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Running away from you


It still feels like a dream the touch of her breaths the hold of her hands and the beats of her heart that was all in sync with me and my life. I love this woman who now belongs to me and is mine till the eternity. I still can hear the holy vows of our marriage in my ears the promises of our togetherness beyond the realms of time the promise of belonging to one another.

Our love never needed words but then sealing it with the promises of life time made it even more special. I looked at her tired self she slept the moment we entered the bed though I wanted to mark her soul with the imprints of my love throughout the night but even seeing her sleeping with so much peace in my arms made this night priceless. My heart swelled with joy just thinking that there are many more nights and days that will pass by in this ecstasy of our togetherness forever.

I pulled her closer caressing her skin through my feathery touches making her lips curve into smile. Love you Geet I murmured on her forehead and kissed her, love you more Maan she murmured back even in her drowsy state of sleep.

The rays of sunlight touched the doors of our day and I fluttered my eyes open trying to adjust my view, I tried getting up but I was sealed in the warmth of my Maan's embrace. I looked at the peaceful face of my love my life my Maan thanking god for giving me him in my life. I looked at him still dressed in his wedding suit he looked handsome but what is he doing in the suit till now I looked at myself wrapped in his arms still in the bridal lehenga and then it dawned to me how I slept last night.

Oh my god I gasped I slept on our wedding night without even caring for him, tears filled in my eyes realising how I spoiled our first wedding night.

Forgive me maan I murmured and placed a kiss on his heart my tears poured down too I felt so ashamed how many hopes and dreams one has of his first night and I spoilt it up for us. I sniffed little more which made him aware of my state Geet he whispered slowly opening his eyes sensing my restlessness.

He looked at me so worried what happened Geet did I hurt you he looked checking me through his eyes.

Ahuh I murmured still struggling to muffle my cries

I hurt you Maan

What?

I spoiled our wedding night...

Really Geet how?

I slept Maan I slept on our wedding night.

Ohh Geet you scared me he mumbled pulling me in his embrace

You didn't spoil it love I enjoyed every bit of it

But Maan I was sleeping

Yes Geet you were sleeping...you were sleeping in my arms like you belonged there your breaths were touching my heart and your silent murmurs in your sleep was mingling with my heartbeats I loved every bit of it Jaan

I loved the feel of you in my arms

I looked at the Maan who so easily made me realise what I am for him who made me feel just proud of my existence.

I love you Maan I whispered and hugged him immediately...I love you too jaan he whispered back

And waise bhi Geet my hands traced every bit of you

Maaan I whacked him on his arms

Waise Geet you should make up a bit since we have already missed on the night let's make use of the day.

Maaan I moaned as I felt his lips tasting the skin of my neck.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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INDEX

Chapter-2-Page 1
Chapter4- Page 5
Chapter5- Page 6
Chapter6-Page8
Edited by Inertia14 - 11 years ago
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Congratulations
Lovely start... loved it
Well written
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Chapter-2
I heard her moan my name as I kissed her neck and my thirst taste her more increased.
My lips gently landed on hers pecking her soft feathers
I wanted to worship her through my body and soul I parted her lips and delved in her mouth tasting her as heaven tasted the souls.
I looked at her dishevelled self lost in my love basking in the passion of my touches. Geeet I whispered in her ears nipping her ear lobe earning another throaty moan from her...I want to see you as no one has ever seen before
Maan I heard her again as she embraced me tight with shyness, help me love I murmured muzzling her neck I need you Geet like I have never needed anyone before
I felt her heartbeat rise making me aware of her state
I am all yours Maan I heard her say holding my hands in her shivering hands, she guided my hands to the hooks of her dress and I unfastened them steadily
She dropped her hands as I laid her down on the bed and lowered the silken robe to bare her
I touched her shoulders tracing the thin line of her shoulder blades I lowered my mouth to taste her heavenly breasts
I heard her moan my name again and again grasping my head she showed me how she loved my feel
I sucked her again and again making her whimper and moan at the same time I moved down towards the silken folds of her heaven
My lips traced every inch of her body and my tongue danced with every heat of her veins
I felt her fingers struggling through the buttons of my shirt and I gladly let her break them all I kissed her lips again as I felt her hands touching me everywhere.
As our skins touched each other igniting another fire in my soul I ripped of her rest of dress mercilessly
I moved towards the only one destination heavens of her femininity, as my lips touched the forbidden parts of her soul bared only for my touch and eyes.
She moaned in ecstasy with every swift moment of my tongues
Maan she murmured as she collapsed with the rippling effects of my love
I kissed her again moving my lips as chanting the verses of love
I looked at her eyes as I finally made her mine her femininity embraced my hardened self moving towards the ecstasy of our love.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update... loved it very much
Continue soon
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the title has me very curious!!! Chapters one and two seem like the 'calm before the storm'???
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why this name for the story?

who is running away from whom?

continue..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It indeed is the calm before the storm

Originally posted by: 4ever4love

the title has me very curious!!! Chapters one and two seem like the 'calm before the storm'???

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Posted: 11 years ago
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you will know soon
in few updates you will know y this name suited the story

Originally posted by: Love2read

why this name for the story?

who is running away from whom?

continue..

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Thank you everyone for liking and commenting on the post please keep on supporting me in the same way

Love you all
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Next part to be updated in another 10 mins
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