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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: BrainEaterOwl

Kaan pakadke sorry bolling Avi.

I know even in TL I had left the story in mid n came back once it ended.

Aur Teri Umeed ka I never really planned to even leave cos I loved that story a lot, but mere lappy ne daga de diya mujhe. I was off IF for a month n in that one month I received a lot of PMs jis mei teri umeed ke PMs pata nahi kaha kho gaye. Your recent PM of Teri Umeed last part made me go find ur PMs for previous chapter n when I tried opening it in my cell toh security issues ka problem ho gaya. And before I could PM you, your this OS PM was received n seeing its posted in Geet Forum only I thought to talk to you here n also apologize. I'm really sorry.

Yeah your every Maan are total deewane, selfless n passionate. So this Maan was alag specially coming from you.

-Sanjana!

No sorry needed😃

Even though you read the Locket late, your comments came at a much needed time for me. I was sweltering in 108 degree weather in my sasural in India and reading your comments made me feel completely appreciated and understood. I had the widest grin on my face.😃

It is hard to end a story for me too.

This Maan is also passionate and deewana but just self centered. Ego bhi hurt tha that she left him so it brought out his worst side.

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Jannat-Fictions

I think you should 😉 I'd love it anyway if you did.

Honestly I can read one shots any day. Especially from you.
They're short, quick and easy for me 😆

And I love your writing a lot.

They've got such beauty in the way you show your Maan & Geets'.

In both the one shots I have read of yours with the 6 chaps I have read of teri umeed tera intezaar, you've portrayed them very differently which is what captured my attention. The way you handle their stories and give importance to the characters and their views is brilliantly shown.

I only wish I had the pleasure of reading your FFs but having 16 stories on the go plus work and house chores I barely have time to read anything.

I've been stuck on one book for the last week, reading a page each day. 🤢

- FFs are difficult to stay up to date with. We're both good for reading one shots.😆

Thank you😃 Your kind words are greatly appreciated.

I am sort of in the same boat about FFs. Besides time, I am an impatient reader. By the time the writer posts the next update, my mind comes up with multiple alternatives😆

so OS's it is for now😃

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: muskanp
Read it again
Loved it again
Hain

Mujhe DA chahiye Muskan... pls pls pls pls😃

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Madhuri53
See Avi, how many are crazy & love for your writing.
Please dont stop writing.

Eagerly waiting for next NEW story..

FF nahi likh sakti right now but eyes open rakho

kahi kuch dikh jaayega😃

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa
Beautiful os!!
Jab se maan ko aman ke baarein mein pata chala, usska ego chur chur ho gaya!!
Tab usse pata chala ki geet ne apna dream chod diya taki woh aage badh sake!!
Maan ne geet ke saath jo misbehaviour kiya woh galat tha par geet ke pyaar ne sab sahi kar diya!
Meera jis tarha se sab batati hai...jast loved it!...
Orange blobs everywhere"...lol...Iss tarha se pyaar ka izhaar kabhi nahi padha!!

Ek baar phir bolna chahti hoon...aapki writing pe fida hoon!!
Aap likhti raho...bahut achha lagta hai...
Mujhe aap apne pm list add kar sakte ho?..plz...
Yeh os aapne post kiya mujhe pata hi nahi chala!!😭
Accidentally pata chal gaya!😆

added😃

Misbehavior possessive lover ka tha. Jab pata chala kyun chali gayi toh gussa gaya aur regret aaya.

Thanks for the nice words Sheetal😃

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UNICORN75

@UNICORN75

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Lovely OS...Had the right mix for a full FF 😛 😛
Beautifully portrayal of Maan's ego,Geet's silent acceptance...
The best part was Meer's recital...
Awesome Os.
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Jayeeta Paul

@Jayeeta_06

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

wow...amazing os...🥳...brilliantly written...👏👏👏...loved it so much...❤️❤️❤️...have never read ur os......this is the first time...n I must say that u r a superb writer...😳...pls don't leave writing...😔...will be eagerly waiting 4 Ur stories dr......thank u 4 pm...😃...