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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
lovely update
maan's dad n his ego😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter-11

As he settled by my side I looked at his handsome face the lines of worry that refused to erase itself from his face

The way he checked the warmth of the soup again and again to make it apt for me or not
The way he made me settle in his arms comfortably and fed me the soup carefully
My handsome man I murmured in my heart completely touched by his love and care. My repentance knew no bound as it realised that sin that I committed even in my thoughts...how could I

I looked at Maan's still eyes that were looking at my face as if reading my mind and I pulled myself away from his arms and slumped on the bed crying again.

Geet I heard him whisper as he covered my body with the quilt, please don't tire yourself crying
I asked him gently do you hate me Maan hoping that he will say a no

But then I heard the door closing and him leaving the room without any answer and my heart just got scared and restless but I knew how much he might have suffered because of my worry
I hated myself for making him so sad and remorseful

I threw the quilt away and just shivered in cold I didn't liked the warmth that was not of his arms around me.

MAAN

Its been an hour or may be more since I walked outside the room

I remembered how fragile she looked while asking me did I still love her and though I wanted to smile at her silly question and kiss her head and remove her insecurities at that time but my wrath decided against it

I wanted her to suffer as I did; I wanted her to feel the insecurity that my heartfelt thinking that she left me

But then while it pained her I died in her every moment of pain little more than her I knew she was inside still crying and missing me and I just wanted to hold her tight and do nothing but cure her with my love

I looked at the clock that just mocked on our stupidness We were so near and yet so far and all because of our anger and egos

I needed to be with her I decided without wasting another second and headed towards our room
Only to find her scrunched on the floor wrapped in the thin sheet all cold

Geet I yelled but then she didn't move a bit

I picked her up immediately and put her in the bed covering her from the quilt
And that is when I heard her Maan please don't leave me
No no I won't I whispered kissing her again and felt her embracing me
Promise me Maan you won't leave me again please it breaks me hate me get angry hit me but please don't leave me

I won't Geet but then even you won't do something these ways promise me; it killed me you know when I didn't found you anywhere

I am sorry Maan I am so sorry

I thought it is because of me you are away from your father between so much troubles and struggles

And so I just ran away but then I couldn't go far from you Maan I am so sorry I love you I just love you and I want to see you happy

Shh Shh baby it is ok please don't cry it's ok but don't think such ways again
Look at me love your Maan is nothing without you and next time if you think these ways then just know one thing your Maan will die without you

I am nothing without you

Oh Maan I am sorry I am sorry

I looked at her lips that kept on repeating the apology and I could do nothing except kissing her senselessly to not make her speak more

We kissed for a long moment the slow sensual movement of her lips slowly turning into just touches and then I felt her snuggling in my arms Slowly tiring her to sleep I settled beside her just to be assured of her normal breathing to delve into deep slumber.

Because I knew that it was the time when I have to tell someone to keep himself away from our life

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I needed to talk to dad.
It was dad I knew it the moment I heard the screeching sounds of tire.
I knew it came as a shock to him when I called him few minutes ago, saying that I wanted to meet him.

😊So less likes and comments
I am disappointed
should i stop stop this story😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Just read all the updates.
Nice emotional ones.
How beautifully they feel for each other.
Hope Maan father changes his attitude.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Hello people
Just wanted to wish u all a happy new year
:) I know I am little late but I was held up in some wedding and all
Hope u all had fun and pray that this year brings best if everything in your life.

Love ya all
Inertia
😊

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