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Inertia14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Love2read
Short but good update...

Thank you will try to increase the size of updates 😊

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Inertia14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: mmradhu
Fantastic update...

Thank you mmradhu 😊

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Inertia14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: crazydream

Beautiful updates.
Geet thinking how their lives have changed within a few moments.

Maan selling his grandfather watch. Geet shocked. How can he do that.

Going back to shop. Meeting Mr. Khurana.

Heated argument taking place. Sad that He can't understand his son.
Badmouthing Geet.

Tony is an angel in disguise. Refused to give to him. Instead giving back to Geet.

Wat will happen next???

Thank you sweets I am updating the next part soon

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Inertia14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi
oh god..how cruel maan father😡 can be...he use all the harsh word on geet...talking about love..if he really loved maan he should have accepted geet..as well ..grrr pls cont soon..

Thank you Hanishdevi

Maan's father is hurt and tht is why he has become so heartless

you will see in the coming parts the destruction that his wrath will bring on their married life

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Inertia14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: gurti30
awesome dear
maan dad asking geet about her love for maan if he loves his son why didnt he accept geet
wow tony is too good he didnt sell watch and gave it back to geet😊

Thank u gurti30 for commenting 😊

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Inertia14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: freya123
nice update

Thank u 😊

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Inertia14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Chapter-8

I looked at his retreating figure he looked so lonely without Maan I felt bad as I knew Maan and his father where not together because of me

I looked at Tony again mumbling a thank you and started towards my home.

I started taking steps towards our home happy in my heart that I got the watch of Maan's Grandfather back for him

Maan loved and I knew it as a part of me was happy that he loved me to an extent that he can sacrifice anything for me but then the other part was sad at the sacrifices that he had to make...a constant fight that goes inside his head and heart.

I looked at the building at the right of my hand it was our home my and Maan's

I looked at the window where he wass arranging freshly brought flowers I looked at him and his eyes that longed for me but before he could find me I ran away ahead hiding myself from his eyes that were searching for me.

I looked ahead at the way ahead that was empty without him without his steps tracing mine... without his words chasing mine emotions

I loved him as I loved the breaths of my life I looked at the sea ahead the place was isolated but had a haunting soothness attached to it

I settled there doing nothing but looking at the vast carpet of blue sea adorned by the reflection of sky...I looked at it and imagined myself being at its place the sea that reflected the love of my sky Maan...We were so different but still together we carried the reflections of our light and darkness together.

Inseparable I murmured as I realised I was all him as he was all me...eachothers reflection

I closed my eyes and let myself drift away in the world of my own bliss and hell.

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If hearts had beat I knew it today when I counted every beat of missing Geet since she has gone, I knew she was angry on me hiding the truth and selling my grandpa's watch the only souvenir that I had of his after his death.

But then she also didn't knew that it was my Grandpa only that told me once that Maan the day you love someone from your heart and look at your future with her then sell this time to buy her dreams. And I did the same I sold the time to buy our happiness of future.

But she didn't understands that she thinks that I am sacrificing for her but it is not for her it was for us for the we she and I make .

I looked at the time again it's been a long time since she has gone and I was getting worried for her.

I looked at the shawl that was lying on the chair in her hurry she didn't even wear anything warm when it was so cold outside.

I took the shawls in my hands and decided to go to Tony's myself to get her back, I ran at the roads in a hurry to reach Tony's as soon as possible.

Maan I heard Tony exclaim as he watched me entering his shop almost breathless, I looked around trying to catch a glimpse of Geet but she was not there anywhere.

Maan Tony asked again coming near to me and keeping a hand on my shoulder, I turned right away Tony was Geet here, where is she, she came here an hour ago she isn't back home yet Tony.

Maan maan Tony screamed calming me down with his affectionate voice, geet was here Maan she did came here

I looked at him finally somewhere great to know that she was here but then she left a long while ago from here , I looked at her being scared again... why has she not reached home then, I knew Geet will never go anywhere without telling me.

Maan Tony again screamed getting me out of my thoughts Tony did she say anything before leaving...No maan she didn't... I looked at him dejected and decided to go back and look for her

Maan I heard tony calling my name again as I reached to grab the handle of the shops door...your dad was here too

What I screamed... now clearly knowing that he might have said something to her to hurt her to break her...

Geet I murmured closing my eyes suddenly being desperate to see her...but where can she be

I looked at Tony who understood my pain...she wouldn't have gone far maan he murmured assuring me...I nodded my head understanding and rushed outside not even wasting another second.

I looked at every nook and corner for geet but couldn't find her anywhere I looked at the road ahead our house and that lead to the sand ahead I looked at the faded footsteps of someone somewhere knowing that it was mine geet's

I looked at the path ahead and started running senselessly towards the fading foot prints.

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crazydream

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Me first !!!

Will read n comment.

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crazydream

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Beautiful update

Geet hurt by Maan action. Spending some time alone.

Maan's POV was nice... He iss trying everything for their better life
Worried abt Geet missing. Frantically searching her.