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Inertia14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Thank you I am glad you liked it

Originally posted by: mmradhu
Hot and passionate update...
Loved it so much...

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Inertia14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Thank you for liking and commenting
More love and passion to come

Originally posted by: goldenmoon
nice n passionate update
maan cant stop himself from loving her...

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Inertia14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Thank you

Originally posted by: humazuban
😳Beautiful update

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mmradhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Waiting for the update
Navratri orkut scraps, images

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nehakapoor7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

its Awesome.. howwt & passionate couple Maneet.. i love them so much

waiting for next part..

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Inertia14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Thank you :)
I am really glad you liked it

Originally posted by: nehakapoor7
its Awesome.. howwt & passionate couple Maneet.. i love them so much

waiting for next part..

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Inertia14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Hi mmradhu
Happy navaratri to you too
And a vwry happy dusshera too
I was lil held up in the office and the pujas but will pakka update it by either tonight or tomorrow mrng

Originally posted by: mmradhu
Waiting for update

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mmradhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Inertia14
Hi mmradhu
Happy navaratri to you too
And a vwry happy dusshera too
I was lil held up in the office and the pujas but will pakka update it by either tonight or tomorrow mrng

Ok I'll wait

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Inertia14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Chapter-6

Maan had gone out to get some breakfast and coffee

Our house was new and nothing was set in it for the moment except the bed that too was gifted by our friends

I looked at the naked walls imaging colouring them in the colour my and maan's happiness.

I smiled but then I realised that how expensive these little happiness are goanna be

I and Maan have invested all our savings in buying this house and nothing was now left with us.

I still remembered the worried look on Maan's face as he checked his wallet in the morning to get the food.

I hated it seeing my Maan so vulnerable he was the king the only heir of Khurrana empire but he left everything just for me

I felt a tear drop through my eyes how much have he lost to just have me in his life

I knew he loved his father and he can't stay without him but then he still didn't left me for him...my throat chocked just by thinking how he must have felt when his father must have asked him to choose between me and him

Geeet I heard Maan call my name as soon as he entered

I wiped my tears hurriedly before he sees it

Geet he called me again as he entered in the bedroom

I looked at him as he entered with numerous bags in his hand

I looked at his smiling face as he said see I shopped for home

I saw at the numerous packets stuffed with groceries vegetables I looked at the gas hob that laid on the kitchen slab

Where did you get the money for so many things I asked Maan as I suspected something was wrong here?

I had money Geet I had money saved

Really Maan I looked at him as he refused to meet my eyes

Ya Geet I had I mean I was working in Khurrana construction to and I had my savings

Don't lie Maan I snapped back I looked at him again intently suddenly realising his watch was missing from his hand

Maan I gasped knowing he has sold that to someone to buy these things

You sold your watch I asked in horror moving back step by step

Geet Maan screamed as he tried reaching me

I snapped his hands away, I hated myself he has to do these things for me

He has to sell all his happiness to keep me happy

No No No I screamed as my voices echoed in my head

Geet Jaan please he pleaded trying to sooth me

It was just a watch Geet just a watch

No Maan it was the watch that your grandfather gifted you, it was his last gift to you it was his blessings his love

I know how much it mattered to you I know I have seen you admiring that watch at your every victory as if you are sharing your victories with your dadaji

No you can't sell that watch it can't belong to someone else... I released myself from his arms and got ready somehow

Where did you sell it I asked Maan

Geet Jaan please

Where Maan

At Tonies huh I sighed it wasn't far away from home and I was hoping no one will come to buy a watch at such early hours

I rushed out of house as ignoring maan's words

I walked faster and almost ran till tonies

Tony I screamed as I entered the shop

He gave me a wide smile

Hey kid he called and hugged me what brings you here

Maan I almost whispered struggling for breath from all the running

Oh but he already left kid I heard tony say

I know tony I met him at home

I am here for Maan's watch he sold it to you I want it back

Ohh I heard tony say hmm

I have money tony please take whatever I have I will pay the rest soon

I looked at tony as he nodded bringing a huge smile on my face but the very next moment my smile was wiped of the face

But you can't have the watch back now

I looked at the man standing right behind my back, I gasped as I realised it was Maan's father Mr Aryaman Khurrana with maan's watch in his hand

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mmradhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Awesome update... loved it
Continue soon
Take care

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