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Posted: 10 years ago
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Adoore Sapane




Prologue


 

It is so important that every one have to followed elder in there own carrier /business ,he don't have right to choose his own way , he cant give decision for himself for god sake I am artist and I cant match this so called profit making business world, corporate world with fake smile with fake thought where on name sake of profit they ready to do any wrong any sin , I cant be a profit making machine i cant live in limit of rule ,regulation why cant papa understanding me why

 

And for mom I am dome student who gate only passing marks which damage her image in society ,why she  always look me as failure  A Big Zero  why she look my as her son who want his mother love why some sound stared in my room

 

You are  failure

 

You are big zero

 

You are ashamed for us

 

You are shame on our family

 

You cant be true kuhurana

 

I want shout NO NO stop it stop it ,yes I am zero ,I am zero but now iam free from your so called practical world where emotions is same word for fool and I am big fool so I don't have right to  live in this practical world so I Mr. Maan kuhurana free my parent from my Zero and he start to laugh like manic and whole bed of room  drench with red blood

 

 

 

in other city in one house one girl standing before mirror and thinking After all this  I have to live life for else/other  because others life are depended on me when my body ,my soul have so much injury  i cant finish my life because of other, bachpan se ( bachpan chut gaya kya ?)  IS my childhood passed don't know? Not live for me with my opinion with my lifestyle and now I cant died , death decision also not mine hamesha dusro ke liye jiti ayi hu abi khud ke  liye mar bhi nahi sakti why god why I got this punishment in my life of 16 year old yes I am 16 year old Geet handa who want to die but don't have right of death of myself why why why me she just look to her image in mirror she saw her  tummy without any expression , beautiful eyes of that  girl looking so dead emotionless, lifeless




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Dream come true with maaneet


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3857084


Life of geet
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3632879

Journey of maaneet arrange marriage (complete )
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3826436


New os Dhadkan do dilo ki
(complete )

 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98619632


Epilogue of Dhadkan do dilo ki


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3974738


Fate of the unfortunate 

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3952132


Journey ... Season two
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3921883


os  JAB WE MET

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3988417



Os Happy women day?

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3942891



my other post
happy republic day
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3897661

i will not vote in nach

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3804079


How many time we have to hurt myself as GEET fan ?


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3987824






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Important note

I want to finish ss journey...  so when should I stop with maaneet honeymoon Or you want to see there life till geets baby tell me

link of ss Journey ...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3826436

Yes I want to start another story the title is not decided  so help me to took decision  Prologue of story is given on following link please help me

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Posted: 10 years ago
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 till  geet  gets  baby

n  nice  start
looks intresting
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it is looking more interesting i loved it 
maan wanted to fly off with his dreams and here geet wants to end her life nice prologue 

one question is geet pregnant ??? i didnt get that point 
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Twilightsparkle

it is looking more interesting i loved it 

maan wanted to fly off with his dreams and here geet wants to end her life nice prologue 

one question is geet pregnant ??? i didnt get that point




yes she is pregnant and maan try to suicide so enjoy and suggest  title for it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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end with baby happy family one.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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pls dnt end journee to soon yaar..pls give some more parts..this is a very beautiful story...
as for your new story the prolong is very dif. from your other work and sound very interesting..tk you for giving us good stories...👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG...

this is very intriguing prologue...

Maan is trying to commit suicide because his parents don't let him live his life according to his choice and he is considered shame for his parents...

and there Geet is also in pain because she is pregnant in just only 16 years of age...is she married or she is raped by somebody...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...

I will suggest Title---
-Dard se Bhare do Dil...
-Dard se Pyaar Tak...
-Safar do Dilon ka...
-Mera Sahara Ban Jao...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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intresting prologue
 
want journey more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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adoore sapne
if u like it...
god maan wants to die... But parents are like tat oly now daysgeet pregnant hai kya???
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Maaan attempting suicide
Geet 16yrs n preggy
INteresting pirogue