Wired Hearts (1) - Page 84

Originally posted by: mayyo

4 have done the job very well! 😳

The readers would have preferred all of them, though. 😆

Originally posted by: dqno1

Readers ya one particular reader?

Kuch SR ke liye bachayega na😳

not that I am writing that scene..😆

Originally posted by: mayyo

Readers in general. One particular reader would be happy without the SR scenes. 😆

Originally posted by: mayyo

Yeah right! You know how to twist the words! 😆

Chalo Avi, I better get some sleep. Good night! 🤗

Originally posted by: dqno1

GN Mari🤗 Teri twinnie ko padhne mein mazaa aayega😃

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

Honestly Kittu, I do knot know how I should reply to this comment of yours. Knowing that the chapter affected you so much is a whole different feeling altogether and I cannot express it in words.

"The opposite of love is not hate, it's indifference. The opposite of art is not ugliness, it's indifference. The opposite of faith is not heresy, it's indifference. And the opposite of life is not death, it's indifference."

"Death ends a life, not a relationship."

"Stupidity isn't punishable by death. If it was, there would be a hell of a population drop."

I cant help but im in this zone...where geet resides... is it easy to live life like that? nah..its not.. one can just imagine...or may feel a lil ...but living through to it..is all together different.

why did i start my comment with these quotes? coz U dint leave me with any choice...if i have to describe ..how i feel ..right this moment...either it will b an understatement..or i may not completely justify the emotion u evoked in me...

I really liked all three quotes because of the truth in them. The bold-ed parts are what touched me the most and I was wondering, can there actually be indifference to such a big thing as death? I know the quote says something else but it just led me to ponder over this. Thanks so much for sharing them!

I was listening to 4 songs..all through the chapter..and tell me how you would feel..

1.Kal ho na ho..heart beat instrumental.

2.Aye khuda from murder.

3.aashiqui instrumental

4.Tu ne jo na kaha...from newyork...

Marvelled ... the way you made me feel!! 👏 🤗

I'm flattered! And all these songs/rhythms just go down to the bone!

I was just beginning to think...what will be the next chapter... her meeting with him...

or any revelations...

Be it she hugging the frame or her memory (*or can i say the scar...which will never fade...but just gives pain...) that unpleasant moment...that dreadful evening ...everything is snatched...

and she blaming herself... one cannot understand that pain...until one actually gone through... how painful it is to be left alone...when ur most precious thing is lost... you cannot see them..feel them..embrace them... blame urself..scold urself..and wanted to kill urself...can it be more painful when u r the witness for loved ones suffering? *shudders*

@Bold: Very true! Some scars, or maybe we shouldn't even call them scars, they remain throbbing wounds, which never fade away...

"It was all my fault! I killed them!"

"Why didn't I die instead? Why did I survive?" It was a desperate question I had asked myself countless times since I gained consciousness after that accident.

I had lost count of many times it had woken me up in the middle of the night, and every time I woke up like this, I wished for my parents to be there with me, to tell me it was just a bad dream, to hug me and console me, to put me back to sleep by running fingers through my hair.

But the part which hurt the most was, it wasn't any nightmare. It was the truth of my life, the truth which I was responsible for, the harsh truth which had snatched my parents away from me and put them to eternal sleep.

@italic... 👏 i can't praise u enough mayyo...u just moved me..with just few lines...

nostalgia trip...in the middle of night..u just wake up..and wish...only wish that what ever happened was a night mare... a bad dream... but this conscious mind...reminds YOU ..what u did..and what actually happened...

Thank you, Kiitu! This part was the hardest for me to write.

As hard as I squeezed my eyes shut, I couldn't wipe away the picture playing in them.

how much ever we try...try hard..we cannot...or shall i say we dont want to..coz a part of us wanted to live in this hell...this punishment...

coming to this 2nd quote... it ended her two most dear relationships...but not the love...but alas...can she taste the love now?? except..live in the memories... love never dies... yet we cannot stop craving for loved ones presence!!!

@Bold: Well-said. We never stop craving for the physical presence of our loved ones even when they are ever-present in our memories and our hearts.

the convo...*sigh* *looks at the screen ...grimace...* it exactly happened with me...but with different context...i dint loose anyone... but i still blame myself for the hurt i caused..for each scar...every moment of my life..

You know what iss the worst punishment? its not loosing ur loved ones...its witnessing the loss and u living the life with guilt...which cannot be shared..nor taken off ur shoulders...

You are too good ...and way beyond awesome person!

Thank you once again!

@Bold: Exactly. There is a kind of guilt which can never lessen no matter how much people try to tell you otherwise...

I got off the bed and walked to the small balcony. It was close to the time that I usually woke up. It was dreams like these which had forced me to deduct my sleeping time to an extreme extent. But I had gotten used to it now. I had gotten used to staying up nights and moping in my grief in person, and then wear a mask of life on my face and be strong for my younger sister. It was what life was for me now.

i dint know that i wrote such a longg one...sorry for my rambles mayyo...

as i said earlier...i connect with geet... its like seeing my mirror image...my twin..and feeling the same pain...yet being happy too... ...how weird that sounds? Nah...but yeah..life itself is weird... a labyrinth... which will never solve until we rest...

@Bold: This line of yours gave me goose bumps! Could the perplexity of life be better explained in so few words? I really doubt it!

Ur words..and the songs ...have altogether different sensation...

Thanks for sharing it...

ohh no sorry for such stupid baseless comment!!!

Excuse me? I wouldn't call the comment stupid or baseless. You don't know but I was so tempted to highlight everything that I really liked in it and then realised I will end up highlighting the whole comment so I settled for a little less.

Thank YOU for being so perceptive and for sharing how you relate to the story!

3rd quote... is for the stupidity...

as our world is filled with two infinities... universe..and human stupidity... we hurt ourselves...kill ourselves... for the sin we committed...but thats the easiest way to wipe off the sin we did to our loved ones...

Yes, it is easier to punish ourselves than to face it and really live with it...
and as my comment is to end...i listen to "Toh phir aao..." here comes my memory...

PS:ignore my mishtakesss😆 😆 many grammatical errors...
Thank you so so much, Kittu! Your comment really made my efforts to go through the pain of writing this horrible chapter, worth it! 🤗

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Geet's parents died in an accident...and she is blaming herself for the accident...

I don't understand one thing is that if Geet is elder sister then why younger sister get married and elder one is still single...it is not that elder sister always has to marry first but from the prequel of this story it seems that Geet's family and Geet are some orthodox in nature so obviously her parents will want her to get married first...

very emotional update...

thanx for pm...

Originally posted by: mannu_minnie

😭poor geet.😒

BTW this song is my all time fav- jo bheji thi dua wo jaake aasma se yu takra gayi ki laut ke aa gayi sada.