 26

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O REPIYA

Hi! Guys this is my first story on our lovely couple Akshan...

Index

Part 1- pg 2

Part 2- pg 4

Part 3- pg 5

Part 4- pg 6

Part 5- pg 7

Part 6- pg 9

Part 7- pg 11

Part 8- pg 11

Part 9- pg 13

Part 10- pg 14

Part 11- pg 15

Part 12- pg 17

Part 13- pg 19

Part 14- pg 20

Part 15- pg 21

Part 16- pg 24

Part 17-pg 25

Characters:

Akshat Jindal- 25 yrs old, PG (MS-GeneralSurgery) Final year student. The mosteligible bachelor and topper and a prankster.

Angad Verma-Best friend of Akshat Jindal

Guddan Gupta-24 yrs old, PG (MS-Gynaecology) First year student. Free spirited girl, veryconfident, multi-talented girl and the topper

Poonam Soni-Guddan’s childhood bestie.

Akshat’sFamily

Mrs. SantiJindal his grandma.

Dr. ParagJindal and Dr.Savitri Jindal- Parents of Akshat the very well-known and famousdoctor couple of Indore and the owner of Jindal Hospital.

Dr. ShekharJindal – Younger brother of Dr. Parag and uncle of Akshat. His wife Dr. PoojaJindal dentist by profession

Akshat eldersister Mrs. Kajal Singh and her husband Mr. Perv Singh an honest policemen.Dhruv, Kavya and Naman cousin of Akshat.

Guddan’sFamily

Mr.Bhushan Gupta government employee, recently got transfer to Bhopal from Delhi.Mrs. Kaushalya Gupta housewife.(her parents)

Vardaan (veeru)and Revati (chutki) her siblings.


This is just the characters small intro, first part will update at tonight....

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Interesting

Akshat ki elder sister ka first name aur mra name same hai😂

Will wait for ur update

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sorry for the alignment error don't know what happens but i'm unable to fix it right now. next time i'll take care before posting...

sorry once again

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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Interesting

Akshat ki elder sister ka first name aur mra name same hai😂

Will wait for ur update

what a coincident

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Yup😛

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Interesting as medical background

Continue soon

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Really Interesting

Update Soon

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Dr Jindal -sahab and Dr Gudiya are smokin hot!

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Part 1

A beautiful house is shown with a small garden in front of thehouse and varieties of seasonal flowers are planted there. A girl is doing artiin the house temple, her parents come and join her after finishing arti she gives the Prasad to her parents, and then touches their feet. The girl isnone other than Guddan. Then she moves to kitchen to prepare the breakfast.

Kaushalya- Guddan beta tu yeh sab rehne de main krti hoon tu ja, ja kr tayar ho ja varna phele hi din late ho jayegi college ke liye.

Guddan-Don’t worry maa sab kaam time pr hoo jayega aur vase bhi college ki timing 10 baje se hai or abhi subhah ke 7 baje rhe hai. Aur rahi baat breakfast ki toh vo hadhe ghante mein ban jayega phir hum tayar bhi ho jayenge oK…

Kaushalya- tu ni manegi na.

Guddan- ni…(saying this both mother and daughter start laughing)

Bhushan- acha agar tum dono maa beti ka ho gaya ho toh mujhe meri chai milegi plz.

Guddan- ye lijie papa aapki chai.

After some time

Revati- Good morning maa-paa. Good morning di, hmmm halwa banaya hai, taste karo na plz apke haath ka bana huwa halwa toh world best hai di.

Guddan- bus bus jayada makhan lagane ki zaroorat ni hai teri lunch mai pack kr diya hai school main kha lena aur kitne frnds bana liye naye school mein ye toh hume bata hi ni.

Revati- acha ji kal jab main bata rhi thi tab toh aap pata ni kaha chali gayi thi.

Guddan- acha baba sorry vo college gayi thi document submit krne the toh par koi baat ni aaj sham ko college se ane k baad aram se bathe ke baat krenge. Chal abhi meri help kr yeh nasta lahane mai.

Bhushan- are hamare shaabzade kaha hai, abhi tak so rhe hai aj college ni jana kya?

Kaushalya- veeru..veeru oh yeh ladka bhi na main dekh ke aati hoon.

Guddan- maa aap nasta kijiye veere ko hum bula ke late hai.

In verdhan’s room, he was still in asleep. Guddan and Revati enterin his room and try to wake him up

Guddan- veere veere uth ja subha ho gayi hai aj college ni jana kya

Veeru- coming di two mins.

Guddan-no not a sec more… agar 15 min mein tum niche ni aye to haj nastani milega. Esa papa ne kaha hai.

Veeru- papa se bachane ke liyeaap ho na

Revati- haan bhai par aaj toh aap ko di bhi ni bacha payengi, kyunki ajunka college ka first day hai aur unhe jaldi jana hai.

Veeru-ok fine 10 min mein aa rha hoon.

After 10 min he comes down and Revati and Bhushan already went to school and office respectively. Guddan is also ready to go to college she is waiting for her friend Poonam her school friend sorry best friend. They together completed their high school from D.A.V school Bengaluru then after Poonam father got transfer to Bhopal and guddan father got transfer to New Delhi. Their father are also good friends.

Poonam- sorry sorry late ho gayi, good morning aunty kaisi hai aap?

Kaushalya- good morning bache main thik hoon tum kaisi ho?

Poonam- ek dam first class aunty vaise yeh miss. Punctual kahahai??

Kaushalya pointed towards kitchen

Poonam- guddan tu late hai chal abhi varna first day first lecture hi attend ni kr payegi..

Guddan- Poonam ki bachi rook zara main batati hoon kaun late hai.

Kaushalya- are tum dono baad mein jagad lene abhi niklo 8:45 ho gaye hai sach main late ho jayoge ni toh

Ji maa- yes aunty both said in union guddan hugs her mother and both went to college on guddan’s scooter.

To be contiune...

End of part 1

UP Next- Some guys are try to misbehave with Guddan andPoonam , and Poonam in trembling voice warn them not to mess with her otherwise consequences are not good and their first meeting...

I know this is quit long. Hope you guys like it plz ignorethe typos and grammar

And yes don’t forget to comment all your’s +ve & -ve comments are welcome.

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Guddu having my profession

Hayee.... Kamaal ho gya yeh toh!

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