SS: Smoke and Mirrors - 3rd June, Chapter 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Smoke and Mirrors





"Out beyond ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing,
there is a field. I'll meet you there.

When the soul lies down in that grass,
the world is too full to talk about.
Ideas, language, even the phrase each other doesn't make any sense."

- Jalal ad-Din Muhammad Rumi

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1 (below). 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7.

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I have always had a fondness for this story. From the very beginning, years ago when I first started it, I wrote the ending. But as it does, life happened and left by the wayside were a lot of my stories. I lost parts of some stories, I lost interest in others. Even when I was gone for months at a time, my stories still played on my mind. This is why I'm back again, pulled by the urge to finish this tale.

I've been very fortunate to find some brilliant, active readers. Numbers in the Geet Forum have been waning for some time and stories from new/unknown writers see less readers and sometimes receive a discouragingly low amount of feedback. I naively want us, as a forum, to change that.

I do not write for compliments. I don't even write for comments. If I did, I would not write the sort of stories I do in the forum that I do. However, I'm sure you'll agree that it's always rewarding to know that you're not speaking to a wall. I want everyone to be interactive readers (for any of the many lovely stories you read) - talk to me, talk to each other, come up with plot theories or convoluted plans to overthrow me. Just please don't tell me that it was a "nice update, continue soon". I try very hard to make every chapter worth saying at least something about and I would really love to see people on my threads, not stock compliments. Silent/indifferent readers have put me off writing before and I'll bet good money that they'll put me off again. If you're simply going to 'like' and not comment something specifically about the story, then please don't even bother liking.

If I haven't scared you away already, welcome, show your face and enjoy the story. It's a special one to me.

- Zarin

P.S. No PMs for this one. Experience has taught me that it is not always work worth doing ;)
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spoorthi28 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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my god am i the only confused soul here??
there are two threads on the same name..😕
is this an ff
agar hai tho intro kaha hai??😕

and what about Gehraiyan uss ko bhi tho saal hogaye hai??

chado jo bhi ho new stories are always welcome by me🤗

so waiting!!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: spoorthi28

my god am i the only confused soul here??

there are two threads on the same name..😕
is this an ff
agar hai tho intro kaha hai??😕

and what about Gehraiyan uss ko bhi tho saal hogaye hai??

chado jo bhi ho new stories are always welcome by me🤗

so waiting!!😃



I was writing this story a long time ago but never finished. It will be posted here, very slightly altered. The other thread is the old one, hence the 'inactive' in its title.

I don't do intros, straight to chapter. Give me a minute 😉

Gehraiyan was updated a few weeks ago and I hope to update again soon. I've always admitted to being a slow updater for that story 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This story is no longer available.

Edited by kaamchorni - 7 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I've read this
was that the first chapter😕

itna chutku😳

can i predict the next chapter please😳

this one is so well written ki muje pata hi nahi chala what is written😆
so she is back!😲
who is she ? what is she that every one is so curious n most importantly who is he???

chalo let me put my curiosity to some rest n wait for the next!

babaji rhyming words!😃

waiting for the next!

p.s: i think ive used all the emo's 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 1 - glad you started this again...lovely part...si she came back again...seems she is famous identity now...she found her initials carved when she was nineteen...who is he watching her all the time...she recognized him...? why she felt she should not have come back..?...curiosity increased...update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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re-reading it as a new story..loved this story, it had an unconventional plot and character of Geet..glad that you are continuing it.
Geet is back, she seems to have a rich and famous background for many people want to use the acquaintance to boost self-importance in the society..
but Geet herself seems to be a cold, callous, impassive personality now with a i-don't-care-a-damn attitude..still the past memory disturbs her.
very intriguing update..for what purpose she is back and who is he.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was hardly a paragraph, yet I felt zillions of emotions as I read through those lines.
She sure has a story, not the one they say about her, but the one she shares with nobody itseems. A tale of its own, and I don't know why the irreverence she shown might put her across as arrogant most likely but she comes across as a woman who had had sorrows deep buried.

When her heart squeezed painfully, so did mine.

Can't wait to read the story!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was the nicest ever update. Please do continue soon🤣

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Susegad

This was the nicest ever update. Please do continue soon🤣



A cat on my thread! :O Excuse me, what is this surprise? I did not order a Happy Meal 😆

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