SS: Smoke and Mirrors - 3rd June, Chapter 7

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979861

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Hello..
Knock at the door..
peep in

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979861

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

So the man who made entry in 1st chap shows here again. Nah his face r his name is not shown just his voice.
Yeh serials ki tarah pehle sirf back profile dikha ke chod diya ...phir uski awaaz...phir suit boot ...aise kyun kar rhi ho

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979861

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

And then he speaks ..
pehle shahad n then neem...suno ye cigratte chod kyun nhi deti tum mar gyi toh mera kya hoga...and then aa gyi tum dekha aana toh tha hi toh itna bhav kya khana and now that you ve come its my time to eat bhav.. 😆 mujhe tumhari koi jarurat nhi go away jahaan se aayi thi..
Why is it so complicated???
Kitna acha hota dono milte phir woh gaata ...Tumse mile dil mein utha dard karara...ho...
Jeene laga woh bhi jise ishq ne maara...
ya usse bhi better..
Silsila yeh chahat ka maine bhujhne diya o..piya...yeh cigar na bhujha na bhujega ..o aaja na mere piya... 😃

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979861

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Dekho all the above things are applicable only till He whose name must not be taken is Ma(a)n ...see i did not take his name...
Nhi toh jao bhai jao mat baat karo kaun se mare jaa rhe baat krne ko..

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979861

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Mujhe first spot nhi mila toh ye mere badle ki aag hai... ab back to back mera bakwas jhelo..
Aur mind you ye mera comments me count nhi karta mujhe is recent chap par tippani dena baaki hai

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kaamchorni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

😆 Kaisi ho, paagal?

Serials' suit boot entry 🤣 Now I want to rewrite the whole story as a dramatic Star Plus saga!

Edited by kaamchorni - 10 years ago

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979861

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: kaamchorni
😆Kaisi ho, paagal?

Serials' suit boot entry🤣 Now I want to rewrite the whole story as a dramatic Star Plus saga!

Yeh kya puch diya tumne...
Vaise toh bilkul maza mein..par exams ka bhoot mandra rha hai april ke end mein hai...usi ki tsyari mein lagne ki koshish the keyword hereis Koshish mein hai.

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979861

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Likho likho jo likhna hai likho...i m all eyes to it 😆
And all ears to His (whose name shall not be taken) dialogues..
How romantic it would be...woh cigarette nikali nhi ki..darling ye lo main lighter laaya hoon lao main jala doon..last baar jo tumne akal thikane lagayi thi abhi bhi jagah par hi hai.. 😛
Iska naam kya rakhenge...Geet hui is town se parayi...
ya Is cigar ko kya naam doon r Woh laut aayi hai..
😛

I know i m obsessed with this cigarrete /cigar thing

Edited by ardentfitzcy - 10 years ago

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979861

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

I was wondering what led you to make her different
Not the stereotype females
Why did you make her smoke?
Any particular reason?
It intrigues me .
Being a human we tend to learn what we see around us
And a lady seldom smokes we are taught through telivision ,novels,our elders.
And if she does she must be a bad lady.Thats what we grasp. Keeping aside the health issues , why if she smokes she becomes wrong even if for a moment in my eyes?
You know why i like reading this .Because it is an eye opener for me.Gives me an altogether a different persepective.There are so many things i learn .
Thankyou for writing this .
Kaamchorni (awesome id for someone so busy you have found a good name)

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Zeal-DD

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Posted: 10 years ago

#70

who is she??? Where she vanished after Fire incident??? and why she is back now??? who is he??? Why is he behaving like a strange if he knows her? he said he don't want her back and happy without her... Is he the reason She seems Lost , uninterested and Hurt to me