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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

geet wasn't at fault for her parents death it was to be happen any how

superb update


Yes, but can a child think this logically when it concerns to something as big as her parents' lives?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

I had assumed this bit


But t way u penned it down 😭
Every word just pierced right through my heart
I could so feel the breaking of her with every night
The darkness consuming her every time
Her cuddled up in a bundle crying fighting 😭


I am sorry to have intensified this part so much. I just could not help it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Twinnie 😃

Ek aur update aa raha hai kya??? It will be a bonus as there will be 2 updates to read... 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

Read ur response
Interesting
Yah kind of get it

Possible things do change as we grow
Conflict of views
As we grow we tend to be more sting with our POVs

More over it's not easy to let some one in that easily

I guess it will be a more of a fun reading them


@Bolds: Correct! That is what I have been trying to hint at for the future of this story.

I really hope I can live up to your expectations here!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

Hi Twinnie 😃

Ek aur update aa raha hai kya??? It will be a bonus as there will be 2 updates to read... 😉


Yep! An update on the way! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

I guess they will be also learning how their heart are still wired unknown to them 😳


Why, of course they will! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo



Yep! An update on the way!😃

Yayy!!! 😃

Waise Twinnie you're going to be a sizzler soon... nearing 10000... 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1



Very intense and emotional part. it is very hard to forget and forgive ourselves, especially for someone close to us. For Geet the bond was the closest imaginable. She is living with guilt when it was an accident. This puts a different spin on her character. There is the depth of pain that she has experienced that makes her almost raw in my opinion. Vulnerable, broken but with a spirit to continue to do her best in the day. It is the night which is hardest when the mind goes down those paths again and again.
@Bold: Yes, and that makes it even harder for Geet to forgive herself...
Beautifully written again. Falling for each facet of everyone shown here. The strength of Raya, you put character in that character which was just for fun in iOYSM. Raunaq though not fully revealed is her strength.
Raya is a very prominent character in this story while she did not get much time in IOYSM. I hope I will be able to justify her and Raunaq!
Thanks for updating.
Thanks, Avi! 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

Yayy!!! 😃

Waise Twinnie you're going to be a sizzler soon... nearing 10000... 👏


With the speed I'm going these days, probably a day or two will be all it will take to get there. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

Hi Twinnie 😃

Ek aur update aa raha hai kya??? It will be a bonus as there will be 2 updates to read... 😉



Yo Yo Yo!


Hi Doc

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