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Posted: 11 years ago
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Journey of suffering heart /soul



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Mrs . geet sing kapoor : 21 year old daughter in law of big politician, Mr Ragav singh kapoor, wife of, vikram kapoor

Ragav sing kapoor : age 48 Imagine negative actor of Dhabang 1

Big name in politician world , go to any extend for money , power and most imp ...Name of family / khnadan ki izzat ...have one son Vikram and sister son MSK


Vikram Kappor : totally spoil Brut there is not one bad thing which is not his hobby bu he is GAY so called husband of Geet

Msk : Ragav sister son living with ragave family , man of word , moral never hurt anyone , angry young man with golden heart , just hate his mama /uncle and cousin brother

Another sleepless night , she just sitting in corner of room , clutching her own knee ...With fear, fear of trash her dignity, fear braking of her moral, fear from her own family her in law and husband, she sadly smile on word HUSBAND who destroy her life in second for name of family he destroy her life ,she never wanted money , power etc etc , she just wanted a family which support her in her sorrow , who support her in pain but look now her own family become reason of her pain ,pain of life time and she don't know how she will come out from this fear, pain which covered all her life like moon covered by thick cloud , their are no way to rescue ,she lost all her hope to come out from this pain this hell kapoor family

she accept his husband as he was full Burt , with lots of bad habit and most imp he is Gay ,but his own father not accepting this fact i accept my fate for my family name because there is more important family respect rather than life of human specially that human is girl she again smile on word WOMEN what a joke they don't respect women ,but they wanted womanhood for their hair ,Vansh i am helpful only to give child for their family name nahi to sbako pata chale jayega So called big politician of India Mr Ragav Kapoor have Gay son ...why they accept the fact ,just busy with family pride and all First become human treat other as human than make country but they are just busy with making money and caressing family pride , for this if they have to kill someone they are ready ...



But physical death is ok but how I will kill my dignity , my women hood my pride for them who are just monster in name of human why ...what should i accept from them they are with me from only last one month but family where I live my entire life they just turn their back to me like i am not existence in their world when i beg for help they just say i am dead for them my own parent , my family ,just thinking that can i live my whole life in false world away from fact can their love affection that all are false or their family pride is bigger than me ...


i come hear with so much dream , dream of lovely family , dream of caring humsafer who hold me protect me for entire life with friends teasing I start to saw beautiful dream of husband love , our Milan ,our become one in all manner but it is shutter before i can open my eyes ...humsafer to humsaya bane se phelhi hi hath chode ke chala gaya ya phir wo kabhi sath hi nahi tha don't know ...in SR just waitng him with so much shy and thudding heart ...har ek ahate pe dil ko lagta tha ke wo aa gaye mere liye sirf mere liye but reality always different from dream when i tiered after waiting for him just went near window there he going to outhouse with his friend , and i cant stop myself and just went to outhouse



sound coming from upper side , just follow that sound , with fear if anybody saw me , scold me ,but so many questions is bugging me from beginning he never , because he always cold with me always , never try to look me , touch me , my legs just moving to watch most worst nightmare of my life , which broken me in several pieces ,and i cant collect myself till my life time never



i just open the door of room and froze in my place their he is totally nude making with other other MALE my eyes winded in shock ,horror fro second my mind went blank and when reality hi me I broken like anything i just run from their , my tear just falling from eyes non stop ,i just omitting in bathroom that disgust image just again and again coming in mind , that night is start of my suffering , suffering physically as well as mentally and i cant share this to any body , and when I try to share with my family they just ans they know about this fact ...just than strike me How my father get biggest project in his life so my marriage is deal for them just deal ,when i ask qus I got slap with threaten that i cant open my mouth else , if I open my mouth than price is life of my mother ...i saw such helpless in m mother eyes that day ,That day Geet hand become orphan


i accept my faith for my mother life but destiny is not happy or satisfied with she want to saw me more suffer , and before i come out from this shock another blow in my life with demand by father in law ...that they wanted hair for family ,next generation ,i feel like somebody hit me with knife , just stabbed in my heart , , i looking him like if he want to make joke on me i just try to buried all my hope ,dream ,desire and they wanted child from me ...don't know what come in me and i just ask in taunting tone how with help of your Gay son , my pain my struggle of this days just come out with that question and for my ans i got a slap on my face ...blood come from mouth but i don't feel any pain but next word of that monster just took land from my foot ...Yes my son is gay but not me ...he just took my hair in his hand and say with lust be ready for tonight to handle real MAN and he just try to touch my lips with his another hand


just than someone come their ...i dont know who is that because it is all behind my imagination how my own father in law say like this for hair , for family pride how ...he is place of my father age and he just ,one made come near me and took me in room , my room and sit their with blank mind , I just lost power of thinking his last word just coming like hammer on my head Don't think about suiside or other ...icant give you chance to die , and after that your life become daily death for you because after that you have to sleep daily with random man get it ...



one man age 26 just doing his thi chi furiously the anger in his eyes like he fired all world with his only glare , two innocent yes painful eyes just coming in his mind , he just want to took away that pain from eyes , but he is so helpless cant done anything for that eyes ...Eyes of that girl for he lost his heart his first love of his life and irony is she is his cousin brother wife till today he thing that is she happy in this house ...because of his uncle and his son selfish ,he cant mingle with them , he stay hear because he give word to his dead mother ...but he is always out form house just visit vocationally like diwali , holi etc ,he never attached with them emotionally , that's why when his uncle try to brought him in their party he just denied and say he is happy with his construction business he is happy with his business , far from this city , he enjoying his life with his friend , adi ,but his life just mess when he come to attend Vikram marriage , when first time he saw her full of life on her bridal attire in mandap ...he just lost in her beauty and her innocence and her beautiful hazel eyes , but next moment come in reality how he think about his own bhabi like this ...he just hold his braking heart and make excused of business and just come back to his business town , but from that day he just lost his life , charm , smile , so many time adi ask reason of his sorrow but he just denied ...with smile and false reason of tiredness

from that day he struggling with his own feeling to forget her but he fail just fail ,day by day his heart get more restless , like something big and bad happen but don't get why this feeling coming in his mind and today he just cant stop himself and just come to kapoor house like his heart get ans hear only , he shock with his own action ...and he just went to uncle room for greet them , that time geet sentence come as big blow to him ...gay vikram is gay but next word of his uncle he just froze in his place ...he just controlling his anger with so much difficulty his nail dig in his palm , but he know it is not right time to enter but when he saw his uncle try to abuse he he just enter with sound ...like he coming now only


he just give last blow on ice , and sit on floor , he just crushing destiny who suffer that innocent soul like this ,he don't know how he will save her how , he just furies with all this just want to kill that man his so called uncle , just than his phone ring it is called from adi he just took it and say hello adi he just say all to adi , he also become shock with all this fact feel pity for geet but adi next word just Chang emotions from his face , he just smirk ...



he know now what he have to do he just called nakul ...he is old servant of house and he know all about this family , maan just asked routing of vikram ...with help of nakul he just plant closed camera in Vikram room in outhouse ,now he need to took away his uncle from kapoor house at list for two days , so he do his work and destiny just help him one problem come in Delhi and Ragav have to visit there and maan just took this chance Yes he is Maan sing khurana ,Msk


next morning just change life of geet , all television just giving footage of vikram love making with his male friend ...now finger start to stand against Ragav kapoor also , he just come back and start to beat vikram , maan just come there and say uncle beating is not solution , with such emotion like he really care for them , but his eyes just searching geet , maan just say uncle just took press conference and announced vikram chet on you , you don't know about it and announce geet marriage with your choice person , whom you can trust ...it help to clean your image ,and your career also saved and you get extra votes of women you no sympathy like that , ragave went in deep thought he just want to save his career ,he don't took chance when election come near , he just don't want to face humiliation


he just nodded his head and say , and ask , can you ready for marriage with geet , maan show shocks face to him but in mind he just making dance on his victory , now maan second plan start maan know how cheep his uncle is he just plant camera in ragav room also with help of nakul because nakul can went his room without checking and that help maan , ragave just called vikram in room and say all things how he make his marriage till demand of child from geet in last he say i just married her to maan but next day world saw his dead body ...but it is live telecast and Msk just destroy Ragave without any weapon ,and next hour both father son arrested by police for fraud , abuse to geet


he just went to geet room , last night when he went geet room with help of nakul , with thudding heart ,he going to saw her face to face , her heart just winch when he saw her lifeless full of fear , she just shaking with fear when maan come room she just start to scram with fear ...maan just closed her mouth with his hand and she first time watch his face , don't know why but she feel safe with him and just than he took cance and in shortly he say about him and his plan and say her that don't make any thing stupid .she nodded her head maan just went to go , she just mummer thanks and I trust you ...maan just look to her and smile


Now when kapoor get arrested, he just took press conference, and say geet to say each and everything, geet first denied maan change her mind ask her to fight for her pride, her self respect, and first time in her life she stand for herself just for herself , sach hai women biggest enemy of herself , first she say that other are touch ring her and when she get chance to fight she just surrender themselves , you cant stand for yourself for once ...


geet just say each and everything in front of media , including about her handa family , media just support her for justice and after six month all punish for deed , maan just say good by to her ,he don't want to tell about his feeling ...that she mistook his help , they both living in maan small house with nakul last six month he handling his business fro hear only ...when geet hard his goodbye the time stop for her yes she taking him as friend but when time come to say good by ,she knew it is more than friendship ...but maan fail to get her emotions he just going from there , geet just come running him and turn him and give tight slap on his face , maan shock with her action and gasp geet , geet just tearful eyes ask him you don't feel anything for me ...i know iam not good for you also think me as impure because I live with that monster , but I swear they don't touch me no but her word died in her mouth only because her rosy lips captured by maan M shape lips ...he just sucking it like there is no tomorrow ,just sucking her like candy maan ki sweet candy ,geet gasp with his sudden action and lost in his kiss , kiss of geet ke maan ka ,sometime action speak more than word

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bhanu_rekhag thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome OS ..I already read this
Edited by bhanu_rekhag - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mahi just awesome baby...
my mind is struck to the os...
I just hate this raghav and vikram how can they be such cruel to a women yaar...
but raghav has stooped too low...
just want to cut him into pieces how can he think like that about a women who thinks him of a father...
just love the way maan exposed them smartly without causing any kibd of danger and harm to geets life...
love the way he has instilled the courage in geet and made her fight against them..
Maan didnt confess his feeling to her because he didnt want to hurt her and let her think wrong about his help...
but geet has fallen in love with him...
just love the os...
hatts of to u mahi...
u bring such a unique ideas which gives a women unknow power to fight against the odds...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: gunjar

Mahi just awesome baby...
my mind is struck to the os...
I just hate this raghav and vikram how can they be such cruel to a women yaar...
but raghav has stooped too low...
just want to cut him into pieces how can he think like that about a women who thinks him of a father...
just love the way maan exposed them smartly without causing any kibd of danger and harm to geets life...
love the way he has instilled the courage in geet and made her fight against them..
Maan didnt confess his feeling to her because he didnt want to hurt her and let her think wrong about his help...
but geet has fallen in love with him...
just love the os...
hatts of to u mahi...
u bring such a unique ideas which gives a women unknow power to fight against the odds...





os competition main diya tha
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mahimaan





os competition main diya tha


ha mahi i read it there but i was unable to comment there so now i commented on it...
but i have to say it yaar how many times i read it but i just get a new level of range on those monsters...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb OS
Maan ne aacha plan banaya to arrest his uncle and cousin
Thank god nothing bad happen to geet
And how can geet's parents doesn't help geet how can they do this to their own daughter
But finally maan helped geet to come our of this mess
Superb work dear
Thank u for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm superb OS! Poor Geet! she suffered so much! Finally she get her happiness! Maan loved her! well written!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this one was sad
poor geet right
her hubby was gay
and to get the heir for their family her fil was gonna be intimate with her
that is just disgusting
thank god that maan exposed the duo
saved geet
but then tried to go away from her life
but she was having none of it
of course not
not when he was her life
cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I have read it earlier...its awesome & I loved the concept...its a very sensitive...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful story...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story n fr d pm also...


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