SS: Smoke and Mirrors - 3rd June, Chapter 7 - Page 2

Ok now that I have gotten that out of my system let me say what i truly felt.😆

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

A cat on my thread! :O Excuse me, what is this surprise? I did not order a Happy Meal 😆

I dont remember reading this story before... Anyways happy that you are writing it again...

Hellooo😃 *waves my hand*

Originally posted by: spoorthi28

I've read this

was that the first chapter😕

itna chutku😳

can i predict the next chapter please😳

this one is so well written ki muje pata hi nahi chala what is written😆

so she is back!😲

who is she ? what is she that every one is so curious n most importantly who is he???

chalo let me put my curiosity to some rest n wait for the next!

babaji rhyming words!😃

waiting for the next!

p.s: i think ive used all the emo's 🤣

It's a short short story. Did I forget to say? 😆 Chapters will be short, so will the story.

Predict away, girl! I'm all ears. Since I already know what's coming, it's fun for me to see what could have been.

i have read a few parts of this story...was totally intriguied by it
this time there would be a different story...
waiting for more😃

Yes I read the story before and It's kind of seeing a suspense thriller.

"Yes i have seen her.Yes,she is exactly as they say."
The lowly mortal beings that we are bringing a little piece of her myth to our own lives helps in drawing attention away from our problems and provide a sense of power even if it is momentary.

She was blowing the smoke towards him in one deliberate,irrelevant movement.
She still knew where the carving was across the floor,on the counter at which he sat watching her now.
Does he have an advantage of knowing her from the past??Or has he come to know her through the spreading smoke?

How many of them actually remembered her from those days?She sure as hell didnt remember them.
If she doesnt remember them neither would they unless there is something very much unforgettable about her.

Her heart squeezed painfully.
I agree with Ms.Veil here. There is a lot of pain behind that smoky haze that she carries with herself. Only time and mirrors will reveal .

What role does he plays here? Will he be the one to reach beyond the smoke?

This work piques my interest.An intriguing piece.Commendable job! Looking forward for more.

Originally posted by: Susegad

Ok now that I have gotten that out of my system let me say what i truly felt.😆

First of all I am super excited to start a story by Zarin.

To paraphrase a line from Jerry McGuire you had me at Rumi.

I love the depth behind the simplicity of his poems.

The whole update somehow gave me an impression of a sultry Marilyn Monore isque figure.

An actress who has achieved fame and success after skipping her hometown leaving a blaze of scandal behind her and now she is back with furs on her shoulder, lips painted a cherry red and a cigarette danging from those perfect lips.

The irreverence intrigues me. Is it an act of defiance or simple dutch courage is what I want to see.

The illusions you have created have drawn me in and now I am intrigued and hooked😃

this picture of Marilyn Monore came to my mind too when I read the update..😊