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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: crazydream

Me first !!!

Will read n comment.

Thank you so very much for liking nd commenting 🤗



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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: crazydream



Beautiful update

Geet hurt by Maan action. Spending some time alone.

Maan's POV was nice... He iss trying everything for their better life
Worried abt Geet missing. Frantically searching her.


Thank you dear
the journey of their life has just begun
they have 2 fight it together or part away 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: mmradhu

Fantastic and lovely update... loved it very much...
Continue soon... take care


THANK YOU SWEETS
I REALLY APPRECIATE UR SUPPORT A LOT A BIG THANKS TO U :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Chapter-9

I looked at every nook and corner for geet but couldn't find her anywhere I looked at the road ahead our house and that lead to the sand ahead I looked at the faded footsteps of someone somewhere knowing that it was of geet's


I looked at the path ahead and started running senselessly towards the fading foot prints.


Geet I yelled not once or twice but I yelled her name with every passing breath away, she was everything my heart and my soul.


Geet I whispered tired and exhausted of her hiding and my seeking please love let me hold you in my arms let me sooth our aching hearts please.


I looked ahead hoping to trace her shadows through my thirsty eyes and there I found her lying so lifelessly near the sea the water just touching the edges of her fingers...

Geet I yelled again as I ran towards her scared

I grabbed her in my arms covering her cold body with my warmth.

Geet open your eyes my love I pleaded scared of the coldness in her body I kissed her face like a mad man warming her through my kisss and that is when I heard her shallow murmur Maan followed by her shallow breathing of her heart that soothed my worried heart.

I picked her in my arms and started walking towards our house it will be better for her inside I whispered to myself.

I looked at her face the redness of her cheeks returning back with my warmth she snuggled closer to me in her unconsciousness as I walked towards our home and I just smiled having my Geet back

I stepped inside the house with her in my arms and gently dropped her on our bed. Oh she looked so cute with that frown on her face that appeared with the missing of my warmth.

I looked at her again and smoothened her hairs that were entangled by the weary wind never do this again I murmured gently in her ears and heard her murmuring never in her sleep

I looked at her clothes that were little wet and were definitely not helping her cold body, I switched on the heater and the warmth embraced our room in seconds.

I gently rolled out Geet's shirt out of her body followed by her trousers all soaked in the sea water I looked at her body shining like white porcelain. And the tempt to touch her in all the wrong ways awakened in my heart.

My hands moved towards her bra that was hiding a part of her from my eyes a part that was as much as mine as it was hers.

I looked at her as I never seen her before though it had been just hours that seemed like days that has passed by since I made love to her.

Gently and slowly I peeled the last piece of the garment away from her body her feminine heaven that was only for me and gently pecked her there her moans ignited a raw fire in my heart but still I knew she needed just my warmth and loads of rest.

I withdrew myself and covered her in the blanket to keep her warm and walked outside the room to steady my heart.

I looked around at the mess that our house was in and decided to clean as much as I can before Geet wakes up

After 45 mins of rigorous clean up session in the home I looked at the speckles house of ours and breathed a sigh of relief, I walked inside to check on geet but she was still sleeping snuggling in the blanket.

I decided to lay by her side and slipped into the blanket to after discarding my sweaty cloths oh her warm body felt so nice.

My hands wrapped around her waist relishing the warmth from her naked body I kissed her gently caressing her gently through my hands.

Hoping the new day will bring no more storms. But before everything else I also needed to talk to the man who made my Geet so weak and guilty.

He has to stay away from us so that we can live peacefully together.


Thank you all of them who liked and commented

But please i request you all who read this atleast like the update and leave a comment for the story hlps me write

Edited by Inertia14 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
part 6 - 9
awesome updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
well written dear
pls contd
you can add more cute moments before u sep. them
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Marvelous and fabulous update... loved it very much
Finally maan find out geet... he really loves her lot... mr.khurrana loves his maan then why he is not accepting maaneet relation??? doesn't he want he live happily??? is status important than his son's happiness??? i want maaneet live with all happiness in front of mr.khurrana...waiting for next part... continue soon... take care
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Rocks.Dhara

awesome concept...loved it

THANK YOU 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

part 6 - 9
awesome updates

THANK YOU 😊

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