One Shot - Beneath the Broken Sky [When Souls Collide]

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Posted: 6 months ago
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Posted: 6 months ago
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Omg this oneshot hit me right in the feels smiley19 Geet’s backstory and the pain she’s carried was sooo heavy, and Maan’s reaction was so real, you could feel his anger turning into understanding

Loved how he went from hurt to being there for her. That moment when he promises to stand by her? chef’s kiss smiley43

Their connection is EVERYTHING. The rain scene smiley42

It was such a whirlwind, but in the end, you could just feel that Geet finally has someone who truly gets hersmiley27

This writing is so freaking good, I’m not over it!smiley27

Anddd my pleasure dear, glad you liked the title suggestion smiley10

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Posted: 6 months ago
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A Fabulous OS

Truth and Trust is important to Maan

and to build a relationship

while this very aspect Geet proved to him

and this only made their relationship stronger

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Posted: 6 months ago
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True they ruined everything with Grey's miscarriage. She deserved to see her baby for whom she has fought so much.

Wonderful OS

Maan showed his trust on her when she told him about her truth. Glad that he listened to her and decided to be with her always.

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Posted: 6 months ago
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In show

Many things not gone well

Superb os

Beautiful describe

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Posted: 6 months ago
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great update

emotional

geet share her past with maan requeating him to listen her first

knowing the hardship geet face in past make maan emotional

geet happy when maan DE clearthat he wants to stand with her in problems of her life

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Posted: 6 months ago
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Hello...

thanks for sharing this OS


Splendid OS.... terrifically written

glad that Geet was honest with Maan

of cos Maan was shocked hearing that she is pregnant

sad that he assumed she betrayed him

liked that Geet that adamant that he listen to her

Maan’s question was reasonable

finally Geet told him everything… her marriage, pregnancy etc

she was indeed the one used and betrayed

at least Maan recollected what happened in HP

Geet’s frustration was justified

well she did told him to stay away from him

Maan nowrealised why she did this

pleasedthat he understands Geet’s pain

great that Geet wanted Maan to know the truth

trust is very important in a relationship

Maan’s anger towards Dev was justified

upset that Geet suffered so much

as expected Maan stopped Geet

appreciate that he apologised to Geet

not surprised that he still wants to be with Geet

Geet was shocked hearing this

loved that Maan assured Geet

Gee clearly know she can trust Maan

agree with Maan that Geet deserves everything

he had a point that she is strong and fighter

Maan will always be there for her….

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Posted: 6 months ago
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a girl in a suit and tie is smiling and says consider it reserved

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Posted: 5 months ago
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Thank you so much for this OS. Wow it felt like I was watching a episode of GHSP. Very beautifully written about the pain of geet. Will be waiting for further updates

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Posted: 4 months ago
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This was written so beautifully and much better than what they showed on TV!

I heard that the makers did her miscarriage because the actress didnt want to be a mother in the show. Not sure if its true.

When Souls Collide ka link dedo please

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