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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

Dazzler

+ 11

Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: dqno1

😆

I think OS likhni padegi mujhe ab

Aap aa toh gayi padhne😆

But with your schedule and mine I guess it is easiest for us😃

Thanks so much for the nice words.

I think you should 😉 I'd love it anyway if you did.

Honestly I can read one shots any day. Especially from you.

They're short, quick and easy for me 😆

And I love your writing a lot.

They've got such beauty in the way you show your Maan & Geets'.

In both the one shots I have read of yours with the 6 chaps I have read of teri umeed tera intezaar, you've portrayed them very differently which is what captured my attention. The way you handle their stories and give importance to the characters and their views is brilliantly shown.

I only wish I had the pleasure of reading your FFs but having 16 stories on the go plus work and house chores I barely have time to read anything.

I've been stuck on one book for the last week, reading a page each day. 🤢

- FFs are difficult to stay up to date with. We're both good for reading one shots.😆

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Abqurah

@Abqurah

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Ss awesome ss always

U always come with different idea

Great work

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bina_a

@bina_a

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#73

hi Avi,

great os. It was a pleasant surprise, But you all us all foolish audience 😒. Koi nahi hume toh maan aur geet se matlab hai, haina! 😆. Thanks for the PM. Loved it :)

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

See Avi, how many are crazy & love for your writing.

Please dont stop writing.

Eagerly waiting for next NEW story..

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Sheetalvasa

@sheetalvasa

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Beautiful os!!

Jab se maan ko aman ke baarein mein pata chala, usska ego chur chur ho gaya!!

Tab usse pata chala ki geet ne apna dream chod diya taki woh aage badh sake!!

Maan ne geet ke saath jo misbehaviour kiya woh galat tha par geet ke pyaar ne sab sahi kar diya!

Meera jis tarha se sab batati hai...jast loved it!...

Orange blobs everywhere"...lol...Iss tarha se pyaar ka izhaar kabhi nahi padha!!

Ek baar phir bolna chahti hoon...aapki writing pe fida hoon!!

Aap likhti raho...bahut achha lagta hai...

Mujhe aap apne pm list add kar sakte ho?..plz...

Yeh os aapne post kiya mujhe pata hi nahi chala!!😭

Accidentally pata chal gaya!😆

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

woow...suuperb one shot Avi...lovvvd it

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Amazing amazing.. just love it.. this is dream of every Maneetian out here.. n avi apne Dreams come true karke dikhaya.. Don't have words to praise one this but still.. Maneet shooting together n then falling in love with each other.. getting close.. n then Geet's pregnancy.. that's why she left the show.. N Aman.. finally last shot of show.. from where their real life strted.. awespme concept.. loved it..

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

u sure have some magic in your writing skills, i so much loved this OS... 👏

Edited by impoojaverma - 10 years ago

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: bina_a
hi Avi,
great os. It was a pleasant surprise, But you all us all foolish audience😒. Koi nahi hume toh maan aur geet se matlab hai, haina!😆. Thanks for the PM. Loved it :)

that was supposed to be the thinking of the producer not me.