Smoke and Mirrors

"Out beyond ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing,
there is a field. I'll meet you there.
When the soul lies down in that grass,
the world is too full to talk about.
Ideas, language, even the phrase each other doesn't make any sense."
- Jalal ad-Din Muhammad Rumi
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I have always had a fondness for this story. From the very beginning, years ago when I first started it, I wrote the ending. But as it does, life happened and left by the wayside were a lot of my stories. I lost parts of some stories, I lost interest in others. Even when I was gone for months at a time, my stories still played on my mind. This is why I'm back again, pulled by the urge to finish this tale.
I've been very fortunate to find some brilliant, active readers. Numbers in the Geet Forum have been waning for some time and stories from new/unknown writers see less readers and sometimes receive a discouragingly low amount of feedback. I naively want us, as a forum, to change that.
I do not write for compliments. I don't even write for comments. If I did, I would not write the sort of stories I do in the forum that I do. However, I'm sure you'll agree that it's always rewarding to know that you're not speaking to a wall. I want everyone to be interactive readers (for any of the many lovely stories you read) - talk to me, talk to each other, come up with plot theories or convoluted plans to overthrow me. Just please don't tell me that it was a "nice update, continue soon". I try very hard to make every chapter worth saying at least something about and I would really love to see people on my threads, not stock compliments. Silent/indifferent readers have put me off writing before and I'll bet good money that they'll put me off again. If you're simply going to 'like' and not comment something specifically about the story, then please don't even bother liking.
If I haven't scared you away already, welcome, show your face and enjoy the story. It's a special one to me.
- Zarin
P.S. No PMs for this one. Experience has taught me that it is not always work worth doing ;)
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