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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful dear
maan has left his luxurious life and his father for geet and geet is feeling guilty for tht
maan sold his watch to buy things for home
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful story...👏loved all the parts...❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ny one waiting for the update
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Chapter-7

I looked at the man standing right behind my back, I gasped as I realised it was Maan's father Mr Aryaman Khurrana with maan's watch in his hand.

I looked at him clearly pained with his hatred and wrath for me but I really didn't wanted him to misunderstand Maan's intention, dad I can explain its not Maan's fault

I flinched as he hissed loudly speaking in low whispers that had the power of tearing your heart apart

Don't you dare call me dad you filthy low standard girl

How dare you speak to me like that and how dare you sold this watch in this cheap shop.

I struggled to fight back with my tears as I tried to speak to him

Dad Maan... did it out of need it was a mistake it was for me

Shhh Geet don't you try to defend maan

Maannn that stupid son of mine firstly he falls in love with you which was utterly a grave mistake and then he marries you that to without telling me and without my permission. You think it is not much of a mistake Geet.

And now he is selling the only memory that he has of his Grandfather, my father for you for your happiness...What have you done to him geet

What spells have you used on his mind and brain, is it your sweet talk or is it your body that he lusts for

Dadd I almost screamed horrified at the amount of his hate

Please dad please I mumbled as he broke every bit of me don't I love Maan I really do

Oh really Geet then let's see how much you love him Geet huh I know that you are with him for his money and for his status geet so don't lie

If you would have loved him then you would have never taken him away from us from his home from his life.

Tell me Geet will you leave him if you love him

Tell me

No Geet no you cannot because you are selfish and greedy and a wh**e like you can only take and not give back

I looked at the man who was Maan's father the one whom I respected like my dad the one I admired but he hated me, hated me more than anything in this world because he believed I took his son away.

I don't have time for this anymore Please take the money for the watch

I looked at him and then at his hand that offered money Tony I looked at the numerous green bills that he offered to him

And then I looked at my hands that were almost empty except few notes to offer for this priceless thing

What pained me more was that Maan had so many memories attached to him but now he can't have it

I started walking out of Tony's dejectedly when I heard Tony's voice

Sorry sir this watch is not for sale

I turned back immediately perplexed at Tony's statement but before I could have said anything I heard Mr Khuranna's voice

What the hell...do you need more money then tell me but just give me the god damn watch

I looked at Tony as he replied firmly yet again I suppose you didn't hear me Mister the watch is not for sale

Really then what the hell is it for will you explain Mister Tony I heard Maan's father hiss in anger

It's a gift Mister to my daughter you see she got married tomorrow and I was not there for her so I thought I will gift her this

Oh Tony I whispered as I ran across and hugged him

Happy Married life Geet he said as he handed the watch in my hand and kissed my head as he blessed me

I looked at Maan's father again who was seething in anger

He gave me a disgusted look and mumbled few curses for me and left.

I looked at his retreating figure he looked so lonely without Maan I felt bad as I knew Maan and his father where not together because of me

I looked at Tony again mumbling a thank you and started towards my home.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful updates.
Geet thinking how their lives have changed within a few moments.

Maan selling his grandfather watch. Geet shocked. How can he do that.

Going back to shop. Meeting Mr. Khurana.

Heated argument taking place. Sad that He can't understand his son.
Badmouthing Geet.

Tony is an angel in disguise. Refused to give to him. Instead giving back to Geet.

Wat will happen next???

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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh god..how cruel maan father😡😡😡😡 can be...he use all the harsh word on geet...talking about love..if he really loved maan he should have accepted geet..as well ..grrr pls cont soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
awesome dear
maan dad asking geet about her love for maan if he loves his son why didnt he accept geet
wow tony is too good he didnt sell watch and gave it back to geet😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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