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Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

beautiful story from you...somehow felt very sad and heavy heart while reading...its like reliving maaneet ...the mingle of reel and real life...no words to say !! and the confession part from third person's angle was different and cute ...even the orange blobs...😆!! loved it whole and whole !! its true like our friend said...if you had posted one part of it...it would have definitely gone to become ss...and then ff...from a wonderful writer like you, it would have been a treat !!saying that...this os is no less !! enjoyed it alot...already read it thrice...will read again...again ...

Thanks Kavya 😃

Yes I could have made it an SS but there was a challenge and I wanted to help my friends who had done all the work for the Dil Se threads.

Glad you liked it 😃

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Beautiful OS..I read only few in os and i liked this one more and voted also for this one only...but it was not selected...so sad...I somehow guessed that it could be from you but voicing out was not allowed & I could post a comment also...sorry

Sabse best part was meer'a running commentary...that was just hilarious..."Orange blobs everywhere"...lol...

His ego & anger made them to go separate ways. She did not tell him about aman and dev-tara (as usual...lol..) supported her

How I wish to see them both again...hope this "Dream Comes True"..

Aman, a jumble up of his name Maan...I liked this too.

Filmdust...lol...

Thnx to Laks for starting "Dil Se" so we got OS from you.

I had told Lakshmi that someone who has read me will know it is me 😃 Am glad you knew it.

Filmdust 😆

Thanks Madhuri 😃

Originally posted by: muskanp

Just amazing OS
Wow
Hain kitna sweet & cute
U can not stop writing I am telling u
Well I am waiting

Muskan 😃

I have hurt my back again!

It is painful to write since I work on a computer all day

Sowie 😊

Originally posted by: BrainEaterOwl

Avi, first of all I'm sorry for going gayab on you. I'm not having my lappy with me for over 2 months now and Opera in my cell phone doesnt let me open your Teri Umeed chapters in spite of the passwords given by you. Some security issues come up not allowing me access to protected blogs. So I could not read that story, but of course I'll do it once I get my lappy back which I'm not sure when it will be. I'm commenting from cell phone since a month now. Thankfully this OS wasnt posted on ur blog so I was able to read and comment too.

Coming to this OS I really really loved it a lot. Of course hated arrogant Maan n Mt.Everest se bhi bada uska ego. Poor Geet, not only she was cheated by producers n his politics of wanting to get his daughter to replace her but also for the growing life inside of her. Grrr I really hate it when a woman has go through all the pain alone specially when she is pregnant, this one thing makes me ultimately hate her lover.

It brought tears in my eyes reading about Aman n Geet's unconditional love n somewhere even wanted Geet to never ever forgive Maan, but OS tha isliye chala liya. Had it been SS or even FF I would have loved to see Maan redeeming n regretting every bit of his living life. Cos of course his tongue is very sharp n he speaks all the harsh words in his damn ego. So punishment toh banti thi.

But somewhere I'm glad you dint make this a sad ending. OS ka yahi darr hota hai that writers can easily have a tragic ending. Thankfully that wasnt the case here. So even though I hated Maan like anything, I still loved the story cos it wasnt a sad ending n Maaneet were together at the end.

Loved Dev, Tara n specially Meera's commentary. Beautifully written and awesomely portrayed all the emotions. Enjoyed it.

-Sanjana!

How I missed your comments!

Ek PM likh deti mujhe!

Writers feel abandoned when wonderful readers like you don't say a word and truly that's how I felt both towards the end of Locket and also TUTIKH.

Not blaming you or anything, just saying.

I am glad you told me, warna there would always be a doubt in my head why the story fizzled out in interest for some readers.

As for this story, I wanted to write an angry and somewhat selfish Maan. I have never written the character that way because frankly such people don't appeal to me and I find nothing heroic about such characters. But since it was an OS I wanted to take the chance 😃

Glad you liked it.

Thanks for the wonderful comment Sanjana! It made my day!

Now this is called complete os 😊

Loved the effect of khamoshiyan song in between 👍🏼

And the superrr ending... Dreams do come true, justified 😊

Wonderful. It was like Gurti coming alive in your story. They always left us wondering and your story gave them an alternative ending. Same for the production house it all started so strongly and then fizzled out to a disappointing end.

Read it again
Loved it again
Hain

Nice story

Originally posted by: dqno1

How I missed your comments!

Ek PM likh deti mujhe!

Writers feel abandoned when wonderful readers like you don't say a word and truly that's how I felt both towards the end of Locket and also TUTIKH.

Not blaming you or anything, just saying.

I am glad you told me, warna there would always be a doubt in my head why the story fizzled out in interest for some readers.

As for this story, I wanted to write an angry and somewhat selfish Maan. I have never written the character that way because frankly such people don't appeal to me and I find nothing heroic about such characters. But since it was an OS I wanted to take the chance 😃

Glad you liked it.

Thanks for the wonderful comment Sanjana! It made my day!

Kaan pakadke sorry bolling Avi.

I know even in TL I had left the story in mid n came back once it ended.

Aur Teri Umeed ka I never really planned to even leave cos I loved that story a lot, but mere lappy ne daga de diya mujhe. I was off IF for a month n in that one month I received a lot of PMs jis mei teri umeed ke PMs pata nahi kaha kho gaye. Your recent PM of Teri Umeed last part made me go find ur PMs for previous chapter n when I tried opening it in my cell toh security issues ka problem ho gaya. And before I could PM you, your this OS PM was received n seeing its posted in Geet Forum only I thought to talk to you here n also apologize. I'm really sorry.

Yeah your every Maan are total deewane, selfless n passionate. So this Maan was alag specially coming from you.

-Sanjana!