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Posted: 8 years ago
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hello all i know i m going to scold by all of u



but from two day watching geet serial part



where maan save geet from brije in hosiyaarpur jungle wala part


before geet arrested brije


and i cannot stop myself to write this ...😛



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Posted: 8 years ago
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part one



Geet face so much up and down from last few days her life turn up and down like this a 18 year old girl who have so many dreams of study and all ,like all normal girl ...shutter in pieces like this when her own family who think that beti hai marry her and remove burden from life ..par uske papa ki to wo dulari thi na phir papa ku maan gaye uske marriage ko like this...why papa give more importance to family than her life ,her study , her carrier why so .. ek baar mere liye ladate (fight) with family society

Bas Canada name make them forget to make inquiry about groom wo kon hai, kaisa hai ,usaka charters kaisa hai ... wo insane hai ya haiwan(devil) ...wo to hawain se bhi bather nikla jo mera sab kuch palo main aise lake gaya jaise koi ...breath lata hai so easily he stole my jeweler ,my land and my izzat also ...ku usko ek pal ke bhi nahi laga ye 18 saal ki ladki sath aisa na kare kam se kam uski izzat ko to haat na lagye ( do not touch her dignity )...

Kon jada doshi hai meri family jinko bas beti ki shadi ka farza nibhana tha ya fhir ...so called fraud husband jo ek pal ke liye bhi dara nahi meri life ko barbad karne main . ya fhir main khud jimedar hu ye sab ki jo apni life ke liye apni study ke liye na fight kar pai as that stranger means buyer of my land MR.khurana say...ya he is arrogant ...usko admi kaha nahi ja sakta jo ek machine lagata hai without feeling hamesha muje tokata hai that I am weak person khud ke faisale khud nahi lena jaanati ...jo roati jada hai souchti kam hai ..but he is right somewhere ...wo to apni land jo mere so called husband ne agent thru sell kar di usso .wo to apni cheez ke liye fight kar raha tha ..ya his word some time cut the soul but that all r true.

Main khud hi apni zindagi aise bikharke rakh di hai ...jisko smetna abhi mere haat main hai ya nahi ...ab kya karogi geet when your so called family ...got to know that u r PRGENET WITH your so called fraud husband . geet sadly smile on her luck ..jaha log baby hone ke liye taraste hai wahi ...salo intazaar karte hai tab mere jaise halat ki mari ladki ko...aise kimati cheez de di jisko wo birth de bhi paayegi ya nahi ...pata nahi ...

Girl soul start curse her ...what u mean by giving birth or not you have he not come to u ..(BABY ) its u and your husband who brought him or her ...tumara pati to bhagoda nikala ...geet at least u have to fight for your baby its your baby your part ...mehsoos nahi hota kuch geet ...one side you crying that your father not fight for u and other side u r going to do same things ...

Come on geet khud ke liye khadi to na ho saki fight for baby ..geet fight for baby.geet put her hand on her belly and mummer yes I m going to stand for u yes.

After few min she heard small voice near her room where her so called bhai ne usko band karke rakha tha ...aise jaise ...koi kaidi ho ...she open window of room slowly without making any sound she feel some danger like something more verse going to happen ...but what , her palm automatically reach to her belly ...

Next moment her eyes winded in shock when ..she heard his so called bhai making plan to kill her unborn baby ...she closed her mouth with her palm so her voice don't alert anyone ...with shaking hand she slowly closed window ...she took deep breath ..she have to think fast eles ..no no she don't even think about it no ...

She same time herd faint voice of her father from back door of room ...and next moment her father entered in room...her eyes winded in shock she took few steps in fear ...what if this time also he support his family than her ...she look to her own father with dought and painful eyes what life make her in few days ...

Mohinder handa geet father - putterji aisa na dekho ..awaj mat karo bas app javo yaha se wow o apke bache ko mar denge please putter ji ..

Geet - ask with craked voice app muje fhir fasa rahe ho na app zhoot bol rahe ho na bahar kon hai bhai ya taayaji ...

Mohinder - maff karo apne papa ko main sach bol raha ho jada time nahi hai bas app bhago yaha se with that he put some money in her hand and almost pull her outside of room as well as house ...he drag her to Jungle side so ...no one chase her...ek baar pane papa ke gale lagogi beti he ask her with hope geet nodded and hug her father for while and run to jungle side ...

But luck always bitter her ..now also her bad luck chasing her brije is around her ...he wait till mohinder get disappear ... geet start to walk fast don't know why but she feel like someone chasing her ..she look so many time back but no one is there ...

When she reach middle of jungle a words took her life from body ...

Geet handa do u have chance to run away from your brije bhai ...geet froze on her place itself ...she feel like she lost ability of talk ,walk to do any moment ...her body froze ...and next moment brije sward make first war ...and geet hand get cut with ...that she cried in pain and fear ...nahi bhai ...brije bhai aise na karo main apki geet hu ...

Brije - u destroy my pride my family pride geet ,,with than he attact on her leg ...her leg also get injured by brije sward. Next moment her soul shake in fear when brije put his sword on her neck a tear of helplessness come from geet eyes she hold her breath and closed her eyes ..and mummer babji give me one chance to save my baby fhir ye geet never going to beg u or anyone in life .please babji madat .

Edited by Mahimaan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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1. Bhai bana Kasai 😆


Aur soch ke batati hu


I was also watching some old episode few days back... On hotstar, yaad nahi konsa dekha, but it's still magical,
Aajkal ke serials toh fail toh grab my attention!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sundari.

Title suggestions

1. Bhai bana Kasai 😆


Aur soch ke batati hu


I was also watching some old episode few days back... On hotstar, yaad nahi konsa dekha, but it's still magical,
Aajkal ke serials toh fail toh grab my attention!!!

pari nice one😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mommy hum dono ko peetne wali hai...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sundari.

Mommy hum dono ko peetne wali hai...

unko online aane tho do tab deke ge
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Heart touching update dear, but about FIGHT FOR LIFE
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Posted: 8 years ago
#8
Fantastic start
I believe Geet was not at fault it was her family yet because she is helpless they will even blame her for getting pregnant when all she did was obey her family
Now Brij wants to kill her unborn claiming family pride , he is so wrong
He is only after Geet now because of his ego to make sure no female tries to stand up for herself and her very own honor
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Feeling 4 Geet! she obeyed and is nw being blamed! Hate Briij n his low thoughts!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice os..
Waiting for next update..

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