SS: Smoke and Mirrors - 3rd June, Chapter 7 - Page 4

Originally posted by: prema_ks

Yes I read the story before and It's kind of seeing a suspense thriller.

Want to know more about GH.

P.S : Who is that in your D.P? I am curious from many days 😆

Thanks for coming back :)

Really? I almost want to tease you further by not saying 😆 It's Sanam Saeed, a Pakistani actress. I'm going to post two photos from this impromptu shoot... I love the second one more - it has so much character.

It wasnt nostalgia that brought her here but the curiosity to know what had become of the place.
Does that indicate that she didnt have much good memories here to reminiscence about.

She had wanted to come here as a mere spectator and not as the owner of the house which had been burnt years ago but the catching of breaths, the shaky hands told a different tale.
Good or bad memories but they are part of her.

She had been missing without clue.It seems that after fire nobody knew about her whereabouts.
But the question is Is she alone? Was she alone? Were there any losses of lives in fire?
Is there nobody close enough to be called a friend or relative in this town?
After all she had a home here.
A home built on the top of a hill, a land offering a spectacular view. You know the home sounds like a dream home kind.

" you and your camera will see something beyond the town"
When i have "nothing to lose" and i walk the earth "unafraid" i promise i travel the world.

Zarin you manage to reveal and yet keep away so many secrets.
There are so many queries.
1. Where was she till now? Travellingg the world?
2. Has she lost everything in the fire? Or found everything?
3. She was afraid before?

All that remained were cinders and abandoned wreckage. Same holds true for her past life as well.

Camera and her seems to share comradeship.And she carries some specific photo along with her.

But amongst all this there is something that brought her back .Some pull that forced her to revisit the town even if it took 6 years.

Three clicks. And all that will remain with her is a momento of a place which once called her home.


Thankyou for updating ! You are very talented . Short update and yet so engaging. You want to know everything at once.
The pleaure is all ours. We are the lucky ones to have such talented writers like you.

Part 2 - she came back to see her place which caught up with fire ...she was surprised to see the place was same as it was earlier she left...nobody came there as she was gone missing...

"Some day. When I have nothing to lose and I walk the Earth unafraid, I promise I'll travel the world."...it means she lost everything she had and that's why she traveled the world and chased her passion for photography...

Curious to know what had happened that she had to leave everything behind...

Iss dil ne badi shiddat se khwaish ki hai...
Ek update ki...
Milega kya????

Ji arz kiya hai...
Bin mausam hi ho jati hai aaj kal shaher mein baarish..
bin mausam hi ho jati hai aaj kal shaher mein baarish.
Aaj subah subah uthte hi hui update padne ki khwaish..
Ab zada der sahi na jayegi ye duri
Zarin jaldi karo humari demands puri
..

okay fine that was ...umm..let it to be..you got my feelings right now update soon

Originally posted by: ardentfitzcy

Iss dil ne badi shiddat se khwaish ki hai...
Ek update ki...
Milega kya????

Ji arz kiya hai...
Bin mausam hi ho jati hai aaj kal shaher mein baarish..
bin mausam hi ho jati hai aaj kal shaher mein baarish.
Aaj subah subah uthte hi hui update padne ki khwaish..
Ab zada der sahi na jayegi ye duri
Zarin jaldi karo humari demands puri
..

okay fine that was ...umm..let it to be..you got my feelings right now update soon

I am holding out to see if more than 30% of the people who've liked actually bother to comment. If you want quicker updates, you'll have to rouse your fellow readers 😉

babaji ye key hai??

geet came back where she lost everything surprised to see nothing changed a bit lovely part thnx 4 update

Would anybody mind terribly if I didn't reply individually to all comments every time? Time really isn't on my side any more. As it is, I'm IF-ing at 4am...

Let me know. I hope this doesn't discourage anyone.