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my completed stories ...


Complete FF





Life of geet ( complete )


Prologue

Geet kapoor What is love or marriage I don't get meaning of marriage or so called love after two year of marriage, yes I am married women for society I am mrs geet dev kapoor but in my marriage I always trusty for love respect from my husband Kya hamari society main women /aurot hona itna bada pap/sin hai, my so called husband always abused me for his physically incomplete Yes he could not make physical relation with any women, and he could not digest this truth and everyday he torchar me abuse me for his inconvenience. Then you can ask me about my family but on name of family I have my uncle and cousin brother they only want to finish their duty with marriage and get the rid from my responsibility. In my life I have happy moment in my working place yes I am working women because my husband earn for only drinks and his so called hobby race and many other so my job is for our basic things of life and I have wonderful friend like Pinky and Adi ,many people may ask why I cannot divorce dev ,and I admit that I don't have guts to face the society as single women when everybody want to abused or took advantage of single women so''.this is my life I lost my all hopes from my life


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Journey of maaneet arrange marriage
( complete )

This ss based on Marathi film Yanda kurtaya ahi in this maan is not tycoon but working on good post ,have arrange marriage because of family pressure but last is his decision to choose girl but situation is he don't get time to meet that girl before marriage because of his ill dadi marriage happen within one week he first meet her in front of his dadi ma

So it is journey of couple who don't know about each other what is their like ,dislike there nature etc, so both have tension how they go with situation

Girl who is maan would be wife is geet who is shy, talkative very closed to her family specially to her father (that is fun)of this ss




Journey ... Season two ( complete )



Prologue


marriage means trust , trust on partner , soul mate if you fail to trust your soul mate than , you lost most imp things of your life , which only give you pain and remorse , i done that mistake

Maan

You have to make limit to every relation , some time without your intention you make damage to your closed relation ...
geet

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Adoore Sapane

Prologue


It is so important that every one have to followed elder in there own carrier /business ,he don't have right to choose his own way , he cant give decision for himself for god sake I am artist and I cant match this so called profit making business world, corporate world with fake smile with fake thought where on name sake of profit they ready to do any wrong any sin , I cant be a profit making machine i cant live in limit of rule ,regulation why cant papa understanding me why

And for mom I am dome student who gate only passing marks which damage her image in society ,why she always look me as failure A Big Zero why she look my as her son who want his mother love why some sound stared in my room

You are failure

You are big zero

You are ashamed for us

You are shame on our family

You cant be true kuhurana

I want shout NO NO stop it stop it ,yes I am zero ,I am zero but now iam free from your so called practical world where emotions is same word for fool and I am big fool so I don't have right to live in this practical world so I Mr. Maan kuhurana free my parent from my Zero and he start to laugh like manic and whole bed of room drench with red blood

in other city in one house one girl standing before mirror and thinking After all this I have to live life for else/other because others life are depended on me when my body ,my soul have so much injury i cant finish my life because of other, bachpan se ( bachpan chut gaya kya ?) IS my childhood passed don't know? Not live for me with my opinion with my lifestyle and now I cant died , death decision also not mine hamesha dusro ke liye jiti ayi hu abi khud ke liye mar bhi nahi sakti why god why I got this punishment in my life of 16 year old yes I am 16 year old Geet handa who want to die but don't have right of death of myself why why why me she just look to her image in mirror she saw her tummy without any expression , beautiful eyes of that girl looking so dead emotionless, lifeless




second thread of Adoore sapane

Adi ke shadi ka band Maan ke haat ...EPL of Adoore


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ss Dhadkan do dilo ki
( complete )


Prologue

Maan car passing thru single he saw a beautiful face moment stop for him when he saw that beautiful face like angel who is standing near car and laughing with whole heartily like some sound of soft music two beautiful almond shape brown eyes like door of her soul ,his heart thudding in full speed he never saw such beautiful face of girl in his life he just hold his breath , he don't know that is dream or reality MSK who ignore girls is looking a girl live prevent person her earring dancing with her move and kiss her cheek he is felling jealous with that earring like only he have right to touch that parri ,he just looking to her and drinking her beauty with his eyes he just want to touch her ,hug her But when his eyes went to her neck he got shock of life ,his heart which dancing in joy before some time brake in thousand pieces ,he first time feel about a girl but she is married




Epilogue of Dhadkan do dilo ki

MSK ki suhag raat hogi ke nahi hogi

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Fate of the unfortunate


thread 3
Thread 4


Prologue


one lady between 20 to 22 lying on bed without any cloth ,one man just attacking her body without any mercy , but she cant react to him , like his touch not touching her body , her mind her soul is not present with her beautiful body yes she have perfect beautiful body which made anyone crazy but she just hate herself , her body which took her in present situation ,she don't react to that man , that made that man more and more wild all her body turn blue with his bits , but she never hiss in pain , at last when that man finish his work he just slap her on her cheek and say You w****, cant response , i give money for this to you're your ...HUSBAND ,she say first word in full night


Yes her husband send her with another man for S** so he get money, she is his money making machine her body is way of his earning she is MRS GEET SINGAHANIYA /GEET HANDA a s***, she smile on her faith and push that man away and went from their after wearing her cloth and most imp things , money without that she cant entered in her own house ...after half hour she reach her house and start to knock door , after 5 minute , a man yes her so called husband open door ,and first come dirty smell of alcohol ,


she feel like omitting ,she want to enter ,but he just say , money , she just put all money to his hand and run to her room, she don't want to look his face also for second ...she just open her room door and went to near bed their her life sleeping peacefully and she get her life back , a small smile come on her face she just kiss that baby face , yes baby her baby ,her life Muskan 4 month baby ...she just took shower and clean herself , she want to clean that touch also but smile sadly and say herself ...you cant clean that dirt from your body till whole life geet , she smile sadly


she just come out and took her baby on lap and start to feed her ,her milk , that baby missing mother milk , she start suck hungrily in her sleep also...which brought tear in geet eyes ,she just say why , why with me , what is my fault so i got life like this ...why


thread 2



thread 3

Thread 4

os on fate Family drama os Fate family


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prologue

one girl age 19 standing in front of court
so many thought in her mind is she is
really bad that she cant stop her desire
who just flow with her own boyfriend word and action
kya girls don't have desire or body need
and that so called boyfriend he just record all that and
sell that video on web side
usne to muje S*** hi bana diya
so many ask me my price

such main in sb main meri hi galati hai kya
puri taraha , family ne to ushi din sath code diya
jab wo video ...


lakin i want justice game to usne khal hai
wur usae koi saza nahi why ...

but who will help me ye to meri nani hai mere
sath nahi to pata nahi ...



ndex

part 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4102273/mg-fight-for-justice-conquering-untruth-13-14-on-100-103-20-21-oct

teaser and note

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4102273/mg-fight-for-justice-conquering-untruth-13-14-on-100-103-20-21-oct?pn=7

teaser
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4102273/mg-fight-for-justice-conquering-untruth-13-14-on-100-103-20-21-oct?pn=14

part 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4102273/mg-fight-for-justice-conquering-untruth-13-14-on-100-103-20-21-oct?pn=18

part 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/111333545


part 4
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4102273/mg-fight-for-justice-conquering-untruth-13-14-on-100-103-20-21-oct?pn=34



PART5



PART 6



PART7


PART 8



PART 9


PART 10



part 11

part 12

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/114438413


part 13



part 14



part 15


part 16 (last part)









MG ff A Love story

a boy age 23 for me life means masti
full of sharab and shabab
my fanda change girl
like cloth so jada tang nahi
karati lakin why girl
are so talkative kash koi mute girl mil jaye
please god


a girl age 18
standing in front of mirror
and thought yes one day
i will do it , when i say
and all lesion

just than someone pull her leg
and she come out from thought and

say what i am late for khurana
mention



aditya - ye msk aisa dikhata hai
kitana bada Casanova hai but
i know he is still virgin






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MG ff Uljhe Rishtey----kahanni ek unkhili kali ki


KM ...like every day

maan stop it sameera I just want our child not else

you say doc say that you cant go with pregnancy

so we took decision of this surrogate mother decision

you trust that doc and that hospital

now that so called doc saying that they plant that my

sperm in wrong women

and you telling me after one and half month now tell me how we will search to that women how sam just speak up dam

same city

one girl in 18 just sit on bed with pregnancy test kit which indicate

positive , she just totally blank with result she just thinking when nobody touch me in any sense than what it this... it is fifth kit which giving positive sine ...

thread 2

thread 3


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prologue


today is 10 class result there is so tense every wear on boy who get good mark just celebrating with his friends just than someone grab him with his collar and just punch him hard near his eyes that poor boy just cried and look

to that boy who punch him hard ...

a boy in his dark red pant and dark green shirt , rumal around neck , have yellow gogal on eyes age around 16 year

Boy - maaan

maan- yes maan to bhidu to paas ho gaya

boy- nodded in yes

maan - aur main fail ho gaya

boy- nodded in yes again but in fear

maan- to mere baap ko mere fail haone ki happy news tune di kya fattu

boy- just gulp hard and nodded in yes

maan just rised his hand to again hit him but adi , Vicky just hold him and pull him away and say maan ,tera baap ghar pay teri raah dekh raha hai

maan - pata hai meri vaat lagane ko

maan just look to that boy who shaking with fear , tei to main baad main band bajaunga abhi to muje baap ka dram dekhana pdega ...

same area in medal class family

a beautiful girl age 16 just taking blessing from her father

Geet - she just say in low voice pitaji main wahi admission lungi jaha app kahenge

she is geet handa , her father word is always command for her don't have her own mind decision , have good voice her father want she become singer always in two choti ... taking duppata like this so nobody look her inch of body always talk in shudh hindi have 85% in 10 th class joining collage which is start in next



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Yodha The unknown Warrior


Maan

hi i am maan singh khurana
son of veer sing khurana
who never like robbery thief ect

today i am big dacott / daku
of this area and i proud of on that
if living with self respect is wrong than
i am wrong
if i rob that rich people who all ready
to drink poor blood is wrong
than i am wrong

my father live for this village
and i become robber for this village people only
an i proud on that

but in all this l lost ...
a beautiful pair of eyes in come front of him



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Marriage " A cry of agony"

Prologue



A marriage means only togetherness of body or mind big question or just mere physical need it is so hard for a human that think about the partner in married life ? ego is bigger than a relation


I heard that you can win other heart with love but when that love feels suffocates then what shall we do? for other partner love means just dominated than that can call love or just madness , a madness which kill another one slowly ...
she lost in deep thought



Man I want perfect perfect life , perfect office and perfect house and WIFE also I want she should live for me as I say what is needed for her opinion when I am there this woman are when your husband fulfilling your need na than what is need of freedom and opinion na


just make man happy with cloth , food and s** that sit when I think my wife live like I say than what is big issue waise bhi wife is a doll and I love to decorate her with my style and I love her ... it is my way to love



thread 2


blog part link
paasword 5777

thread 3 last thread




Index


Epl one and two on page 1

epl two on page 2

epl three on page 4

epl four on page 4

epl five on page 5

last epl on page 6




MG ff Bleeding Heart pain of love




Prologue
girl in her 22 age lost in deep thought
her hand full with beautiful mehandi desine
and marriage chuda indicating that she
is newly wedded bride but when any one look
to her face ,get shocked with so painful eys
and so many marks on face like
some animal attack on her
attack to animal ne hi kiya hai lakin jiska
naam admi hai ,insan ...
now big question is her marriage life
could be simple or normal like other
she is waiting for his reaction,
her husband
a boy around 24 lost in broken state
wo hamala uske izzat pe tha ya mere
kaisa husband hu main jo apni
wife ko nahi bacha saka un bhadiyo
se ...pata nahi main abhi kabhi uska
sammana kar sakunga ya nahi pata nahi
sahdi ke sirf 5 din baad on our honey moon
happen like this wo to muje cowered samjati'
hogi ...us din ke baad main to
uske samane bahi nahi gaya


Humari adhori Kahani


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prologue


maan

ku aisa hua mere sath

kya jo main last 3 saal se ji

raha tha wo sab zhoot tha

wo ku muje chod ke cali gai

ku ku kya career love se badkar

hota hai ...today i am so alone ...

because of her ...why so why geet

why




Marriage match of soulmate or mismatch


pro


When she come back after chaning she found all decoration of room goan and msk sleeping on bed in black trouser and

Black west ( geet mummer no no geet ye koi nightmere hai ye teri SR nahi ho sakti yaar )

Slowly she come near bed and sleep other side ,she is in so much thought ,what is happening ...aise kais wo ...atlast she closed her eyes and took deep breath

After few second she lost to took breath when she found his hand on her body ...maan make turn her to himself and ask her in plain voice do u want to took this relation to next level ...poor geet who lost in maan touch nodded ..and next moment before she reacted in any way.she found herself under his heavy body and before she stop him or react to his touch ... a painful cry escape from her mouth when ,maan first time entered in her its so sudden and not expected ...she is virgin and its first time ..he torn her like this no love no soft touch ,no closeness ,passion, not even small kiss,a tear escape from her eyes ...


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Edited by Mahimaan - 7 years ago
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HI GEET JI


ongoing stories ji



w story
Dosti ...
Bounding of soul
(disconnected)






Raabata...unknown relation of soul




pro



geet - babji ne muje ek chance diya tha apni zingi fhirse sawarne ka but i lost that chance
for this so called society


maan - usne mujmain and society main se society ko chun liya ,kya mera pyyar kam pad gaya






Mg do kinare ya humrahi ..







pro



geet - papa its clear I don't taking any risk u decide boy I am ready for marriage but my condition in I have to live with him in his house before marriage for 3 month if any family and boy ready with my condition than I am ready ...i can not risk it ,I have right to know my would ne husband and family ..its need ..we have to think practically in few meting we can not judge people na

Maan - I want a girl who respect me and my family ...and I don't want to meet her before marriage I want we start our journey on marriage day itself ,after marriage I try to know her and she try to know me I want our relation blossom naturally no meeting before marriage I want arrange marriage like my dadaji ...maan give answer to dadi ...who come to talk with him for rihsta which is coming from the Geet handa ...

Dadi and Mr.handa ...what should we do now our children things ...pole part from each other




Wo jo adhoori si baat baki hai


mg ff wo jo adhoori si baat baki ..part 7 on page 20 -4 dec

pro ...




Maan - his life stop for while he feel like someone stab him. from last 6 month he is searching her face like anything that she will come to collage for any reason for paper work ,for result but she don't come ..he count this 6 month with every second and every second become a century for him.. await from ages ...first his eyes land on her beautiful eyes ,her eyes who stole his heart before 3 years ..full of life she is less talkative but her eyes always speak which is in her mind ,heart . maan get irritated with her behavior why she is not looking to him ..why she avoiding to look him.he waiting for this one moment from last 6 month to once look in that eyes which is now his life. With lots of irritation he at last called out .Miss Handa ..his student

And she look upside ..to his side both soul eyes met for while a time stop for them its after so many days they looking to each other . maan missed his heart beat when he found some type of emptiness in that eyes. which make restless him like anything he know something bad happen to her but what in last 6 month what happen to her ..and how ..he want to hug her ,ask her what happen his eyes till now ask her that q that what happen to her ..he open his mouth to ask smoothing but next moment his life ,his all dreams crushed like anything ..when his gaze land on her head ...a maang full of sindoor ...he took two steps back ...when he sound blurr image of her ..maang main sindoor ...haat main suhagan ka chudda ..neck main mangalsutra ... He thought why image is not clear ..but next second get that ...its because of tear of his eyes ..which block clear view of his ex student Miss Geet handa ...miss ...but now she is mrs... he feel a pain in his heart ..his heart will be brust with pain ...pain of his love of life his life ka first love uska pehala pyyar adhoora reha gaya .

Maan once took deep breath and mummer in cold voice cong. miss ...I am sorry Mrs. geet ...with that he turn and went away from there not a single word ..after that ...

Thud geet come out from her past with sound of door which make sound because of air...she mummer softly I m sorry sir maan sir ...last 7 years its her daily routing to mummer sorry to that person who is her




Tanhayian: kahani do dilon ki

Pro ...




MAAN - shadi kehate do dilo ka soul ka aur family ka bandhan hota hai but what happen when this so called bandhan Janjeer ( chain ) ban jaaye jo sirf hume takleef hi de de..which only hurt us ..


Geet - kisko dosh su apne luck ko ...usko jisase main pyaar liya ,ya apni family ko jinohne kabhi muje pyaar kiya ya nahi i don"t know ...ya fhir my so called husband jo sach jaankar bhi anjan hone ke dikhava karta hai ...


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pro


man walking inside the cabin like angry lion what the hell How they Blackmail him for look girl for marriage come on In 21 century why we have to follow this custom ..do me or that girl is any showpiece jo ek duje ko dekhana hai . I m not going to attend this dekhna wakhna .

he stop with some one voice - to mat javo na why so much attitude na javo ...bol do family ko you don't want to go u r not intrsed in such things so simple ...khamkha office ka atmosphere ku kharab karke rakh diya hai Mr. Msk ...

That man turn to him with attitude ...and ask in hard tone why u come inside without knocking the door .upon that shut your big mouth because Msk don't need advice from you Mr. Vsk (Vicky singh Khurana )

Vicky reply coolly ye attitude ka 1 % gharwalo ko dikhate to Ye show se bach jate BHAI ...

Maan march to Vicky and pull him with shoulder don't call me bhai ...u are just 1 min small from me so stop this BHAI and all ...

Msk get irritated with word Bhai ...and Vicky very well know this so he love to irritated maan

Geet feel so much anger she ask in harsh tone if you not intresed in marriage than why the hell you come here to ...look me Mr .msk ...she pointed to maan ...stop your prank don't make stand your brother as MSK because I m not girl from any village ...I am city moden girl and I know each and everything about YOU Mr MSK...





Edited by Mahimaan - 7 years ago
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BOLO MAANJI 😆



ye lo mahi ki os and ss ji

my os









MG os Baate kuch unkahi si
( complete )


mg os Marriage of Solider (complete)


os on Fate Family drama


Adi ke shadi ka band Maan ke haat ...EPL of Adoore


⭐️


os Anjana Rasta








my other post

New writer of Geet Hui Parayi forum next writer on page no 8 - 6march

i will not vote in Nach

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3804079/i-will-not-vote-in-nach


How many time we have to hurt myself as GEET fan ?


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3987824/how-many-time-we-have-to-hurt-myself-as-geet-fan


please don't hurt yourself as fan of maaneet


Geet forum as well as writer need more active reader

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4061927/geet-forum-as-well-as-writer-need-more-active-reader


Happy friendship day



Please look once


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4183123/please-look-once-and-read-it



Happy geet 4 th anniversary


MGos of Mg Os compition


Why i madly love with this serial geet ?









Edited by Mahimaan - 8 years ago
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MAANJI YE DEV KO TO MAIN 😡
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BURE BOL MAT BOLA GEETJI WO MERA CHOTA SA BHAI HAI
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CHOTASA BHAI MAANJI APKA YE CHOTASA BHAI APKA
40 AGE KA HAI JI 😡
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CHOTASA BHAI MAANJI APKA YE CHOTASA BHAI APKA

40 AGE KA HAI JI 😡

Can't stop laughing on this line🤣
Edited by SoniyaLovesGc - 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SoniyaLovesGc

Can't stop laughing on this line🤣




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Thanks for opening up new thread didu!!
Congratulations for Dream come true with Maaneet
Love you !!
:))

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