First anniversary as writer of my Maaneet gift

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Posted: 11 years ago
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feel so lack of word i start my journey as writer
on same day last year that itme i dont imagin that
i write so mcuh story with my poor english
but you all just accept me and love me with
my all mistake and beocme most
imp part of my life
igot so many lovely reader from suhaana , twilight , doly , shah
feom mirror , tanvi , gunjar , chavvi and
christipie sabse choti disha so many

with each reader i have special bounding and i try to
communicate with them with pm , replay on there comment
they also pm me and ask about me and my family fhir wo fariya20 ho ya huma ,ya fhir mskseewani ya phir priya di


they all give me love and thier like so thank you so much pooja dadtna nahi
i have right to say thanks to all today
this forum is second house for me yaar
and i love you all

your mahi


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try to mention all name but if anyone chut gaya to mahi ko maaf karna





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Posted: 11 years ago
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my journey as writer


My first ff


Life of geet


my first ss

journey of maaneet arrange marriage




second ss
Dhadkan do dilo ki



Adoore Sapane


name by ar-art
Fate of the unfortunate


name by my pari pooja

MG ff Uljhe Rishtey----kahanni ek unkhili kali ki


baaner by gunjar and name by gunjar and Zeba


thanks all love you


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Posted: 11 years ago
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it just imagination
what if character of my ff all meet face to face all maan and all geet
i try my best so enjoy

gift so first anniversary
this specially for tolly of devils




Hotel dreamland just like new bride kun na ho Maan singh khurana ne sahdi to register ki but he throw party in his style just matching to his style thou geet is not ready for it but maan is Real mask he just convenes her in his style and viky and prem help him this time

maan invite all his family friends from uljhe , adoore , journey part 1 , fate Dhadkan and all just coming to celebrate their marriage , maan just make their arrangement in Hotel dreamland , par waha jo drama huwa hai he never forget that in his life time actually this are his friend from Forum , they always chatting each other but never saw each other thou they have name same , with wife name also same ...and many time make joke on that but poor soul don't know that nature make joke on them that they are carbon copy of each other including geet they have name same so they called each other with this name uljhe, adoore etc etc

But adi as usual make blunder and reserved room by his another employee who don't know about it he just confused and book 5room on MSK name all geet who are coming last night staying in that room , because all maan coming next morning day of party

when geet come one by one that hotel staff given key with shock expression but name Msk stopping them to ask anything

so now nobody no whose geet in whose room and next morning maan start to come one by one , hotel staff who want to suicide , few one type there resignation also in fear because they know big blunder waiting for them

now situation is like this

Journey 1 maan in Dhadkan geet room room no 1

Dhadkan maan in Journey 1 geet room room no 2

uljhe maan land in adoore geet room room no 3

adoore maan went to fate geet room no 4

and fate maan land in uljhe geet which is dengirous room no 5

so all happen like this

Journey 1 maan in Dhadkan geet room room no 1

Journey maan who was so desperate that he was away from his newly wedded wife from whole 24 hour just want to crash her and just love her he they buy beautiful sari for this function and he just want to see he in that from last night how many time he imagine her in that

he just entered in room and get shock of his life geet in long party gown his chu mui geet wearing a one shoulder gown for party how is that possible and same time he feel hurt that she not wear sari , poor boy don't know that dress nahi puri geet hi change na na replace hui hai ( mahi saying Babji save them from each other first time saying put them away from each other warna)

hear when Dhadkan geet saw maan she also get confused why she wearing jeans and t shirt because she know she don't like that but maan qus make her more confused , He just ask Why you wearing this , now she just want to brake her maan head with with cahdo , one full day he fight with her for this gown and now he asking why she wear this

dhadkan geet - maan stop it or eles eles I kill you today

journey maan- so shock with geet reply she and this bold ans with angry tone which is next to impossible , maan geet jab main apne honeymoon pe pehene ko kaha tha to tumne kitne nakare dikhaye the and now you wearing this in party

dhadkan geet - start to think ye maan ko kya hua and mummer Hum to yaha se honeymoon jane wale hai parso hi to humne humari SR hui hai waha se kal main yaha aa gyi hu and he saying this the word Sr brought red hu on her face , she just bite her cheek to control that hu she just mummer lagta hai ek din ke distance se hi ye pagale ho gye hai

Dhadkan geet - what honeymoon

journey maan- hamara honnymoon , he mumeer mahi itna lmab honny moon write kiya tha bhool gayi kya

Dhadkan geet- maan tum pagal ho gaye hai

journey maan seedha app se tum ye to , geet pagal main nahi tum ho gayi ho ek bar mubai chalo phir main tume

dhadkan geet - The word mubai stuck her and she just gasp loudly and just run behind curttan and start to say in loud voice mera maan kah hai help help she don't want to face him now it is so awkward she say so much

Dhadkan maan in Journey 1 geet room room no 2

Dhadkan maan in Journey 1 who also want to see her in that sexy gown he just nodded his head how he fight with her for that gown and so much hope he open door of room and just froze in his place , geet in sari

Dhadkan maan - hamesha manmani karti hai ajj to main sari khud apne hoto se nika lunga and than make her love than I will wear her that gown but he come out with geet word

Journey geet - Maaanji app aa gaye dekho app ki di hui sari main hum kaaise lag reahe hai

Dhadkan maan- ye phir se maanji and app kaha se aaya , sari ke sath ye word bhi lake aayi phir se , maan just closed his eyes and start to count 1 to 10 number to control his anger

Dhadkan maan- geet ek baar party khatam hone ke baad halo hoonymoon pe rhir ye tumara maanji and all dekhta hu along with you without this sari

journey geet - just gasp with his word and say loudly again honnymoon abhi to hum hoonymoon se wapas aaaye hai na kerla se phir se dhadkan maan who till than holding geet pallu get reality poor boy turn pale ye geet journey wali hai the Msk literally run out of room with fool speed

geet - just mummer to babaji maanji pagal ho gaye hai

uljhe maan land in adoore geet room room no 3

uljhe maan land in adoore geet room thou he don't like idea that sending geet alone , but he cant deny to them also he just scaring fro this kid women who become be mother in some month , he mumeer in low voice don't called he kid nahi to yahi kaand kar degi he gulp hard and enered in room but blow with geet adhoore geet who is in lengha he just get confused ye tom boy girl and lengha

uljhe maan - are you ok tum ye girl wale clothe kab se pehani lag agyi , he just start to tease her

adoore geet who is missing maan desperately now she cant stay away from her maan , their distance made her like that , she get confused with maan qus but she ignore because now she wanted their lollipop , and she feel shy to tale

uljhe maan who is waiting her reaction like new name or some kand , saw shy shy geet he just closed his eyes two three time geet and shy , blush port poll , he also worried for her so he ask can you take your milk

adoore geet make pout and say what milk I am not kid muje loolipop chiye

uljhe maan what lollipop ...you are just kid yaar doodh peena accha hota hai ya lollipop khana , teeth kharab ho jayenge

adoore geet - make more confused face and say what maan milk milk milk aur hum kab se lollipop khane lag gaye hum to lollipop karte hai na

uljhe maan - just get irritated and say geet you start your pregnancy mood swing kya and that brought geet in reality this is not her maan ye to wo KID wale geet ke maan sir hai oh she just turn her back to him

uljhe maan - now what why you giving your back to me

adoore geet - wo wo main wo geet nahi hu I am geet handa coming from mubai with my pari my child

uljhe maan --- now he got what is lollipop because maan share with him this he just mumeer sorry in rush and went out

adoore geet - she just look to babaji and say kya babaji first time lollipop manga wo bhi wrong maan se

adoore maan went to fate geet room no 4

adoore maan just entered in room he just want to meet his pari he just say

geet kaha ho pari kaha hai boll lake bahar gayi hai kya

fate geet - who is in bathroom first she is happy she hear maan voice but maan qus make her confused now Who is this pari

geet just come out and ask what pari

maan who desperately want to meet pari just say in irritating tone ,my pari geet now don't play with me just tale me where is she

fate geet want to replay but she saw rat on door and she just jump on sofa with fear and just called rat rat please save me save me

adoor maan who just get angry with her first she not taling where is his pari upon that she saying rat to his pari , now that is hight , he just point out his finger and say don't called her rat , I warning you , she is not rat she is my pari

fate geet who shaking with fear ,mummer how he know that rat is he or she

maan heard that and say in loud voice agar main in hotose usko ease dunniya main laaya hu to muje pata hoga na wo he hey ya she

fate geet - app ek chuhe ke liye muje daate rahe hai muje apko chuhe se bachana chiye ya ushe pari pari kehna cahiye appko mujese jadaa apne chuhye se payyar hai

adoore maan get confused with her word ye pari ki bath kar rahi hai ya wooo wale chuya ki ..., you talking about rat or chuha ,he ask her

Fate geet - app ek baar muskan villa chaliye dekho dadi ko sab bata dungi

adoore maan shocked with muskan villa oh no ye to fate wale , maan beta bhhg le warna ...he just run from there

fate geet ...babaji ...

fate maan land in uljhe geet which is dengirous room no 5

fate maan who brought some ballon for musky entered with ballon and milk bottal for musky called geet dekho main muski ke liye kya laya hu , but stop in his place , geet in his losse shirt and track pant , he get confused she never wear this

uljhe geet - who accepting tease of maan but this height he brought ballon and milk bottal , he calling her kid its ok but ballon and milk bottal

she just greeted her teeth MAAN sir

fate maan - think ye maan sir kaha se aaaya but he again ask veer ke saath hai kya muski

uljke geet , what muski and who is veer

maan now start to get angry , um muski ko nahi jaanti your daughter musky

uljhe geet - what daughter , muje beta chiye wo bhi golu she also want to tease him

maan eyes pop out beta chiye ,his geet saying all this this bold geet maan get shy with her demand and imagin geet with his another baby ared hu come in his cheek

uljhe geet - ye drakula itna sharma ku raha hai , ma to main bane wali hu na

fate maan - wo bhi ho jaayega geet lakin humin shadi karni hai , phir SR than we make another babay

now geet just pick near pillo and just throw on maan and say loudly stop it you Drakula singh khurana , what doughter or son wo to 7 month baad pata chelega na

fate maan eyes winded in shock ye to wo ulhje wali Kid geet

he just say sorry kid geet ji , that sit geet just tool glass of milk and just empties on maan head and say in warning tone Don't called me kid


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ohh... mahi u r the best writer dear
i can't stop laughing🤣
this work is really brilliant
🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hahahahahahaha ohhh god mahi ur tooo good n nauty just cant belive this happen me actual wonder how u write this os but just amaizing poor fate wala maan
fantastic superb what say more kon sa maan kis geet ka
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Posted: 11 years ago
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n poor hotel staff too yaar itna sarey MSK hotel waley kasi handle kare hongey n poor adi woh toh gayi when all maan know the blender ohh god save staff n adi hahahahahaha
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Posted: 11 years ago
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iska ek part aur hona chahiya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oww...
mommy scarred of me 😛
its ok..
aaj sabb maaf hai aapko
😊
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Awesm mahi sab maan geet ko ek saath daal diya cant stop laughng nd congratz it has been 1 year since u hv startd writng i wish nd pray may god keep u happy nd healthy nd u write lot of maaneet tales nd keep all of us united 😃
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OMG!!!Lovely OS😆😆You are Amazing writer dear👏👏👏 I can't stop laughing🤣🤣 Loved it so much❤️❤️⭐️

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