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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24

😲😲 this is for what Avi,,?

kuch toh hai😃

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insight555

@insight555

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Is it going to be a new story???

excited...

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

It will for The Locket...

Right Avi

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53
It will for The Locket...

Right Avi

no it's the OS

I think u read it already but I changed it so pls read it again😃

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custodian75

@custodian75

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

Wow! That was like a bonus read for us. Lovely. Just like it is difficult forum to write short stories for u, it is difficult to read short stories from u for us. Cause just like always we like it to go on and on.

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

Lots of emotions, pain, egos, anger ignorance and ultimately unconditional love...

Beautifully written ❤️👏

But the highlight of the story is the running commentary😆

Thank you so much for writing this🤗

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JeevanaP

@JeevanaP

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

Congratulations for the next OS 😛

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insight555

@insight555

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Wow...lovely OS...Maan nd Geet working as actors nd falling in love...the song was totally apt depicting Maan's helplessness...beautifully written...

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ferdouz

@ferdouz

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

Lovely Story 👏 Thank U 😃⭐️

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BloodDiamond

@BloodDiamond

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#10

WOW 👏 its terrific ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ actor Maan & Geet started out in show but both have different priorities . They separated as show demands but Geet returns . He could not accept she left him and loved the whole truth coming out 👍🏼
Maan finally apologized Geet forgave him .
Where is the competition I am confused ? this is a great work