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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: singh24




😲😲 this is for what Avi,,?


kuch toh hai😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Is it going to be a new story???
excited...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It will for The Locket...
Right Avi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Madhuri53

It will for The Locket...

Right Avi

no it's the OS
I think u read it already but I changed it so pls read it again😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! That was like a bonus read for us. Lovely. Just like it is difficult forum to write short stories for u, it is difficult to read short stories from u for us. Cause just like always we like it to go on and on.
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Lots of emotions, pain, egos, anger ignorance and ultimately unconditional love...
Beautifully written ❤️👏

But the highlight of the story is the running commentary😆

Thank you so much for writing this🤗
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Congratulations for the next OS 😛
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Wow...lovely OS...Maan nd Geet working as actors nd falling in love...the song was totally apt depicting Maan's helplessness...beautifully written...
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Lovely Story 👏 Thank U 😃⭐️
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WOW 👏 its terrific ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ actor Maan & Geet started out in show but both have different priorities . They separated as show demands but Geet returns . He could not accept she left him and loved the whole truth coming out 👍🏼
Maan finally apologized Geet forgave him .
Where is the competition I am confused ? this is a great work

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