Mg os Marriage of soldier one part

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Hi everyone cant update till Thursday so as gift i written this for you all so enjoy it mahi cant stay away for maaneet 😉


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Captian Maan singh khurana

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geet handa

India Rajasthan , state of mahraja , hole Rajasthan happy with this year big wedding of Maan and geet both family from Punjab but last 5/6 gentration settle in Raj , and today khurana big son who is air force officer have his wedding with Geet who is not less than any princess of handa family and today is there royal wedding which compete in handa hawali with holy fire , all ritual and all relative friends after biddai of bride all come to Kuhrana mention who itself decorated like bride and all ready to welcome new member of their mention their big Bahu , Geet ,maan ki geet

with thudding heart bride come out from car , who have little sadness of bidai , away from her parent her relative and little nervous for new home , new relation ,which brought some fear in her mind she just closed her eyes and went near door of mention , in first look she like mention which so beautiful and classic new happiness , feel of married women making summer solute in her tummy , shy smile playing on her lips , her face is cover with long veil or eles all know about her emotions , but her shaking hand give her state knowledge to her husband and he first time approach to her and took her cold palm in his hand and softly press that saying don't scare , i am with you in every step ,her eyes full with tears how her husband get her unsaid words she just nodded her head in yes

Just than dadima say in soft voice , Maan beta wo apkhi hi dulhan hai aur abhi aapke saath hi rahegi hamesha ke liye , abhi kuch der ke liye haat chode dijiye

geet all trun red , sharm se pani pani but maan say with attituted Msk never hold hand for loss / msk hath chodne ke liye nahi pakadta dadima

with lots of masti and muzzak maaneet make gruhpravesh in house for their new life with lots of dream

all just settle on sofa after finishing all game of ring ,maaneet sit on sofa and maan was so restless he just want to took geet in his arm and run away from there he so much want to spend time with her really what weeding they have jhat magni pat shadi typr fast shadi , roka se sidha shadi because their family never trust on his vacation his defense service and upon that they never see each other at list maan not see her because she is not present on roka , and he is not ready to watch her photo graph they have wedding in four days , so no phone call etc , so their SR is fist official meeting of maaneet poor souls on ritual of shadi also because of her longgg veil he cant see her face properly and at time of sindoor just saw for second he saw her face but partly not fully , first time for ritual he touch her hand current pass to maan body

Other side geet also feel shy shy they don't know each other she have doubt he have seen her or not ,they don't have any phone call etc on marriage day she saw him from her room window when maan come on white horse that also because of her brother , and she just blow out with his personality ohhh he is so handsome and when he first time touch her hand oh poor girl just shake like dry leaf

just than that room turn in pin drop silence , there are two person entered in mention in uniform , when geet saw them her heartbeat miss for second , a fear come to her mind , she just mummer no babaji please please , maan just stand from his place give salute them and ask reason for arrival they just say that his vacation is consul because of some emergency and he have to report head office next day night , a loud gasp come from many mouth ,maan also feel confused for second his unseen bride face come in front of him but he just control himself and say ok

just than dadaji just put hand on his shoulder and nodded in yes ,like asking him are you ok , he just say i am ok dadaji , just than his ma just hug him and say wo wo geet , maan just cup his mother face and say ma wo officer ki wife hai , she have to handle it with that he just look to geet direction and smile come on his face , because , geet just nodded in yes , yes she feel miserable with news , it is just start of their new life , but she know as officer wife she anytime have to face this situation , for second her soul shake with so many thoughts but maan clam face give new courage to her

just than dadima for lighten mood of all say waise all you don't think that bride and groom must be tired and they have to took some rest , maan eyes twinkle like star and dadima saw that she just wink to maan mother and say in serious face but geet should be sleep in my room na its ritual and maan face fail down in second

maan mother - yes dadima she have to sleep in your room , now maan go and sleep to your room , but first went to dadaji room they want to say something to you

maan just make puppy face and look to geet direction but his big enemy that veil , he cant saw her face till now , vacation bhi consul and SR bhi consul , with so many attempt dadi and ma hold their laugh , maan just went to dadaji room and when he shut that door , dadi and ma just laugh loudly and geet watch them like alien , she don't know why they laugh like this , she feel also sad that she cant be with her husband ...

just than dadi went to geet and say don't worry beta this ritual is lie we just pulling maan leg now get up , aani took babhi to geet room and all just took her to maan room she feel so shy shy her each step just increasing her dhak dhak oh poor girl turn red in shy they all just teasing her with so many words they make her sit on bed with long veil , and all just went from there with closed door , geet just sit their so many thoughts coming in her mind , one side he have to went away tomorrow itself , it is their first official meeting , their SR , oh poor girl just prying to her babaji to give her lots of courage

hear when maan went dadaji room who is sleeping today in guest room for some reason saw them sleep peacefully , he just come out from room he feel so irritated with this ritual , when he heard news of his going away he just waiting for this alone time with geet but dadi just broke his all dreams , he just cried ye dadi bhi na kaha kaha se ritual le aati hai , he want her company for mental support , not physically at list he console her , with this all thought he come to his room door and open with sad face , but when he saw view of his room he just froze for second poor boy don't know how to react he just run to dadi room and kiss her forehead and in no time come in his room and imm closed door of his room like he have fear , someone come and took geet away from him

geet just clutch her own leg with tension , they first time come face to face maan just with slow step come near her and sit next to her , he get idea that she hold her breath maan just bend near her and say in low voice please breath geet , geet just turn red with his word , just than with shacking hand maan took veil of geet in his hand , he just feel it is so heard t pull her veil but when he took away that cloth from geet face he just stop in his place he miss several heartbeats oh god his bride with closing eyes looking so beautiful , Pari just pari , he want to look her open eyes he just say geet please open your eyes please I want to saw them , geet in shy just nodded in no but in next second she open her eyes with shock maan just touch her corner of lips with his finger and current pass form geet body and she just open her eyes , and maan blow with her beautiful eyes

he just watching her without blinking eyes oh just beautiful , she is so beautiful , he scare for second to touch this beauty , he just want to stop this time so he worship this beauty with his love , passion

Ae jaate hue lamhon zara thehro, zara thehro - 2

Oh going moments , time please stop for a while , stop for a while

Main bhi to chalta hoon, zara unse milta hoon

I will also come with you, and for a while I will also meet her [ meet the lover ]

Jo ek baat dil mein hai, unse kahoon

The thought ,desire which is in my mind I will tell her

(To chalun, to chalun, hm hm hm hm hm

To chalun, to chalun, to chalun) - 2

Then I will come, I will come , or may I come with you

Ae jaate hue lamhon zara thehro, zara thehro

Oh going moments , time please stop for a while , stop for a while

he just start to make outline to her forehead , eyes on her cheek and last near her lips that rosy lips treble for second with his long finger touch

(Unke chehre ki yeh narmiyaan

The tenderness of her face

he just bend near her and open her long black hair from plates that hair just start to flow with air just adding beauty in her

Unki zulfon ki yeh badliyaan

The clowds of her hair

he just bend near geet eys , geet just closed her eyes and maan put his lips on her eyes

Unki aankhon ke roshan diye

The lights, glow in her eyes

now her rose petal lips took his attention he just remove her rose ring and kiss near lips but not on kiss , and red hue come on geet face with his teasing act

Unke honton ki yeh surkhiyaan) - 2

The redness , appeal of her lips

Sab unke hain jalwe, main chalne se pehle

It's all her beauty and lust , but before going

Saanson mein, aankhon mein, khwaabon mein, yaadon mein

Aur is dil mein unko chhupaake rakhoon

Let me hide her in my breathes, in my eyes, in my dreams, in my memory and in my heart

To chalun, to chalun, hm hm hm hm hm

To chalun, to chalun, to chalun

Then I will come, then I will come

Ae jaate hue lamhon zara thehro, zara thehro

Oh going moments , time please stop for a while , stop for a while

geet just hug maan tightly this waking up desire as ell as tomorrow his going away a tear come from her eyes , maan get her emotions , he just nodded in no and say , don't cry geet than it is difficult for me to went away from you and I have to fulfill my duty na , geet just nodded in yes but her tears is not stoping , maan just lay her down and kiss her eyes and drink that tears with her lips ...geet just hold his shoulder and maan just touch brush his lips with her lips and wriggle like fish

(Main kahin bhi rahoon ae sanam

What ever place I may stay my lover

Mujhko hai zindagi ki kasam

I swear with my life

Faaslein aate jaate rahe

the distance between us may increase or descrease

Pyaar lekin nahin hoga kam) - 2

My love for you will never decrease

Jinhe chaahoon, jinhe poojoon, unhe dekhoon, unhe chhoo loon

To whom I love, to whom I worship, let me see her, let me love her

Zara baatein to kar loon, zara baahon mein bhar loon

Let me talk to her some words, let me hold her in my arms for a while

he just laid beside her and took her in his hug and start to make pattern on her back , she have goosebumps on her body next moment he just undo her blouse button and she gasp loudly and stop her voice maan just took her lips in his lips for passionate kiss

Main is chaand se maathe KO choom loon

Let me kiss her moonlike forehead

To chalun, to chalun, hm hm hm hm hm

Then I will come, then I will come

To chalun, to chalun, to chalun

Then I will come, then I will come

Ae jaate hue lamhon zara thehro, zara thehro

Oh going moments , time please stop for a while , stop for a while

Main bhi to chalta hoon, zara unse milta hoon

I will also come with you, and for a while I will also meet her [ meet the lover ]

Jo ek baat dil mein hai, unse kahoon

The thought ,desire which is in my mind I will tell her

To chalun, to chalun, hm hm hm hm hm

Then I will come, then I will come

To chalun, to chalun, to chalun

Then I will come, then I will come

he just kiss her all face with passion and again took her lips for kiss this time he just bite on her lips and took entry in her mouth and too her hand and place on his heart and say I promise geet i will come to you back , to my geet I love you geet just love you so don't worry enjoy this togetherness of us who give so many beautiful memory to us please geet I want your sath in this please , and next moment geet took charge of kiss and her action give ans to maan and both just lost in each other in their love in their passion and that room fill with their moan ...both just living this moment this pal which is in their hand

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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well hope what happened to hero in this movie dont happen to him
they didnt even see one another
sr was the first time they saw the other
haila that is odd
no wonder he wanted to see her
be with her
and also console her
since he is going away from her
but he better come back for her
hmmm that was so beautiful song fits with their situation
cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i just hate my id like nahi hora :(
but awsum os
so maaneet never saw each other before marige
heheheh devil dadi
opsss maan ko jana hai
officers ki yahi ek prolem unka farz pehley
poor maaneet
love maaneet moment
hope kuch bura naho plzzz
maan will back soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovd d os di bt pls cm soon ill miss ur updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome os
maaneet married😳
they are seeing each other for first time on their sr😳
dadi is great with her teasings😆
maan have to go😲
i want maan back fully safe, no sad ending pls!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n fab beautiful update! Superbly written! Its their wedding! Maan has to leave! Maan loves her n needs her support! update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow...
this is sooo nice .
parr ye nhi bolna ki iske aage koi story nahi...we want more parts for this
obviously aftr u'r backkk...😊
n it ws awwwsm... 👍🏼
maan...the army officer...getting married to beauti queen our geet...
n they didnt see each othr ..still understand each othrs feelings n gestures...
n maan has to go back...jst nxt day of marriage...its heartbreaking for both...as they hv jst started a new life..
bt as they say distance se pyar badhta hai...😉
so once maan is backk...they can see change in their feelings...it will become more strong...
n i will not say no sad endibg...cz i knw ki aap maaneet ko alag karr hi nahi sakte 😉
waiting for nxt part...
Edited by mirror1521 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice... just wish dat u gv a happy ending to d story plz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update...
maaneet never saw each other before marige...
heheheh devil dadi...
opsss maan ko jana hai ...
Officers ko farz pehle hota yaar...
loved geet supporting for maan...
poor maaneet...
love maaneet moment...
the song choice was lovely mahi...

miss u baby...
Enjoy alot in marraige mahi...

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