SS: Smoke and Mirrors - 3rd June, Chapter 7

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979861

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

So she wanted to carve a K beside her name.
It speaks volumes about her feelings about him.

What are they ? Estranged lovers or husband -wife victim of rough situations , time and misunderstandings.

The latter seems more probable.

Well done , Z !

This was unexpected.
And i dont want it to be their last meet. Let them meet again and resolve the misunderstanding and problems.
I dont like bading good byes.

The smoke has still not cleared.

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979861

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Posted: 10 years ago

#142

I kind of feel stupid after all the predictions i made .

But it was fun.

Has the story reached its end?
I dont want it to end.
Z , start a new one !

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kaamchorni

@kaamchorni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: ardentfitzcy
I kind of feel stupid after all the predictions i made .

But it was fun.

Has the story reached its end?
I dont want it to end.
Z , start a new one !

Don't feel stupid! There's still one chapter left. You never know what could happen.

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979861

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Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

Don't feel stupid! There's still one chapter left. You never know what could happen.

My dearest writer, now you give me a reason to hope.
By the way check your Geh. Thread i made an appearance there. I need a warm welcome;)

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979861

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Posted: 10 years ago

#145

At some point of time it did cross my mind that she would want to erase those initials with the tools.
But carving a K i guess took all of us by surprise.
Good job !

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Veil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#146

What changed that she had come back to change a part of her identity? Somehow it's unbelievable that she came for just that or did she come to collect memories and alter them? My mind is overworking and I can't stop thinking about the camera snaps of her place that she once called home

She half expected him to be there, watching her from across the room as he had watched everything else.

Somehow this strengthens my earlier speculation I had let you know though that still makes me feel either I made a very intelligent guess or a very stupid guess. Can't wait for more Z!

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979861

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Posted: 10 years ago

#147

Intehaan ho hyi ...intezaar ki ...
Aayi na koi khabar mere yaar ki..

Kate nhi kat te ye din ye raat
karni thi jo tumse woh dil ki baat ..
Keh doon tumhe yaa na kahoon ..
Dil mere aaj kya hai...

Ye raat bheegi bheegi..
Ye mast nazare..
Sone bhi nhi deta ...
Update ka intezaar...

The thing is that ki i am in a dire need of an update

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979861

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Posted: 10 years ago

#148

Waiting
waiting
waiting
waiting
waiting
eating
drinking
reading
watching
waiting
waiting
waiting

kahaan hai aap mohatarma...

Edited by ardentfitzcy - 10 years ago

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kaamchorni

@kaamchorni

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#149

I love this story so very much and perhaps this is why it has taken me so long to say goodbye.
Please join me after the chapter for my final goodbye.

- Z