Msk ki SR hogi ke nahi hogi ? My ss Dhdkan Epilogue/ os (two part )

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Hi i get punishment for prank of first April and all demand Epilogue for
Dhadkan so surprise for all Epilogue in two part enjoy just imagine maaneet SR is not happen and maan come near room

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Msk ki SR hogi ke nahi hogi ?

after saying bye all went from their ,he just closed door of house and just to run to her room door , but stop in front of door he just hold his breath for some second and took deep breath , at last the moment come when he claim his geet in all way and it give it give goose bump to his all body ,all bold image start to come in front of him , now only he and his geet , he entered their room with DHAK Dhak heart beats , and just hold his breath all room decorated with flower and candle , it is near 7.30and moon start to shower his light for maaneet it gave divine look of room and their his bride sitting with veil other side



when meera and pinky took geet to room she get confused but when they make her sit on bed she got what is coming and her heart start to run like marathon Dhak Dhak ,cheek start to turn red like cheery , and meera and pinky just teasing her like hell she just cried pinky , both just went from their and she just waiting her maan , time is went like slow tortoises but when she heard door noise she just hold her breath sound of maan footstep making her more tense ,maan just sit near her and say in husky voice took breath geet geet just bite her lips and maan pull her veil from her face ,she looking so beautiful with closed eyes

Maan just lost in this breathtaking beauty he just bend near to her face to take her shaking rosy lips in his manly lips, he just inch away from her lips , his hot breath fail on geet lips and she took deep breath with closed eyes she feel his gaze on her ,maan lips just touch her lips and just than , mobile ring tone start ring loudly ,"don't touch it don't touch it" maaneet just look each other with shock , somebody just ruin their moment




maan just grown in anger and start to search mobile ,after good 5 minute he get it under bed , don't know whose mobile it he just took that call other side someone saying Karan where are you , come soon yaar and before maan say anything that person just cut the call , maan just want brake that mobile who ring in wrong time , but he don't want to scare geet on their SR itself he just went near her and say wo karan ka mobile shayad yahi rahe gaya

geet just smile nervousialy , maan just took long breath and again sit near geet and start to look her with so much love and desire , he just start to touch her hand from her palm to her shoulder with his long sexy finger , poor girl just got goose bump on her body ,maan touch just making her crazy just than maan hand went near her shoulder he try to pull her choli from her shoulder just than a loud voice come from somewhere , "chu wo na chu wo na chu wo na " for moment maan just look to geet he feel like geet singing like this next moment he just slap himself fro his stupid thought ,he again want to go to search the source of voice but this time geet stop him and she just went to search of voice source


she just crib to her babaji ye kesi SR hai , koi kuch karne hi nahi de raha , aur ye awaz kaha se aa rahi hai , after few moment she got another mobile near wallrobe , but till she took call it get cut , she just pouted give galiya to that caller and owner of phone and come near maan , poor boy make such face , like who is behind HIS FIRST SR (Mahi thinking sabki sr to first hi hoti hai na ) both maaneet control their anger and took deep breath and sit near each other



maan with such love and passion put his plam on geet cheek and start caressed with his fingers , a red /laal hu come on her cheek , maan just want to say that how she look beautiful with this Laal cheek , he just say geet ye Laal , just than song start to play in their room YE laal rang kab muje chodega ...geet just slap on maan hand with frustration and stand on floor and say in angry tone , Maan if it will be not stop in 5 minute than forget our SR got it Mr MSK maan just gaping her like maine kya kiya

he is now 100 % sure that 4 devil behind all this , he just want to kill them and he just took his mobile to dial adi , he get massage from adi itself



" kya Msk , Kabhi Kabhi nature ka aanad bhi uthana chiye / sometime you have to enjoy nature also



don't get its meaning na , just go to backside , you get meaning of my word and Ya sorry for prank ,enjoy"

adi ,pinky , karan , meera

Last part

Maan just pick up geet in his hand and went to backside of house and both gasp loudly because there is












Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ahhh cool
poor maneet man
i feeel for them
SR toh ho hi nahin rahi hai
yeh devils bhi naa
but so funny right
cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesum OS !Poor Maaneet! thank s4 da pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh my god poor maan and geet kya ringtones select kiya😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww poor maaneet devils ne sr ki band baja di
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hogi SR
kyun nahin hogi
waise kya punishment milli aap ko
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh man poor Maaneet. Didn't get their SR.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow great ending and an amazing epilogue
I'm really going to miss reading this story of your so much
thanks for sharing your story with us.
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Awaesome dear...its so funny...poor Maaneet😆😆
Thanks for the PM dear😳

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